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Chapter 6 Shifters Are Dying
Doha commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 6 Shifters Are Dying
Yep @drpaladin, I think you're right. Tilly may get in the way a bit, but let's see. -
Chapter 6 Shifters Are Dying
Doha commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 6 Shifters Are Dying
Oh wow!! That would make so much sense @patrick1991! -
Chapter 5 Exploring New Territory
Doha commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 5 Exploring New Territory
A brilliant chapter and we learn some important details. Kellar has definite healing powers. The malaise is real. Kellar has a very big willy. -
Chapter 4 When Worlds Collide
Doha commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 4 When Worlds Collide
I have read all your stories and like the others, I'm loving this one too. Kellar has turned into an impressive man and wolf. What a great deal he has accomplished in just 3 years. Torbyn intrigues me and I wonder if I'm seeing the start of a romance and the emergence of a new alpha in Kellar. Shifters are unwell - the malaise now makes sense. Kellar may be the key to healing an entire species. Can't wait to turn the page to the next chapter, which I'm about to do right now, sitting in a warm coffee shop in Cape Town. -
It feels like the story is about to end. And if it does, it's ending on a high. Alex and Cammie are supportive, Jon and Jim are a settled and happy couple, Keith is on the mend. I really love your understated writing style. I hope there are more chapters to come.
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A brilliant chapter that brings into stark clarity, the aftermath that "coming out" can have on the kids. Not because of the the gay aspect, but the feelings of abandonment. Something for those of us who were married with children, to reflect on quietly. This has made me uncomfortable, but what Keith said, needed to be put out into the open.
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@Jjeffalch I am in full agreement. I did what Jim did, and broke up a family when I could no longer live the lie. Although my youngest was 18 at the time, I can see how she had to pick up rhe pieces when her mom was shattered. I totally get where Keith has been coming from. He missed his dad, wondered was he still loved, all fhe while trying to hold a broken family together.
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Danny has saved the day alongside Ryder and again we see a pair that compliment each other, that are stronger together than apart. Jack and Vince will mate I'm sure. Cassandra, as we have suspected from the start, is either an evil force or is being used by one to kill Ryder and cause the demise of his pack. But why? And with whom? And how paranormal is Danny?
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Yep, all of that is exactly what I'm also thinking @Paladin.
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Agreed @VBlew, there is much more to Danny than meets the eye.
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That was a huge deal - the ring. Alex is excited about his gifts, the puppy that he is. I'm glad Keith is starting to thaw. My middle daughter didn't talk to me for 18 months after I came out. It was tough. I get where Jim is on this. A great chapter. Thank you.
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Wondered the same. What is going on behind that carefully crafted veneer?
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What a nice start. We have probably all had those restroom 🚻 moments. Quick release and gone. But nothing can beat a real connection.
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This was an insightful chapter that cast new light on old relationships. Alexander had Lyn's back in this situation, showing himself to be a lot more caring than we had imagined. He even framed having Lyn to stay as a favour from Lyn to him. Alexander is becoming a lot more interesting.
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This is precisely what I am now thinking. Alexander has had an eye on Lyn all this time and is close to Brad in order to stay close to Lyn.
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What must have started as a terrifying experience for Kellar, has quickly become second nature, as he explores his capabilities. Like others, I'm glad he did not totally decimate Warren, although I'm glad the little sod wet himself. Quid pro quo - now time to move on. I'm rooting for Kellar, the beast.
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What an adventure this must feel like for a 16 year old. Kellar reminds me a little of Harry Potter. Orphan, brought up with a malicious cousin, but soon will find his own power. Parents who have disappeared? I think they will reappear at some point. Great story.
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What a chapter! I loved it. We knew Theodore would survive as the epic battle still has to take place. Danny is healing Ryder and I am sure will do it fully, wold and human. So looking forward to next week. 👏 👏 👏
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Wow!!! I can't wait to see what that is.
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There Is Always an Easy Way Out
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in There Is Always an Easy Way Out
A chapter filled with unraveling story lines. Let's see where they go. There is little love between Brad and Bella. -
Chapter 1 All the Colors Under the Sun
Doha commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 1 All the Colors Under the Sun
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Better off as Memories has left me very tender-hearted as I recognise in the narrator aspects of my own life and relationships. A fantastic morning read that many of us will recognise.
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A most poignant retelling of something many of us have experienced. I still see my guy 3 or 4 times a week. He has started dating a mutual friend, and while I am honestly happy for them, it has tweaked my heart just a little bit. 💓
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A very productive chapter on all counts. A great business deal for Jim. Jon was a trooper at home. Alex and Jon bond further and a distinct if mild thaw from Keith. All round a move forward.
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In many ways the 3 main characters are all reflections of aspects of ourselves: the broken but healing man, the man in the middle who is getting on with life dealing with the pain, and the young one who has been freed and is filled with hope. This has left me with a whirlwind of emotions and has certainly pushed me beyond my comfort zone. 🙃 Magnificent writing!
