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First Touch, First Hunger
Doha commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in First Touch, First Hunger
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The True Touch of a Lover
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The True Touch of a Lover
And for the record, I love your writing and feel, as you do that GA is a safe and warm gathering place.- 31 comments
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The True Touch of a Lover
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in The True Touch of a Lover
Well that makes me happy! If they can have this evening together, ironically at the top of a tower, I am hopeful that Ryder will see that his dated mate is Danny while Pembroke is his mortal enemy.- 31 comments
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The difference in age and stage in career is definitely allowing Troy to be wooed in a way he would not have with someone his own age. I wonder if the feeling will still be the same when the novelty wears off. For both of them. Just me being cynical having lived this kind of thing fairly recently. As the older partner naturally. 😆
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Well that first response was to be expected. I'm glad to see that Aaron and Tony have bothe filled out as they have matured.
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That might be the first comment but I hope the ignoring if an extended hand is because there will be an embrace instead.
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Let's see how the meeting goes. At least all the family will be there to support the two of them when they get lost for words.
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That's awful. A long time ago, I'm sure, but still poignant when you remember the young men involved.
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@Al Norris did you ever see your marine friend again? I have such vivid memories of close military friendships, but I never saw then again after finishing our national service.
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It sounds like the old house has had a complete makeover. It's so cool that the 4 guys now own the farm house. Let's see how Tony gets on with Aaron and Justin, the protector, looking on.
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That is quite a story and the guys were really disciplined to keep it to themselves. But, as Tony says, it's better that he didn't know, as coming home would have ked to resentment. Let see how Aaron responds to Tony.
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So the first meeting of the reunion has taken place and Matt is as hot as we thought he would be and working at the car shop.
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The Drive That Changed Everything
Doha commented on StoriesByTroy's story chapter in The Drive That Changed Everything
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The sexual tension was so intense. Let's see how these two get on. It's going to be explosive when they get there.
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What a lovely surprise to get a Granger chapter! Caroline continues to be caught between the conflicting emotions of jealousy, anger and desire, with George at the centre. The British diplomats are an inept lot, and it is no wonder that Daventry is furious. Let's see how this goes down when he gets back to London. As for Caroline, she will have several months of confinement on the Isle of Wight. I can't imagine she will like it much. But, as a means to social rehabilitation it will work for her.
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What If You Like It Complicated?
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in What If You Like It Complicated?
Jack has given Ryder a lot to think about, but will it be sufficient to move him away from the madness of Cassandra? If Cassandra is leading Ryder astray, then all of the convolutions needed to avoid Danny, and find Pembroke will be unnecessary. If Jack is telling the truth, then mating with Danny and going home to sort out Cassandra seems to be much simpler. Usually the correct answer is the least convoluted one. -
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Troy is a lamb to the metaphorical slaughter. 😃 😀 That waist certainly sounds intriguing.
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Great start.Blake sounds like Greek God.
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What a super start to the new story. It's good to see Rony again. The years that have passed between his arrival as a teen to now somewhere between 25 and 30 will be great to explore through the eyes of our Thompsonville gang.
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That was a heart wrenching start to what, I think, will be a dramatic tussle between generations and worl views. Peter and Alan are mature beyond their years and this parenting experience will make them more so.
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Black Swans is a little window into the lives of 3 people. It illustrates the natural cycles of life and seasons in a magnificently poignant way. It is so simple, yet so powerful as it fictionalized the eternal themes of, purpose, remorse, happiness, determination. This is a brief but powerful read.
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I loved this story. So poignant and true to the cycles we all face.
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I loved this story. Thank you for writing and sharing it. Thonpsonville is becoming a great place to be.
