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Marks mom is so funny and I totally get how a young guy would cringe everything she opens her mouth. 😆 🤣 I like Ross.
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I really like these moms. When the moms unite the guys will be fried.
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A good excuse, but still no reason not to call.
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Marks responses, while understandable, were a bit silly. Ross on the other hand can tone down the bossyness or he won't have a successful relationship with anyone, let alone Mark.
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Keeping busy will definitely help. I wonder what has happened to Ross.
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Joey brings some common sense to the table.
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Obviously something has caused Ross to leave but he should have let Mark know.
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Things are on the up and up.
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This is moving along nicely. Mark and Ross are going to be 🔥 when they get to it.
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Ross is certainly insistent, but how will Mark ultimately respond amd I wonder if he isn't half enjoying being bossed around a little.
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An erotic dream, a successful morning and a kiss sounds like things are moving along nicely.
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Ross certainly called Mark's bluff. Amd came out on top I think. 😆
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These two are going to get along really well.
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They do wind each other up well.
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Oh this is going to be fun! 😆 🤣
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Ross sounds like a dream. Let's see how it goes.
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Morningstar, is a wonderful story of love and victory in the face of defeat. Our protagonists are a fabulous pair who steuggle to identify what pulls them together but once they do, the sparks fly. Morningstar will keep ypu enthralled and turning the pages until the end. And then you will smile and say "I loved it!".
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Well what a ride this has been. I'm so glad I could read it over a couple of weeks. I loved every minute. I do think this book ends where it should, with just enough mystery to make a 2nd book tantalizing. 8 years have passed since ypu put this story up and I'm guessing there isn't going to be a Book 2. Thank you for making the shifter-verse feel so real.
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A very astute 9bservation, and in the same way that Moses led Israel out of Egypt, kellar is leading Morningstar out of the malaise and into a new dawn of promise and hope.
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With Fendral speaking, we start to understand more about Kellar's lineage. There is a lot for Kellar to digest and he will need a little time to adapt to the new reality.
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I'm not surprised by Kellar's hesitancy to accept the role I'd alpha, although, I am certain that he will do so at a future point. He is very duty driven amd goal oriented. Fendral will have some very important advice for Kellar, I'm sure.
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Finally, Ryder refers to Danny as his mate and he already feels stronger. It seems like Ryder and Theodore would need to work in tandem to take on Cassandra. Jack is far more adept at reading cards. Our whole crew has grown in strength alongside Danny and Ryders emerging bond as mates.
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Circle Upon Circle Upon Circle
Doha commented on Headstall's story chapter in Circle Upon Circle Upon Circle
Well as we expected - Kellar is an alpha - but not how we expected it. Wow. I'm glad that he has discovered the truth, as difficult as it is. But also that he now has a home at Morningstar, not by adoption, but by right. -
Elinor will be a mum, Hugh and Connor are on their way and our guys are on the top of the world. I'm excited to hear of the possibility of another packs location. More matches potentially.
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This was a triumph for Jim and Jon. Jon's dad is wise and the age and cultural differences are a concern for parents, until they see it working. I'm very glad that Jon's parents can see it working.
