.........Poor misunderstood Jerry, attacked in the parking lot by a tequila induced Eric! Kicked in the nuts after he went to all the trouble to make Keith a cheese omelet.
..........Humm, actually I have already thought this out, I would pay off all my bills, give money to my brothers and move to a place that I have wanted to for years, selling fish bait.
.........I love the switchbacks in the story, not sure I'd have the patience the detective has though! I like the clever mystery that is still there, you leave the reader knowing there is a homicide, but not really sure whom is the victim and whom is the assailant.
..............I thought the end to that chapter the most interesting! So far it seems Seth is the only one with a real problem, that leaves the mystery of the two departed chess players. However given the rare opportunity of serving the Senate and House as pages, it would be detrimental to ones career should anyone try to attack our four gay pages as the prestigious job can vanish in an instant.
.......True, the reader will seek what they want from a story. To have sex eluded to in a story enough for me, I prefer a strong storyline with a plot.
..........Humm, things are really heating up!
Great chapter James, things are definately heating up, I hope the 'guard duty' at the midnight to morning shift is on his toes.