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Stranger at the Grave is a poignant short story centering around themes of familial neglect and the consequent loss. It gives us pause to consider what is truly important in life and why it is that we seem so absorbed in the trivia of career over family.
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Ralph is battling to get his head around the new reality of his life. If he worries less about xategories and labels and just enjoys his time with Nolan he will be fine. Don't complain. Don't explain.
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Things we can do and things we can’t
Doha commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Things we can do and things we can’t
That was really nice! I loved that slow, gentle exploration. 😍 -
More of our Parborough friends are coming into the story. Preston gave Ralph good advice. Let's see if he takes it. I dont think Ralph's mum would be as opposed to him having a boyfriend as he might think.
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So Ralph is now out. I think things could work well with Nolan. Just realized it was Gordie he saw and Russ is in the same industrial park as Maurice.
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Kisses, boyfriends and boats
Doha commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Kisses, boyfriends and boats
That kiss was a very sweet moment. I hope there will be many more. -
Web pages and posing pouches
Doha commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Web pages and posing pouches
Morrie is as large as life but not quite Ralph's taste I think. But its good that Ralph is loosening up a bit and considering what really turns him on - and it ain't Therese. -
Parental duties & football practice
Doha commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Parental duties & football practice
Hahahaha. All this farting chatter makes me think of my very posh grandmother. Horses sweat, men perspire and ladies glow. OMG she was a crazy old duck 😆 but good fun. -
Lunch-boxes and packages
Doha commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Lunch-boxes and packages
I wonder if Maurice, CEO of Iversond, is a member of rhe Pink Dollar Community himself? Gordo? Perhaps there are some options here. 🤔 -
A great start to what promises to be an engaging tale.
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What a beautifully crafted short story. 😍 Thank you for sharing this gem.
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A nice bonding kind of chapter, setting rhe scene for what is to come next. Vanessa is emerging as a strong, loving mum prepared to extend tat love beyond her immediate blood family.
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Fan-bloody-tastic!!! I'm delighted.
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Another brilliant chapter. Josh is going to flourish as he deserves to.
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OK, so that got dark amd deep very quickly. Child safeguarding is a major imperative and Jords is going to have to disclose this to the authorities at some stage whether Josh likes it or not. I'm hopeful that they will all get to that point together.
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What Brings Us Together Part One, is a love story that made me smile, laugh and cry. Beautifully written, it tells the story of Jordan and Cameron, and a love that blossoms literally overnight. We sense in this pairing something solid, warm and filled with hope. i could not put it down.
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Not just tears but sobs! You are so evil @Paladin. Mein Gott! This is all falling into place and I love itlowill move on to Part 2.
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More tears in my eyes. Damn! Another brilliant chapter. 👏 I think we have the making of a little family right here.
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An amazing chapter and I have tears in my eyes. Josh will become a permanent part of their lives I hope. These guys need to have a second home in Stingray Heads. Adam must have been that special guy in Jordan's life.
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Something big is emerging through the fog on the horizon of Jordan's past. Everybody knows except Cameron, and Jordan simply has to tell him.
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Well a very positive and successful road trip and family gathering. These two are totally accepted by one another's families. As for Stingray Head, it's a great name. It reminds me of a little place in Nusa Penida, just south of Bali, called Manta Point. Jordan has something on his mind and heart. Stingray Head has something to do with it. Let's read and see.
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Well a very positive and successful road trip and family gathering. These two are totally accepted by one another's families. As for Stingray Head, it's a great name. It reminds me of a little place in Nusa Penida, just south of Bali, called Manta Point. Jordan has something on his mind and heart. Stingray Head has something to do with it. Let's read and see.
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Meeting the parents can be a harrowing experience. I've got a feeling it will go well but who is the mystery man from Jordan's past and when will he show up?
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So Pembroke and Ryder are not fated mates. That leaves the other bloke who lives at the top of a tower. Go Danny. I wonder what research our rodent clairvoyant is doing? And for whom?
