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Chapter 10 - It's Got to Stop
Doha commented on James Matthews's story chapter in Chapter 10 - It's Got to Stop
Yes. In a few years time, they could certainly be together. They need to see a bit of the world first, particularly Steven. But in the fullness of time, they might be a great couple. -
The boyfriend and best friend being mates is not a bad idea. I hope Maddox can cope with that. I love the fact that Rusty can sing. The thug could turn into an opera star. Jonathan showed himself to be the true gentleman today. Well done to him.
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Delighted that D'gar is Weyrlingmaster. This will be good for the weyr.
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Well hooray!!! I hope they will be able to say the words that will go with the love they clearly feel for each other
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I am glad that Karl is going home. I wonder how he and George will get on and whether Arthur being there will effect Paul.
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George is finally being honest with himself. I hope he has the strength and character to approach Karl. Karl deserves someone who will love him. So does George, but he needs to clean up his game first. Fingers crossed.
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His maiden flight. Wonderful and he did so well. I'm proud of Karl.
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Paul's friend is dealing with the loss of Paul ti Emma. Karl, Juke and Jorgen are dealing with the loss, or potential loss, of family. And this is the nature of war - everyone loses. Perhaps Karl can be a reason for Paul's friend to live again.
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Karl will come to rerms with how broken Goerge is. Whether George wants to be any different or even whether he has the capacity for healing is unknown to us and unknown to Karl. Personally, I think Karl needs to move on from George. I hope he will find a loving, caring and stable man. It might be an older man like the Lieutenant General. Or someone his own age like Jorgen. He deserves to be loved and cared for.
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It is great to see our boys coming out of their shells and making friends. Also good to see J'rud again. Looking forward to kadin and Jevikel meeting D'gar properly. Thank you for writing and continuing to spread joy.
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Loving this. I hope Jonathan is able to do whatever it is he needs to do with his parents. He and Maddox as a great couple. I think Maddox' parents are going to be good for Jonathan.
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So glad to be reading the continuation of Karl's life. I think Dierk is going to be an ongoing problem. There seems to be a connection between Karl and Kristian. Let's see how the story develops. Thank you for writing.
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I feel sorry for Jack. I'm glad that he was able to guide Terry to uncover the truth. It was clear that Bob the builder was involved somehow and good that it was discovered. Thank you for this lovely story. The characters feel so real and so normal. It is wonderful to read about normal people and feel a connection to them. I'm delighted that Terry and Dan are so solid. I can see them living in Cynthia's house one day and building life together. Thank you for writing.
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Loving the story. I'm glad the boys are set to impress. Perhaps I've been caught up in the uncertainty about green dragons and their riders after reading earlier series, but the latest ones we have met have been very nice. Let's see. I'm sure the boys will impress as is right for them.
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I'm glad the guys have left. Whilst difficult to start something new, this really is the only option for rhem to live a somewhat normal life.
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I hope that Kadin has made it through.
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I'm enjoying this story very much. You have such an easy style of writing that I just keep on "turning rhe pages". I hope the 3 of them get away soon.
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Chapter 19: Baltimore Business
Doha commented on astone2292's story chapter in Chapter 19: Baltimore Business
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Thank you for an amazing adventure. I have loved every moment. Rhe baby seat in the xar was the crown jewel. Thank you for brightening some difficult days on the other side of the world.
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So the story hidden for so long is starting to unravel with the unraveling of Maurice's mind. I wonder if it is Jack down the hole? And if so, what caused I all. I'm loving Dan and Terry. ❤
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Perfect!!!!
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Such an easy style of writing that flows and moves the story along. I enjoy the way you are developing the characters slowly and allowing us to get to know them. I really like Terry. And Dan seems to be revealing a different side of his personality. A super chapter.
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It is as I thought, useless parents who have double crossed both their children. I am delighted that Loe and Lars have found each ither and hope that their relationship can he restored.
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Enjoyed every minute of this series. The characters are so real and Eric's flourishing has been lovely. Thank you for writing.
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I am sure our good Granger will find a way to accommodate the displaced families. I smile so broadly at their gentle teasing if Admiral Nelson. Thoroughly enjoying this series of stories. Long may they last.
