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I think you are correct @Gary L. There has been a quiet but very major shift in the story in this chapter. Tim and Ben. More to it than meets the eye I think. Jonathan could go any direction. But if Tim is open to other conversations, Guy may not last long. 🤔
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After their first full night sleeping together Tim and Guy have to separate for a few eeks. It will feel like eternity but actually it will be over in no time. Sam and Ben on the other hand are not likely to stay together long term. Hey ho hey ho to the next chapter I go
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That was fun. I'm glad they have found each other.
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@Laura S. Fox I love your writing style. You have a way of pulling the reader deeply into your story and I feel like I am right there next to Danny and Ryder. I can't wait to see this love story unfold.
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A night at the motel, and the first time that both couples sleep the whole night together. It is lovely waking up together in the morning.
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That was a triumph. Tim's dad came out tops and his brother is a right little bugger. Great fun had by all, despite the little wanne be bad boys.
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Yep, yobs is also the term used in South Africa.
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A great performance, a declaration of love, parental pride in their sons talent and the affirmation of a caring teacher. A good chapter all round.
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The love language does feel a bit too adult. Guy has had far longer to think about who he is and how he wants to love and be loved. This is all very new for Tim. But do his feelings for Ben get in the way of developing his feelings for Guy.
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I was expecting that too.
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Well that was a relief. Jason will be coo, although he will use his current suspicions as leverage to get things from Tim. Samantha is no fool and is well aware of what is going on. Cameron might be as well. Somewhere in this mix there is a stick of dynamite waiting to be lit.
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When they are comfortable facing each other while dressing at the gym, it won't take much longer for them to get together.
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OMG. Let's go quickly to the next chapter. Who is the voice in the sark. I hope its Ben.
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My dad would not have been understanding when I was a conflicted teenager. As a 50 year old, however, and my dad in his 70s, he surprisingly accepted me without hesitation.
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As @Paladin said, I'm looking forwardto seeing how closely the love triangle stage follows the potential love triangle in our group of lads.
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They finally got somewhere! 🙌 🙌 Loved that kitchen scene, including Ben's presence. 😀
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Ben is a great friend. Tim couldn't have better.
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Just as others have already said,I'm daily certain Ben knows Guy is gay and that Tim and Guy could be right for each other. Ben is a good friend.
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Great chapter, culminating with Tim dashing out of the milk shop. I'm certain that Ben will calm him and ultimately Guy will kiss him.
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Yeah. Agreed. I think Ben spots the likeness.
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Loving it so far, along with The Rip and After We Danced. Let's see how it goes with the Guy, Tim and Ben.
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That was a great story. I'm glad it all came right in the end. Really good plot and character development in a location that captures the imagination. Really looking forward fo starting the next part of the series.
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Yep, just like @Geron Kees, it's time to turn the page.
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The Gym Is Good for Body and Soul
Doha commented on Tallguyct's story chapter in The Gym Is Good for Body and Soul
That middle aged dick swinger sounds exciting. 😆 🤣 I hope José and Walter get to see each other naked at the gym. -
Many insightful comments above, so i have nothing particularly stunning to add. I do hope that this works out for Justin, because if it doesn't, the only solution he thought he had would slip away.
