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Danny has saved the day alongside Ryder and again we see a pair that compliment each other, that are stronger together than apart. Jack and Vince will mate I'm sure. Cassandra, as we have suspected from the start, is either an evil force or is being used by one to kill Ryder and cause the demise of his pack. But why? And with whom? And how paranormal is Danny?
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Yep, all of that is exactly what I'm also thinking @Paladin.
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Agreed @VBlew, there is much more to Danny than meets the eye.
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That was a huge deal - the ring. Alex is excited about his gifts, the puppy that he is. I'm glad Keith is starting to thaw. My middle daughter didn't talk to me for 18 months after I came out. It was tough. I get where Jim is on this. A great chapter. Thank you.
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Wondered the same. What is going on behind that carefully crafted veneer?
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What a nice start. We have probably all had those restroom 🚻 moments. Quick release and gone. But nothing can beat a real connection.
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This was an insightful chapter that cast new light on old relationships. Alexander had Lyn's back in this situation, showing himself to be a lot more caring than we had imagined. He even framed having Lyn to stay as a favour from Lyn to him. Alexander is becoming a lot more interesting.
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This is precisely what I am now thinking. Alexander has had an eye on Lyn all this time and is close to Brad in order to stay close to Lyn.
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What must have started as a terrifying experience for Kellar, has quickly become second nature, as he explores his capabilities. Like others, I'm glad he did not totally decimate Warren, although I'm glad the little sod wet himself. Quid pro quo - now time to move on. I'm rooting for Kellar, the beast.
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What an adventure this must feel like for a 16 year old. Kellar reminds me a little of Harry Potter. Orphan, brought up with a malicious cousin, but soon will find his own power. Parents who have disappeared? I think they will reappear at some point. Great story.
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What a chapter! I loved it. We knew Theodore would survive as the epic battle still has to take place. Danny is healing Ryder and I am sure will do it fully, wold and human. So looking forward to next week. 👏 👏 👏
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Wow!!! I can't wait to see what that is.
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There Is Always an Easy Way Out
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in There Is Always an Easy Way Out
A chapter filled with unraveling story lines. Let's see where they go. There is little love between Brad and Bella. -
Chapter 1 All the Colors Under the Sun
Doha commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 1 All the Colors Under the Sun
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Better off as Memories has left me very tender-hearted as I recognise in the narrator aspects of my own life and relationships. A fantastic morning read that many of us will recognise.
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A most poignant retelling of something many of us have experienced. I still see my guy 3 or 4 times a week. He has started dating a mutual friend, and while I am honestly happy for them, it has tweaked my heart just a little bit. 💓
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A very productive chapter on all counts. A great business deal for Jim. Jon was a trooper at home. Alex and Jon bond further and a distinct if mild thaw from Keith. All round a move forward.
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In many ways the 3 main characters are all reflections of aspects of ourselves: the broken but healing man, the man in the middle who is getting on with life dealing with the pain, and the young one who has been freed and is filled with hope. This has left me with a whirlwind of emotions and has certainly pushed me beyond my comfort zone. 🙃 Magnificent writing!
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OK. That's just mean. 9bviousky Ryder has to recover, but jeez. So Cassandra is up to something and Theodore knows what it is about. Waiting patiently for next week.
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[Memory, Freshman Year, November] – The Usual Letdowns
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Freshman Year, November] – The Usual Letdowns
Well this is an unexpected context for Lyn. He and Alexander present similarly, but I suspect one is genuinely wealthy. Having said that a Victorian redbrick house gone to seed, indicates that there may have been some wealth at some stage in the past. I wonder exactly what it is that Lyn's mom has to do to buy him an expensive gift. 🤔 -
I am delighted to see George and his merry men again. He remains my all-time favourite character on GA. I'm glad George got time with Calvert and their love remains strong. 💕 It's a good thing that Daventry didn't speak out about the negotiations. George really is growing in stature, both with his sovereign and with the people.
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This was a very revealing chapter as more details of the friendship triangle emerge. As others have said, I am sure that Brad knew of Alexander's interest in Lyn, and of Lyn's interest in him. What we don't yet know is what Brad's interest was, or whether we take at face value what Mrs Fox has shown us - which as we all know, is as safe as quick sand.
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How we all wanted the condom to burst, and perhaps it still will, but that would just be too easy for Laura Fox story. Without doubt these two are meant for each other and Fate or FATE will find a way.
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Wow, there is a depth to the commentary that is rarely seen. This story is powerful in so many levels, and as has already been said, there are no heroes in the true sense of heroism, rather people being flawed humans, struggling to make sense of a broken world. I'm sorry Nick left Bobby. It seems harsh, to abandon somebody you've claimed to protect. Let see if the next chapter helps us make sense of that action. This must be one of the most intricately woven tapestries of lust, betrayal, a tainted kind of love, I've ever read. Splendid work @CasualWanderer82
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[Memory, Freshman Year, November] – Temptation
Doha commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in [Memory, Freshman Year, November] – Temptation
There is definitely a chemistry between Brad and Lyn. Alex is a third wheel, but Lyn tolerates him because of their friendship with Brad. Being in the closet, it's clear that Lyn is hiding his sexuality from the world and the hours of study, besides being financially necessary, provide a kind of cover. That closet is a damned hard place to be.
