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Very recognisable, brings back memories, our dog was as old as I was. We got him when I was a toddler. He reached the very old age of 19 for a dog, then had to be put to sleep because he had cancer. We buried him at home under the apple tree in the meddow, were he usually sat holding the fort . Nearest farm was a mile away, but one can hope and bark😉.Only cried for a day or two, still hope that if there's something more, I will see him again.
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Jake gets an offer he barely can refuse and gets him out of the way and a charity is supposed to be a sham. What's cooking here🔍?? Great cliff hanger.
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A very hot and promising start, curious to see how this developed. Love both men already.
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Well nobody's perfect, I think Brad has some issues but he would die happily protecting his family and loved ones. How can u not like that? Don't forget the treatment he endured when he was a kid and rejected by his mother. Something completely different, I like the way the comments of everybody on chapter 29 had a small piece of the puzzle right
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Yep, somebody is pulling strings. Great chapter! Early weekend bonus 😁
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Would be maddening for JP after losing Jeff and Billy .....
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This chapter was the equivalent to throwing a nuclear bomb, still sitting open mouthed 😳 Don't think it has to do with 9/11 , Brad worked his way through that in his trance like talk with Robbie. Nope must have been something Jake did, but what???🧐
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I would add "righteous with a strong need for freedom" to that
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My pulsrate went up when I saw that there were 18 notifications, maybe another chapter before Easter........and yes!! it was, and what a chapter it is. Command of the Calliope. I can't wait till he turns that ship around, to the happy ships he creates. Hopefully he cures himself along in doing so. Thanks Mark for another chapter worth waiting for.
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Chapter 45: Final Chapter
chris571 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 45: Final Chapter
Yup Mark, even after 3 times rereading flux now ,this chapter still gives me a Christmas Day feeling! Thanks for all the work u put into it. Great escape from sometimes shitty days last year and a reminder what grief can do to somebodies foundations. Glad they found their way back😊 -
Yup brought some tears in my eyes, the feelings of loosing and making the sum of somebody's life and the impact that person had on you are so familiar. Great chapter and last lines almost a painting in words
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Loved the team work, professionally and in their free time. Maybe some detective work for them in a foreign branche of King? Love the plot lines tallguy! They both deserve happiness
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Mark, a big thanks for all u do. George has been a great distraction , a place to come home to. Reread the series now a couple of times, my favorite series competing with the Dune novels. Big hug, thanks Chris
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