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I feel for Peter. He is going to have a battle not just on the playing field but in his heart as well as he figures things out.
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Finally they got to be alone and burnt the house down in the process 🔥
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A fun chapter with everybody involved one way or another. Andrew and Will have a very chilled relationship.
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So the decision is made and Andrew will be at Ottawa close to Will. I’m not keen on White Patch. Will keep an eye on him.
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The minor major is a huge arse.
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Misaligned is an aptly named tale of love, friendship, misunderstandings, betrayal and reconciliation. I enjoyed every ‘page’ while the plot twists kept me turning. This is a ‘must read’ by a talented author and highly recommended.
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Well I must be getting soppy because my eyes are very blurry and there is a strange lump in my throat. I will miss these guys, but delighted that they have all had 10 good years with at least another 10 to come. Thank you for a fabulous story.
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A delightful dinner party is about to begin, I’m sure. 👌🏽 Andrew is a perfect support for Will in the face of his bully father and crazy aunt. I wonder how old Mrs Carter will handle the situation.
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Jared and Will have found that they are a real support to one another at school. These types of friendships are super valuable.
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A lovely soppy chapter that made me smile and think all is well with the world. But I’m waiting for something to crop up as it always does.
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This for me, was the calm before the storm - the storm of ill health revealed, jealousy and betrayal. How happy they were in that precious moment caught on film.
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Can’t wait to see how the threads of this story unfurl.
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So Louis is making a group of friends in his new community. Both Ian and Charlie could be helpful. Fingers crossed that he finds love, beside finding the statue.
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Well I did not expect that! Whilst it doesn’t exonerate Brad from being a dick, it certainly helps us understand him - and of course we must remember he wa only a kid of 21 or so when he was diagnosed. From king of the world to staring at death’s door would have been devastating. I hope Lyn takes Brad’s advice and goes after Alexander.
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[Memory, Junior Year, October] – That Time When You Needed Me
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Junior Year, October] – That Time When You Needed Me
Another WOW chapter where Lynton and Alexander dance round the truth of what is actually going on here. One, normally so confident, unable to verbalise what he wants in a way that will be considered seriously; and the other too wrapped up in his own internal struggle to present himself as straight, to notice the nuances of Alexander’s statements. It’s all in plain sight, except to those there. -
The Three of Us, We’ve Always Been So Misaligned
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Three of Us, We’ve Always Been So Misaligned
Anxious to know what Brad has to say, so I’m just turning the page immediately. -
The Three of Us, We’ve Always Been So Misaligned
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The Three of Us, We’ve Always Been So Misaligned
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[Memory, Senior Year, May] – Terrible Mistakes
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Senior Year, May] – Terrible Mistakes
I could weep for all 3 of these men, boys really. A love triangle of sorts is a devastation as anyone who has been in one will know. All 3 of them have , to some extent focussed on themselves, and in doing so, fail to see what is right in front of them. -
It won’t be long before George and the Capitan will be joined - cock-blocked or not.
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A great opening chapter. Looking forward to this read.
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Evil, murder, conspiracy, a little love and you’ve hooked a middle schooler. Good job Will.
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I must have read this previously and forgotten because I loving it second time around!!
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Granny has arrived and everybody is slightly off centre as a result. I love Brody’s dry humour and Andrew’s cheery confidence. Despite his father, the minor major as @Summerabbacat rightly calls him, Will has a good circle of supportive family and friends.
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So Lisa and Brody have broken up and Will is alone at school with Andrew away at university. A great opening chapter. Can’t wait to dive in.
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I Needed to See How It Would End
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in I Needed to See How It Would End
That was a cracker of a chapter and a great deal is revealed, although I suspect there is more to come. Lyn is at a major crossroad now and how he responds will be quite telling about his character. Will he face the storm and work through it? Or, will he run? Let’s see.
