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Knowing @Laura S. Fox, she just might!
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Wow! That was an unexpected turn of events. Bella clearly knows, or at least I suspect that she knows, about Brad and accepts the situation. I wonder what it is about her that Brad knows and accepts, that allows these two to marry and have some kind of mutual understanding. It is quite a realisation that Bella, knowing - or choosing to know - what she does, is herself known and accepted by Brad in a way that renders marriage not romantic but functional, sustained by a hard, mutual understanding. Let’s see how this unfolds.
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[Memory, Senior Year, November] – Death by a Thousand Cuts
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Senior Year, November] – Death by a Thousand Cuts
I’m glad Lyndon was able to touch Alexander. The ruffling of hair and thumb under the ear say more than 1000 words could. -
Thank you for another engaging chapter. The next few months are going to be great reading! Lovely to see Weston back. I miss Calvert.
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To one and all a very Merry Christmas! another wonderful chapter as Lyn becomes increasingly self-aware.
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I agree that the house purchase is probably Alexander. Lyn’s biological father doesn’t seem the type to go beyond what they have agreed.
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This was just what Lyn needed to stop bellyaching about Brad and Bella. Alexander knows exactly what Lyn needs, before Lyn knows himself. A great chapter.
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Let’s see whether Charlene does the right thing or the popular thing.
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The upside of small town life is that warm community feel, and Christmas will elicit it more than any other time of year. The bad side of course is that everybody knows almost everything about everybody else. What will the major discover?
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This did not go well and we remain uncertain about what it was that caused the rift, which is clearly not healed.
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Indeed. The exception that proves the rule.
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A wonderful first date.
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A real date and Will is up for it!
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That is a distinct possibility. Alexander could well be the donor and the chauffeur an employee of the rude grandfather.
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Will has a really supportive circle of friends and acquaintances. This will steady the ship in the face of the family storm.
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Mr Greenwood is one of that breed of teachers who understand kids, and is respected by them in return. i could do with a kiss like that around about now.
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Now you are making me wonder what the real issues are? And I’m guessing a lot of it has to do with where we are on Mazlow’s Hierarchy of Needs.
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Such a sweet chapter. ❤️
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I’m loving the journey these two are on.
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Yeah. The boys need to get talking and figure this out.
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They are so young and the way this has been done, both by Jennifer and Will’s father, is really hard for them to navigate. I hope Andrew and Will find a way to work through this difficult situation together. I’ve got a feeling that Andrew’s mother will be supportive.
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Wow! Now we know exactly what Will’s dad is. A major arsehole, and that’s being generous.
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It’s odd that she would think such a thing possible while carrying the child of another man.
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I have met some of the mothers and sister of those boys who were on the flight from Uruguay that went down in the Andes. The mums and sisters of those who survived as well as those who did not now run a learning centre in a very underprivileged part of Montevideo, that is dedicated to the boys. this was a way they thrived to bring meaning to a terrible situation.
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Quite right. The major has reduced proper parenting to ensuring that Will has shelter, food and education. Cole but at least meets minimum expectations. The witch, however, is totally hostile.
