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Just follow the sign of the dancing bears... I loved it. 🤣 So now IT has a name. Baal... I don't know if Odin still answers prayers, but personally, I pray we do not have to wait long for the next chapter!
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And so... the plot thickens! Can't wait to find out what happens to the C-17. If it has to fly any lower, will it be inside the range of IT (whatever it may be)? As for the lions... Why on earth would all the kings, soldiers, subjects, etc. of Kintu put up with him? I get that everyone is afraid of him, but still... He makes life unbearable for other, so what has anyone got to lose? At any rate: Nasty piece of work, that one!!
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The Palace and the Parlor Tricks
Salerion commented on Grumpy Bear's story chapter in The Palace and the Parlor Tricks
True. Remember the Narcissist's Prayer... That didn't happen. And if it did, it wasn't that bad. And if it was, that's not a big deal. And if it is, that's not my fault. And if it was, I didn't mean it. And if I did, you deserved it. -
Anyone else rooting for Tau and Chikondi ending up free and mates and outside of the reach of the weirdo emperor and his wife? Btw., how *did* she know before the generals about the bears' arrival? Hm...
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Lovely chapter. And sad but beautiful farewell scene. 🥰 I nearly lost it with Ethan and Aidan talking about too much drama going on with the ginger from UK and his mate... And I agree. WAY too much drama. 🤣
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If anyone else is interested what the guy belonging in that jockstrap looked like back in the day, there is a picture in this article: https://stuffnobodycaresabout.com/2020/08/19/nolan-ryan-sets-a-record-striking-out-383-batters-in-a-year/
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Thank you @Al Norris! 😊
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My first thought was: What a gay Criminal Minds episode that would be. Your husband could feature either as the 'perp' being exposed through his trophy collection OR as the 'expert/connoisseur' on jockstraps giving the team the essential clue / jockstrap knowledge based on his in-depth expertise (probably bordering on the arcane).
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Some well-deserved break and relaxation. Perhaps the calm before a storm? - I am sure there will be more action coming Trevor's way. Good to see the three include Seth. Nice chapter!
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So, essentially, young gay men in rural communities might be rarer beasts than lycans... Duly noted. 😃
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In addition to having good friends who stand by and support him, Seth really deserves finding himself a boyfriend! 🙂 By the way, there are a couple of other things I would love to or can see happening: Randy embraces his inner wolf and gets turned Trevor finds a mate A certain family get what they deserve So will Cassidy Maybe we will see more of Trevor's leadership skills - I actually think he'd make a good alpha some day.
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Unfortunately, that is true. It is the other way around really, if someone is capable of de-humanizing their own brother, I would put nothing past that person.
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Far from it! Sodom and Gomorrah would - to my mind - include an all out "anything goes" attitude that would see me running for my life... I don't think it'd be a match with regards to pure aesthetics either, which is the picture the chapter left me with: beautiful nature, friends being together outdoors, cameradery, etc. And then picture these friends as handsome and hairy hot hunks... Heaven! 🙂
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Funnily enough, that is the dress code / what angels look like in my kind of heaven, too. 😉 Great chapter!!
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I am quite sure if you look closely, there are "McKinneys" in every family. 😇
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I know it is the perfect spot for the chapter break, but in a way that is exactly why I am complaining. Not about the author or the story but about being made to wait, which I loathe. 😁
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I can soo understand Randy needing some time to himself after that revelation, but you just had to go and make it the cliffy for this chapter? I just hope the next chapter will be there soon!! 🙂
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They would be the perfect people to frame for something, though. But perhaps it was them and they really are becoming desperate and start fighting really dirty.
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Keeping my fingers crossed that Thad is gonna make it. 😟
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I beat her to it, just once. And I have no idea how I managed that because since then, literally, every time I get my notification that a new chapter is out, there it already is, a first comment by magical @Mrsgnomie...
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Chapter 36: Mischievous Mind
Salerion commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 36: Mischievous Mind
I am unsure how you go from reading the criticism to saying you cannot write lengthy novels? Because that is just not true! As far as I could make out, people (myself included) where not happy with your choice of an ending, but no one was unhappy with your writing as such! I read most of your stories here and I liked them a lot. Good characters, interesting and fun ideas and settings, etc. It's all there!- 66 comments
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Chapter 36: Mischievous Mind
Salerion commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 36: Mischievous Mind
If this is indeed the end, I am rather unhappy. It resolves some things at extremely high cost while rendering much of the story so far obsolete. All Vincent's training, etc. To me this feels like one of the many possibilities Terik contemplated and had to throw away for not being quite right. No green light on this tablet...- 66 comments
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Chapter 35: Deadly Decision
Salerion commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 35: Deadly Decision
Well, I doubt it was the thing with the reincarnation-as-chicken or the line about a god of therapy, so I guess it is going to be this: I take that as meaning it is NOT one of the 'ideal' endings. So (at least) one of the things she listed as being part of the ideal ending is going to be different. I doubt you'll let everything end in complete mayhem, though.- 78 comments
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Chapter 35: Deadly Decision
Salerion commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 35: Deadly Decision
Well, I suppose he'll have the marks of all 7 in his wolf form. And if there is such a thing as divine affinity, he just might have it after all is said and done. The line about gods being created when Vincent and Dinbe chatted, though, as well as the thing about Vincent being Teriks apprentice, has me wondering if there is a (demi-)god in the making. Maybe there *is* need for a God of "Getting Shit Done", you know?- 78 comments
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Chapter 35: Deadly Decision
Salerion commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 35: Deadly Decision
Having nibbled and gnawed away at them after the last cliffhangers, there is hardly anything left to hang by with. 😉- 78 comments
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