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Like the others who have commented, I think Galen should have had that cup of coffee with Ethan, if for nothing other than giving Ethan a bit of affirmation.
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A brave but necessary step by Galen. Jody appearing is an interesting twist. He seems gay to me. Let's see what happens.
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I really like your Roger Resolution!!
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Hey Raven, we're on the same wavelength here regarding Roger.
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Yeah. Misunderstood, my eye. He is an arsehole
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There is potential for a lot of pain in this.
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Haven't finished the chapter yet, but that scene with Josh and Roger was a booth call if I've ever seen one. I'm thinking Roger is married or something or has a second hoslusehokd and Josh doesn't know. Roger is faking something big time.
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You write really well, and the character development is super. We are getting to know the men well, warts and all. This needs to come to a head one way or another very soon, as Josh and Galen are well on their way to moral bankruptcy.
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Yep, that is about the long and short of it. They need to seriously clean up their act.
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Loving this story. Liam and Alanah need to give Galen more info about Josh and the elusive boyfriend.
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Me too. 😆 but I might end up as big as a house.
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Yeah, it seems out of character for Galen, to act as the "other guy".
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OK. Pity Josh is taken, but I'm guessing there is more to this than meets the eye.
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I'm glad I found this late. I can turn to the next chapter. Yaaaay.
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Yeah it takes time to feel human again.
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Ash is certainly a flight rather than a fight person. I hope he gives himself permission to be vulnerable with Cove and Smaller Me.
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He is being a bit wimp-like. Come on Ash!
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If one Barron family member knew, they would all know in 5 minutes. 😆 🤣 sounds like a normal family. He definitely did. No doubt.
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This is a great read. Cove is overdoing it a bit with Ashley. Maybe?
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Hmmm. Looking forward to seeing his reasons.
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Yeah he is. Time to put his big boy pants on.
