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.....................It was a nice peaceful chapter for a change! I would assume that some sort of training is needed for someone to get into a submersible mini-sub, even if radio operated. It might need someone to know how to operate it. Just in case!
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................There is something funny about how Mike puts up with his brother's wife and son's actions. I would hope it is only for his brother. Revealing Chapter!
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...................You would have thought the students had been informed of the policies of the Charter boat, perhaps the assignment was held closely. but the charter boat had been known for a week. Looks like Anton and Jasper have been kicking a lot of people off the boats lately. all justifiably warranted. And some have noted Anton's attitude in dealing with customers as tyrannical. I could also agree, but stipulate that he should be very stressed out considering all he has been through, numerous murder/assault attempts, burglaries, a little ship wreck. I also notice how gun shy he has become around some people as well the press with cameras and some people too. Great chapter!
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...................I guess this was as good as you can get about moving on, with Ethan leaving his family home. He now has one thing less to worry about! A seance? Hummm, I wonder if this is a good idea or not? Nice chapter!
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..............Glad the tests were negative, its good Wesley is out but home? What home I thought it was his mother that beat him up, he can't be living there again? I wonder if Mr. Ford left the boat to Jam?
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.............Well it is obvious that Topher is going to try and bust Kyle's balls it wouldn't surprise me if he attempts blackmail before exposing Kyle to his parents. It is also obvious that Topher needs to get himself drunk and have a deep conversation with Chippy about karma. Great chapter!
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........................... Bas does have some issues with his Uncle Matthew's family, it has to go beyond his bratty cousin to make him this uncomfortable. And I agree, running away from this will not help, there must be more then what meets the eye here. Bas has made some great changes and probably has more planned for the cattle walkabout! Great chapter!
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....................That scenario fits best, that an American oil company hired some thugs. But that would mean that they either had prior knowledge that that Anton's boat was going to be used in examining the environment for a UAW report. And at the moment, that information is secret, so the fall back is that the striking truck drivers are involved as trashing and threatening people is just the type of thing the union would do.
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......... I thought that too, the truckers union. But this seemed to be set up from the beginning!
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....................There is something about Anton and his boats that seems to bring the best out of the crooks and press. But seriously if that was the press what was the purpose of trashing the place? The assumption was that it was the press, but could it be people from the logistics company? What could be so important that they'd risk going back on board? Nice Chapter!
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............Caleb is a quick learner, who is leading who? Can't say if Caleb will become more powerful then Orpheus, however I think he will outsmart him. That canteen is filled with a different river water then Orpheus knows, it may provide a cunning move for Caleb to play.
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..................So his birth parents have been discovered his father deceased and his mother with siblings relocated back to Lichtenstein. But right now it seems Bas has his hands full running the large operation. (Why do I get the feeling that there is more than meets the eye on his cousin Christoper?) Is there an inheritance issue of this ranch? Oh well great informative chapter.
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....................I like the pace, not to fast and very slow yet still forging ahead! Great chapter.
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Home for the Holiday's or Not!
Benji commented on Dahawk's story chapter in Home for the Holiday's or Not!
...............Usually when a character in the story gets bad vibes about another person, and when said character projects his fears for a third person, who usually says it is not as serious as and he can take of himself. The exact opposite happens. I think Blu should keep closer watch on Chipmunk and Kyle should take heed to Blue's warning. Chapman sounds and looks like he won't give up until he has bagged his trophy. Great Chapter!! -
.................DQ's was okay, the hamburgers were good, but the onion rings were greasy and way too few for an order! Sounds like a normal teen sleep over with no drama. The test seems the contention and not school or whose in what relationship, typical teen angst.
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..............My only concern now would be payment of services rendered, what are Anton's chances if they don't pay after the shipment is delivered? Not deliver?
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...................Say what!!!!!!! Actually Hebrew is right. Hebrew meaning: The name Benji is a Hebrew baby name. The Hebrew meaning of Benji is: Son of the right hand. And my given Hebrew name is Ben H'abit Abraham. Yet to make it more fun, my father was Irish as reflected on my legally written surname.
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..............Hello, whats with that? Aren't the 'two guests' with the company that hired out Anton's boat? This doesn't make any sense unless the whole thing was a set up in the first place. Interesting chapter!
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.................1.) Yep figured that. 2.) That was sarcasm 3.) That is plain to see!
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........... So how did Ms. Jones just seem to hone in on Phillip (is he obviously gay?) I think it is safe to say everyone had that one teacher. that didn't hold any deeming qualities. Sad to hear about Wesley, hope he recovers. I like the way you cleverly put your PB&J into the story, I bet it was planned all along Nice chapter, will see how this works out.
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...........Well a lot has passed and a confused Ethan still waits, Caleb moves on lost, unaware of time. The only thing in common is their want of each other, so far and so near. Great chapter!
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....... Agree, rash decisions have served Anton well in the past, exception made for that misguided trip ending up with them being marooned. Perhaps a resume submitted by the two new crew members would have been made unbeknownst to the others, like 'do you know how to swim?' Great chapter!
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.................. Errr, in hindsight don't you think it might have been a good idea to ask what Anton is going to be transporting? Maybe Jasper will do some digging into (whoever) Anton did business with. Did he even get a name? I mean; “That sounds fair enough. You have a deal there. The trips will be approximately two to four weeks apart, depending on the demand for supplies in each area. We will see you later,” the logistics manager said as he shook my hand and they stepped off the vessel. I mean that doesn't that sound a bit fishy? Great chapter!
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................Hell of an entrance, I notice that both mother and son are not much on talking! Well Ian seems to have made a start to his recovery, although healing of the quads can take a long time, I'm sure he will do it. Great chapter!!
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.......Freudian slip, or hunger??
