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  1. Doha

    Chapter 47

    Karl is feeling Jorgen's disappearance so badly. They were dear freinds and Jorgen was a strength to Karl. I do hope that he is OK. I cant help but feel Jorgen is a better match for Karl than George.
  2. Doha

    The Game

    All your stories do this Mrs Gnomie. So thank you.
  3. The third part of a trilogy of stories, this Epic-logue concludes the tale of Loe, Jay and the gang. You will be smiling, laughing, crying, shouting and smiling again as you are drawn into their stories. Mrs Gnomie has an engaging style of writing, that invites the reader into the action, and once you are in, you will not want to leave.
  4. Doha

    The Game

    Thank you for a wonderful story. I have enjoyed every word from the first chapter of the first story. I feel like I know the people in the story. I've laughed and cried with them. Thank you for taking the time, putting in the energy and for opening this new world to us.
  5. Doha

    Chapter 11

    A great chapter. I'm glad Galen is letting a relationship develop with Ethan. I still suspect Ethan is going to be hurt. Let's see.
  6. Doha

    Chapter 11

    Terrible things. Fishy salt or salty fish?
  7. Doha

    Chapter 36

    A fantastic chapter. I laughed and cried and sit here now smiling my head off. I'm so relieved that the twins are back where they belong. It will be interesting to see how the next few weeks go as they get used to living in a pack again and with their mates. Thank you for this lovely chapter. 😍
  8. Doha

    Chapter 8

    😆 🤣 let me get on with reading. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
  9. Doha

    Chapter 6

    Up to Chapter 10 now, and I love him.
  10. Doha

    Chapter 10

    I'm glad that Galen and Ethan had a bit of fun. I think they probably both needed it. Ethan still stands to get his heart broken though, poor guy.
  11. Doha

    Chapter 10

    That is a serious super power BigBen.
  12. Doha

    Chapter 9

    Well that was a feel good chapter with a big surprise for Galen. I'm still worried about Ethan. Galen and Josh are making their own beds and will have to lie in rhem, but Ethan could get hurt. I'm sure Liam can find out more about Roger. He is married or at least two timing Josh.
  13. Doha

    Chapter 9

    Yeah that was a nice touch.
  14. Doha

    Chapter 9

    Agreed. We'll done Liam.
  15. Doha

    Chapter 8

    Another great chapter. Thank you. Galen is probably going to end up with Josh, but I can't help feeling someone down to earth, like Ethan, is probably better for him.
  16. Doha

    Chapter 8

    Yeah, I agree. Ethan and Galen had a great first date.
  17. Doha

    Chapter 7

    Like the others who have commented, I think Galen should have had that cup of coffee with Ethan, if for nothing other than giving Ethan a bit of affirmation.
  18. Doha

    Chapter 6

    A brave but necessary step by Galen. Jody appearing is an interesting twist. He seems gay to me. Let's see what happens.
  19. Doha

    Chapter 6

    I really like your Roger Resolution!!
  20. Doha

    Chapter 5

    Hey Raven, we're on the same wavelength here regarding Roger.
  21. Doha

    Chapter 5

    Yeah. Misunderstood, my eye. He is an arsehole
  22. Doha

    Chapter 5

    There is potential for a lot of pain in this.
  23. Doha

    Chapter 5

    Haven't finished the chapter yet, but that scene with Josh and Roger was a booth call if I've ever seen one. I'm thinking Roger is married or something or has a second hoslusehokd and Josh doesn't know. Roger is faking something big time.
  24. Doha

    Chapter 4

    You write really well, and the character development is super. We are getting to know the men well, warts and all. This needs to come to a head one way or another very soon, as Josh and Galen are well on their way to moral bankruptcy.
  25. Doha

    Chapter 4

    Good points Raven.
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