In another story, set in about 2006, 2 teenagers in love from very very wealthy families, older than your group, but the way you express their feelings, hopes, dreams and general failing around, much better in my view. I'm way more invested in Tomas than Travis.. ( yes, I know, different measurements, different styles but...). Genius writing from a 14 to 16 year old youth perspective.
Let the trouble begin. Both stories are written well.