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Bill W

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  1. Bill W

    A Storm is Brewing

    Thanks for the feedback, Cole. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
  2. Bill W

    Chapter 1

    So sad. So depressing. To be alone with no hope of the situation changing. I felt every word.
  3. How sad and tragic, yet I felt the power and emotions in your words. Well done.
  4. Bill W

    Chapter 1

    A hot lover in a relationship stymied be a colder, unfeeling soul. It happens all too often in relationship, but never explained as well as this. Nicely done.
  5. And I used to like going to parties. The emotions you conveyed showed me the flip side of that coin.
  6. Bill W

    A Storm is Brewing

    Thanks for the feedback, Redsunshine. I hope they were the good kind of goosebumps, not the creepy kind. hehehe
  7. Bill W

    Mark

    Short, but touching. I think Ashi hit it on the nose when he compared the 'in vain' to three tear drops. Nice job!
  8. I hadn't seen an end line poem before, but it worked very nicely. Good job!
  9. Bill W

    A Storm is Brewing

    Yes, Ashi, the day will come. We just have to be patient. Thanks for the feedback.
  10. Bill W

    A Storm is Brewing

    Thanks for the feedback, Aditus. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
  11. Bill W

    A Storm is Brewing

    Thanks, RJ. It can get tricky when you're counting syllables and trying to get the rhyme correct. Thanks for the feedback.
  12. Bill W

    A Storm is Brewing

    Thanks for the feedback and the help, Joann.
  13. A Storm is Brewing The tension’s rising, it is plain to see Treated unequal, will no longer be Too long we’ve waited, for the time to pass We will not settle, to be second-class The Founders told us, in words very clear We’re created equal, a fact we hold dear Some may deny us, and claim we are not They do what they can, they plan and they plot The time has now come, no longer we’ll wait We won’t be abused, by those filled with hate We demand our rights, as proclaimed in law
  14. A poetic perspective of the movement for gay rights and marriage equality.
  15. She helped to define a generation and had many great hits. Besides Que Sera Sera, there was Sentimental Journey, When I Fall in Love, Secret Love, Everybody Loves a Lover and A Bushel and a Peck... just to mention a few. Happy Birthday, Doris, be it 90 or 92!
  16. That's an interesting article. It's amazing how they can figure out after this fact using scientific studies, but who came up with the name Mummy Lake. I was expecting that once they discovered there was no reservoir, they excavated the lake and found bodies. Now, I'm disappointed. lol
  17. Now there's some good easy listening.
  18. Yep. http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1523972/ It looks more like a high school or college production based on Star Trek visuals and characters, but I guess it was a real movie. Obviously not a blockbuster though.
  19. Bill W

    PSA's

    Now those are some interesting PSAs. lol
  20. If they start scouring the ocean floor, I'm certain they will find all sorts of things. However with sea levels rising, it will also be getting tougher to do this.
  21. What a touching tribute. How soon the rest of us forget what the soldiers go through when fighting a battle. However, those that were there, especially the wounded, carry those memories with them forever and have to continually cope with the ramifications. I hope that this might inspire some to reach out to those still dealing with these lingering emotional after-effects. It is the reason we must never forget the lasting struggles a war can bring. Sometimes we need to fight, but we should never go to war unless it is totally justified.
  22. Bill W

    Cia's Torturing Me!

    Well done and i think that will clear up a lot of issues/questions. Thanks for all of your hard work, Cia. Now, do you want a leather whip or riding crop as your reward?
  23. Oh, how much the world would be lacking if Will hadn't shared his marvelous plays. May the bard forever rest in peace.
  24. Having been around with Ghost Ryder from those early days, I mourn his passing. He will be missed and may he rest in peace.
  25. Bill W

    Chapter 1

    It's a scary thought, Dyno, but is anything beyond the realm of possibility? Thanks for the feedback.
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