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Galen is pretty self-absorbed at the moment. I agree. He needs to take a step back and really sort out his head.
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Yeah Josh is frustrating. There is obviously something that binds him to Roger in some way despite knowing he is being played with. I wonder what it is. 🤔
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Hey, what a fantastic surprise. I'm so glad these characters have overlapped. Can't wait to read the next story! Thank you for writing.
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Oy vey 🙈 So much love and so much heartache. Some of it already seen more, soon to be seen.
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Well that was a big chapter. Josh does try to live his life in little boxes, all segmented and neatly packed away. I think it's a man thing. Ethan is going to be jettisoned I think. He needs to grow on confidence. I suppose being unacceptable to his family erodes his confidence badly. Right, let's see what the next chapter has in store.
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Yeah, this is the end for Ethan.
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Well this was a moving chapter. Josh behaved terribly, shamefully even. I fully appreciate Ethan's reaction when he saw Josh and Galen together. That realization that you love more than you are loved in return is mortifying.
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Yep, he will be paying the price. Josh will only choose Galen when he realizes that Roger is not an option. That is not a good basis for the choice I think he will make.
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Yes, to everything you have said.
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Karl is feeling Jorgen's disappearance so badly. They were dear freinds and Jorgen was a strength to Karl. I do hope that he is OK. I cant help but feel Jorgen is a better match for Karl than George.
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All your stories do this Mrs Gnomie. So thank you.
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The third part of a trilogy of stories, this Epic-logue concludes the tale of Loe, Jay and the gang. You will be smiling, laughing, crying, shouting and smiling again as you are drawn into their stories. Mrs Gnomie has an engaging style of writing, that invites the reader into the action, and once you are in, you will not want to leave.
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Thank you for a wonderful story. I have enjoyed every word from the first chapter of the first story. I feel like I know the people in the story. I've laughed and cried with them. Thank you for taking the time, putting in the energy and for opening this new world to us.
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A great chapter. I'm glad Galen is letting a relationship develop with Ethan. I still suspect Ethan is going to be hurt. Let's see.
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Terrible things. Fishy salt or salty fish?
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A fantastic chapter. I laughed and cried and sit here now smiling my head off. I'm so relieved that the twins are back where they belong. It will be interesting to see how the next few weeks go as they get used to living in a pack again and with their mates. Thank you for this lovely chapter. 😍
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😆 🤣 let me get on with reading. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.
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Up to Chapter 10 now, and I love him.
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I'm glad that Galen and Ethan had a bit of fun. I think they probably both needed it. Ethan still stands to get his heart broken though, poor guy.
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That is a serious super power BigBen.
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Well that was a feel good chapter with a big surprise for Galen. I'm still worried about Ethan. Galen and Josh are making their own beds and will have to lie in rhem, but Ethan could get hurt. I'm sure Liam can find out more about Roger. He is married or at least two timing Josh.
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Yeah that was a nice touch.
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Agreed. We'll done Liam.
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Another great chapter. Thank you. Galen is probably going to end up with Josh, but I can't help feeling someone down to earth, like Ethan, is probably better for him.
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Yeah, I agree. Ethan and Galen had a great first date.
