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Doha

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  1. Doha

    I've Changed ...

    It really is a cracker.
  2. Doha

    I've Changed ...

    I really liked that these guys were mostly in their 40s or 50s. I could relate.
  3. Doha

    I've Changed ...

    It certainly makes me want to go back now and read Joe the Welder.
  4. Doha

    I've Changed ...

    It certainly was.
  5. A fantastic chapter. An excellent balance of light hearted and emotive language. I was happy and touched at rhe same time. Thank you. 😊
  6. Agreed. Robert does this very well indeed. He gets the balance just right.
  7. A super chapter. I'm glad Clayton has revealed more of himself to their friends. This was heart warming and made me proud of Ryan, and of the many real men just like him, who have fought so we need not fight.
  8. Yeah, he got the level of emotion just right.
  9. It brought tears to my eyes.
  10. Don't stop writing. ps. The words are not kind, they are honest.
  11. Yes!
  12. Indeed. Love won and the rest is by the by.
  13. And that line makes the entire series a winner!
  14. You know that would be a great pity. You are an excellent writer. The story must be told the way it is. You can please all of fhe people some of fhe time, and some of the people all of the time. You will never please all of the people all of the time. So stay true to the story you tell and bugger the consequences. DON'T STOP WRITING. PLEASE.
  15. Doha

    Chapter 41

    Oh oh, indeed.
  16. Doha

    Chapter 41

    I do hope that the Germans leave Karl alone. I think Clement and Jo will protect him.
  17. Doha

    Chapter 41

    Karl certainly has a string if bad luck, with each incident being put right by a saviour in one disguise or another.
  18. Ues, that is so true. The Kardashians vs any marine. I know who the real heros and role models are.
  19. Yeah, I was also wondering whether Barry would be able to get through the security vet, and whether they all want his photo in national newspapers.
  20. Yeah, I guess it always looks glamorous from rhe outside but is probably a pain in the ass to live with.
  21. This has taken on a new dimension and Aryan is coping quite well. I wonder why Xlayton will not be in interviews. I suspect he will change his mind. Also, how will Ryan's family view him now that he is a Medal of Honour recipient?
  22. It is a fantastic story isn't it.
  23. Loving ths they. Getting to know our guys better. Moving on to the next chapter.
  24. Doha

    Chapter 30

    Another super chapter. Thank you. Another pup saved, psi going on, Elijah catching a vision from Kage. A full and satisfying chapter. Tyler is fitting in very well and I hope he will find a furry mate here along with Elijah.
  25. Doha

    Chapter 30

    Indeed, probably possible. 🤣
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