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You did it again, you made me cry again. I knew it was going to lead to Gabe being able to give a solution to the sanctuary’s problems, because well that had been the pattern of all these short stories, but I didn’t expect the reunion part. It was so heartwarming and wonderful.

If there is one thing I dislike about this story, it is that its chapters are awfully short. I want to thank Andreas for agreeing with me that Peter has the larger share of the blame regarding the fall out. It seems to me that The Fates are definitely getting involved in Tristan and Peter’s relationship, and they are working extra hard to pull these two back together. First the prize from the toy store and the Santa hat that led to Big T and Small T meeting, and then the photo that got featured on the local newspaper that led Peter back to Tristan, and now the scarfs and the Captain Whatever toy. None of these are coincidences, this is a carefully weaved plan by some divine power. I’ll be eagerly waiting for the conclusion on next Wednesday.

So Gabe’s physical appearance changes every chapter. Interesting. No one would ever be able to track him or corroborate their stories about him haha. I am guessing this guy is actually Santa, but I won’t be surprised if in the end this person turns out to be Oprah or Ellen under a disguise. Lol jks.

“I can’t wait for this shitshow of a year to be over with.” Same, Simon, same.

When Gabe said Kater made a friend I was expecting another cat haha. As a person who had a string of shitty ex boyfriends, I would choose a cat and a puppy over those dicks (and their tiny dicks) any day.

I hate that you made me cry! I have a soft spot for grandmas because of my grandma, who is one of the people who raised me as a kid when my mom went AWOL for a while. Edith’s condition and situation really made me sad, and while this is a work of fiction, the truth is there are lots of elderly people who are struggling to live due to old age and the lack of people who will assist them with their needs. Oh my god tears are streaming down my cheeks as I write this, I hate you for this lol kidding. I want to know who or what Gabe is tho. He is definitely supernatural.

I sighed deeply after reading because this is so frustrating, they are both frustrating! They both screwed up but Peter is the most at fault here. He spun this intricate lie and got people involved except for the very person who needed to be aware of the truth. I kept rolling my eyes while Peter explained what truly conspired. While I believe it’s the truth, I can’t help but yell bullshit at Peter in my head. However, I wish Tristan would stop running away. For a smart person, he is making a lot of dumb decisions. I understand that the first time is him being irrational because he is hurt, but this time around he now knows of the truth, yet he still chooses to leave? I suggest he turn back around, get a refund for that train ticket if possible, and spend more time with Peter before making a final decision. One thing I learned from life is to never ever make decisions while you’re mad or hurt, because those decisions are usually the ones you will regret the most after.

Oh wow. Wow. That is some good writing. I don’t know how I missed this! I was about to read a different series of yours that I haven’t read yet when I saw this story. I enjoy dark and slightly disturbing stories and if I become a writer myself this is the type of stories that I will write. It’s haunting and it’s mysterious, and this to me feels like a mix of The Omen and the Hitchcock film, The Birds.

It was creepy, it was scary, it was bittersweet. I love it so much! I want to believe in reincarnations, because I want to be reborn as a cat, or a dolphin. I don’t want to be a human being again in my next life. My mom had a strange encounter with a random old lady while she was waiting for her ride home. This happened many years ago, I wasn’t even born yet I think. Old lady approached my mom and told her that she was a warrior princess in her past life, and all the misfortunes she had been experiencing in her current lifetime was punishment for murdering many people when she was this bloodthirsty royalty. My mom was totally freaked out because it was so random, and the old lady just left her standing there like she hadn’t been telling my mom some weird shit. But yeah for all we know old lady probably was cuckoo, but it still was a memorable and extremely weird experience for my mom.

“This is a bad place. I hated it here.” He was silent for a few seconds before blurting out, “Here! Stop here! By that tree! This is where I died!” Me who was reading this in my windowless bedroom with the lights off: Nope nope nope nope nope... Seriously that line creeped me out so much.

I usually stay away from romantic stories with teens as the lead characters because I’m prehistoric, so yeah I’m too old and impatient to read the point of view of whiney and dramatic hormonal teenagers. However, I can’t deny that this is so well written, so I might give this a shot.

I was about to go to sleep but when I saw that a new chapter was up I immediately sat up in my bed to read. I don’t mind losing a few minutes off my beauty sleep since it was for my current addiction: this series, so yeah it was worth it. I wish this was longer, and I wish it didn’t end in a bit of a cliffhanger. I have to wait for one more week to find out about Peter’s side of things. This story is so good and engaging, but the anticipation is driving me insane! Haha. I commend Tristan for giving Peter a chance to explain, because honestly if I were in Tristan’s place I would have ran the opposite direction and disappeared for a second time. It’s not that I’m a coward, but sometimes it’s better not to know, you know? But Tristan, he definitely needs this talk, so he can finally move on from the past. I’m not sure I want to root for a Peter-Tristan happily ever after, I will make that decision when I read the next few chapters.

Oh yeah I totally forgot the first time jump from the first chapter, thank you for reminding me! So there is a possibility of Tristan and Peter meeting up again next chapter.

Yeah this Peter guy is a contradicting and confusing mess, but I am really interested to know his side of the story.

I reread the first chapter and saw this. I wonder if this was the same blue scarf little Tristan was wearing at the mall. 🤔

I agree with the speculations of the other readers, Little Tristan is most likely Peter’s son. Big Tristan disappeared from Peter’s life five years ago, it takes less than a year for a woman to carry a child, and coincidentally Little Tristan is a four year old boy, so somehow the math adds up. However the description of this story said that the eventual meeting between Tristan and Peter happens six years after Tristan found out Peter’s betrayal, so Little Tristan’s wish will be granted only after another year.

Santa/Tristan, if you could read this, I wish it was Wednesday everyday.

Oooh trouble in paradise, or in this case, Hogwarts. I don’t like the strange behavior Philkin’s boyfriend is exhibiting, but it seems like a lot of guys have their eyes set for Philkin here. If the weird acting boyfriend breaks up with him in the next few chapters I suggest he just go and bang the hot Gryffindor boy instead.

As a Slytherin 🐍 I disapprove. Jk lol. This was a good start, a little short though, but I’m curious to know what would happen next.

Lol it’s alright, don’t mind me I was just being overdramatic. I’m really excited to know what happens next. Can’t wait 😊

Oh, I didn’t realize this was gonna be a series. I thought this was a one part story lol. Damn, now I’m interested to know what Peter’s deal is. He acts like he is genuinely surprised that Tristan left him. He is a fucking prick for betraying Tristan but there is definitely more to this.

This sucked. Not the writing, just the whole cheating thing. Fucking gave me war flashbacks.

The sixty-nine scene was hot but Tobyn almost ruined it. Death and dying in general were not great after-sex topics, what the hell was he thinking? Lol.

I have an important question. Did Tobyn at least wash his mouth before spitting on Kellar’s mouth? Before kissing him? Because from what I remember Tobyn did take a large chunk out of the hunter’s neck and it’s disgusting to think they are kissy kissy lovey lovey in the woods without him brushing his teeth first lol.

This is probably my last chapter for the night and I’m glad I will be stopping at a chapter where Kellar and Tobyn kiss and made up, literally lol. So our heroes might have just started a joining by accident. It will be interesting to see these two give in to the bond between them. Hopefully a sex scene soon!!! Jks.