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Yup , definitely adding up the tension and pressure Mr Arbour. Nice christmassy last chapter words......... Thanks for your present is a great one!
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Had a patient once who had this condition. A tidbit of information that is not that important but it sticks in your memory for the rest of your life. Learned me not to jump to conclusions too fast. ( First thought was why didn't he shower for the exam? But luckily he told it straight away)
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Stalker with trimethylaminury perhaps? hence his body odour.
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During George his temporary absence, (Hope you are fully recovered Mark!.) on YouTube Nelson's 3D battles like the battle of the Nile and for those who are willing and interested on Twitter Heart of oak @HMWarships about building ships in Nelson's time including those damned dockyards 😜
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Grief has different levels. Funny that you act differently on each level. The deeper ones make you react more animalistic. Great chapter!
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Well Stef and JP blissful unknowingly fucked their own grandson, so Stef isn't the only horny one.... JP hides it better nowadays.😉
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Carmella as a person has proven her worth in her advice to George, but is also a foe of great importance to Caroline if she tries to be nasty...... She is loved by the King and therefore her opinion is worth something in the ton.
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Double posted, sorry!
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I just realised after reading this for the 'th time that Donegal and Treadway are now on the same ship. The murderer Treadway searches. What happened to Donegal?
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It's a sad occasion ( and I know that is a huge understatement, guess we all know exactly what we were doing when we heard the news first in total disbelief, I turned the radio in my car angrily off , thought it was a very stupid copy of the original" War of the worlds " broadcast. ) to commemorate, but a worthy chapter to do so. Thanks, hope everything works out fine for Amelia and Francis!
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Wade is back 💕, my weekend couldn't start better.... and ooh yes it is a great chapter. Think Scott did meet his match.
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Very recognisable, sometimes same configuration here. And because English is not my mother tongue sometimes searching for the meaning of a word. The extra grammar is a bonus.😉
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The rigged wash deck pump, is it anything similar to these pumps? All of a sudden I realised I had no clue how they looked like.e all the different pumps.
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Let's agree to disagree. I can see your point but I totally have another one. If there was someone who had JJ's back it was Will. JJ knows very well were Will 's vulnerable spot lays, (his love for family) and sticks a knife in it and turns it round and round. Even if your mentally challenged and life gave you another pile of shit on your plate there are boundaries. But well done @Mark Arbour for this chapter, love the way you are giving our coming weekend a deathblow with the cherry on top of this shit show : "Jack is becoming a father again....... " All our reactions and views shows how hooked we are with this family. So sit back and enjoy the mayhem you have caused 😁.
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Well every couple of years I reread it and I (re) discover something new every time. Now taking the time to read the comments and who makes them, it's great. HMS Randy for example 😁.
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Great chapter, first JJ acting supportive even with a mirror rehearsal first. Only one time genuine concerned and content because I think he realises that his influence over Kris has mounted. Kris on the other hand sees his granite foundation under his feet being washed away and replaced by at the best some clay. He realises he is a joke on the royalty department. I think that's a blow that takes a while to recover from. Wonder how JJ is gonna reign him in during that period. Guess the JJ correcting, confident Kris is blown out of the window. Even if they cover it up, he knows he's not the real deal...
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Why am I having a deja vu??😉
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California, Here We Come.
chris571 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in California, Here We Come.
Silence before the storm, great😉- 31 comments
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Damn what a beautiful intriguing U turn in the perfect Kris JJ romance. Bit of a road side bomb. You first lure us in with the importance of the princedom for Kris and JJ seemingly casually dropped here and there in the chapters, and now "BOOM". Love the Claire plan, hope it will work for both Claire and Luke and will let Jack get back to earth. Success in your family matters, hope it goes right. But know this, we can wait, it's worth it. You always proved that. Big hug and thanks for this awesome chapter.
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I don't believe the genome story for one bit. There has been and will be a continuous mix up of DNA and spontaneous mutations of it. So to condemn Italy to a country of losers is not my cup of tea and I say that in the strongest eufamistic term I could think of. The reasoning reminds me of dark regimes past.
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St. Vincent and the Letter
chris571 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in St. Vincent and the Letter
At last there is something brewing in these days of paradise for George and Francis 😉 great chapter. Love the way they learn how to work with eachothers psyches to get through to eachother without the drama. They are indeed maturing. Will be interesting to see Francis court shipping Amelia and George the virgin opera singer...... Hope that St Vincent will see the thuthfullness in the message George gave him. Maybe a French attempt to hostage the King will turn things around🤔.- 44 comments
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Maybe Charles Fitzroy will be the knight in shining armour who rescues Francis from his unwanted admirer. Fingers crossed...
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Well Stef in business mode is also a force to reckon even for Brad and Darius when challenged I guess also. But I can't remember a fight between Brad and Darius on that level. Matt I don't know, I'll guess Brad will have the upper hand. But maybe we will see that in the nearby future?😉
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The level that is acquired to let Brad see reason when he is in power mode, is not within the reach of JJ. He can do the drama level but above that his mind goes on tilt. So he's not on an equal playing field with Brad at any given point in an heated argument situation, I think 🤔
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Well JJ has been empathetic before, the house he bought for Carullo for example. And dealing with all the shit and abuse he went through with a borderline mind, I think he's doing fine. Luctor et emergo to throw in a really dutch saying😉. I hope they really bond well Kris and JJ. Great chapter!
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