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The rigged wash deck pump, is it anything similar to these pumps? All of a sudden I realised I had no clue how they looked like.e all the different pumps.
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Let's agree to disagree. I can see your point but I totally have another one. If there was someone who had JJ's back it was Will. JJ knows very well were Will 's vulnerable spot lays, (his love for family) and sticks a knife in it and turns it round and round. Even if your mentally challenged and life gave you another pile of shit on your plate there are boundaries. But well done @Mark Arbour for this chapter, love the way you are giving our coming weekend a deathblow with the cherry on top of this shit show : "Jack is becoming a father again....... " All our reactions and views shows how hooked we are with this family. So sit back and enjoy the mayhem you have caused 😁.
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Well every couple of years I reread it and I (re) discover something new every time. Now taking the time to read the comments and who makes them, it's great. HMS Randy for example 😁.
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Great chapter, first JJ acting supportive even with a mirror rehearsal first. Only one time genuine concerned and content because I think he realises that his influence over Kris has mounted. Kris on the other hand sees his granite foundation under his feet being washed away and replaced by at the best some clay. He realises he is a joke on the royalty department. I think that's a blow that takes a while to recover from. Wonder how JJ is gonna reign him in during that period. Guess the JJ correcting, confident Kris is blown out of the window. Even if they cover it up, he knows he's not the real deal...
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Why am I having a deja vu??😉
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California, Here We Come.
chris571 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in California, Here We Come.
Silence before the storm, great😉- 31 comments
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Damn what a beautiful intriguing U turn in the perfect Kris JJ romance. Bit of a road side bomb. You first lure us in with the importance of the princedom for Kris and JJ seemingly casually dropped here and there in the chapters, and now "BOOM". Love the Claire plan, hope it will work for both Claire and Luke and will let Jack get back to earth. Success in your family matters, hope it goes right. But know this, we can wait, it's worth it. You always proved that. Big hug and thanks for this awesome chapter.
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I don't believe the genome story for one bit. There has been and will be a continuous mix up of DNA and spontaneous mutations of it. So to condemn Italy to a country of losers is not my cup of tea and I say that in the strongest eufamistic term I could think of. The reasoning reminds me of dark regimes past.
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St. Vincent and the Letter
chris571 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in St. Vincent and the Letter
At last there is something brewing in these days of paradise for George and Francis 😉 great chapter. Love the way they learn how to work with eachothers psyches to get through to eachother without the drama. They are indeed maturing. Will be interesting to see Francis court shipping Amelia and George the virgin opera singer...... Hope that St Vincent will see the thuthfullness in the message George gave him. Maybe a French attempt to hostage the King will turn things around🤔.- 44 comments
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Maybe Charles Fitzroy will be the knight in shining armour who rescues Francis from his unwanted admirer. Fingers crossed...
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Well Stef in business mode is also a force to reckon even for Brad and Darius when challenged I guess also. But I can't remember a fight between Brad and Darius on that level. Matt I don't know, I'll guess Brad will have the upper hand. But maybe we will see that in the nearby future?😉
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The level that is acquired to let Brad see reason when he is in power mode, is not within the reach of JJ. He can do the drama level but above that his mind goes on tilt. So he's not on an equal playing field with Brad at any given point in an heated argument situation, I think 🤔
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Well JJ has been empathetic before, the house he bought for Carullo for example. And dealing with all the shit and abuse he went through with a borderline mind, I think he's doing fine. Luctor et emergo to throw in a really dutch saying😉. I hope they really bond well Kris and JJ. Great chapter!
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Well it's one hell of a ride, starts with an unconventional confession scene, were you can almost taste and smell what Adam is experiencing at the end. An abrupt change of the mood in the next part and a very intriguing ending......... Promises, promises for what's coming next, I hope. Great start!
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Your mid is absolutely correct, he is in his mid twenties 25 . He was 15 in okt 1791.
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Everyone has a different Zach or Travis or Will in his head and not one is an exact replica to the one in Mark's head. That's why the book is always better than the film....
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Happy Christmas Robert and fellow readers, love the way the relationships are building up. Mmm jockstrap, something looking forward too 😉.
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Great chapter, good for Jake, revenge in the nick of time. Now the circus starts. My money is on Miranda......
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Well a couple of chapters ago Mark said" next story" when I asked if there was an infusion of Wade and Matt into this story. I have a weak spot for Wade😉. Maybe Curtis is going to be Elizabeth Danfields personal vallet as a punishment ... just a suggestion.
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Well, what about the trust for Jake, I keep wondering if there is a surprise hidden in that.... Maybe something that will help in the ripping and pissing part?
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Chapter 81: Final Chapter
chris571 commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in Chapter 81: Final Chapter
Thanks for this epic book, George had quite the ride and came out stronger. The ride with his mother did a lot to explain the Bridgemont family dynamics and the hidden message from lady Kendal. The hidden message from Francis was very loud and hopefully enough for George to squelch his anguish about the depth of love Francis has for him. ( As Winkler says George is at his happiest when he is with Francis) Can't wait for another book , so maybe you can start dillydallying a bit with Will and Travis and give our beloved sailor boy priority? Have a great Sunday y'all.- 57 comments
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How graceful of you to let someone else shine, I salute you and hope you have a great weekend. Thanks Mark for the start of it. Intriguing as always, but I guess we see a "I have told you so , it's not Jake" comment in the foreseeable future.
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Wanna be first again? 😉
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Don't wanna spoil too much of a great story, but be ready for many didn't see that one coming plot turn moments. And it only builds up. So start reading , the proof of the pudding is in the eating, I am confident you'll love it.
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Damn you sure know how to build up a story, with all the u turns in it!. Thanks, can't wait for part two. It's one roller coaster ride, with many what the fuck ? moments in it. Love auntie by the way 😉
