Benji

...............I think Billy will be around for a bit longer, he will only be dispensed of if it suits Bridget's needs, besides he is the only one right now that She can trust, she is in a different world right now, in a new situation.

............. Better question is how is Bridget going to connive Sanchez into putting her wet flowers into a vase, will she busy making her favorite dinner for them, and happy Sanchez with his newly acquired head happily agree?

............... Dimethyl sulfoxide, interesting choice for Bridget to use against Sanchez, but I wonder if she is going to prepare a lasagna dinner for him too! Whatever did Billy pick-up from the post office, could she had a another teen killed and beheaded that looked like Trevor? Because the first thing Sanchez is going to want to see is the head. Shane and Trevor are starting to get the idea that there is something is on board the Kookaburra that Bridget wants, I wonder if the Navy can assist them in the search, or will Trevor merely show Shane where and how he had a concealed compartment, and in demonstrating accidentally open it? The danger to Trevor still exists, if they reveal their find to Fowler and word makes it to the wrong ears. Great chapter CJ!

............... Yeah well it has been quite awhile since the author has updated. from Jan. 0f 11 to November is a stretch. Do however e-mail the author as I have done, perhaps he will 'awaken'.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY OLD BOB!!! ..............Hope it was a great one!!

............Hey, nice chapter! I liked Nurse Nancy, now the truck making an appearance makes something ominous seem to be about happen soon.

...............Actually I don't get it, Bridget used up her trump cards as they went in here favor, so her saying of the failed attempt by Mr. B was just a guess at the outcome, she hedged it by having up photos in case it went wrong. Her goal was along to unseat Sanchez from the cartels chair, and she had hoped of his failures to back it up. Bridget wants power restored to her, and Sanchez is a fool not to recognize it!

You know what, in certain instances I believe society needs to be protected against the likes of these from ever being released back into the public to re-do their fantasy crimes. How can you atoll the life of one that had no indifference on another? I doubt it was his first, I think it was his first videoed and sent on the net.

........... A lot of people seem ready to retire, Mr. B took a long retirement, thanks to Bridget. And now she is ready to attend to Sanchez's retirement party. I wonder if Gonzales will surprise Bridget and attend the party, since he is town? One thing baffles me, When Jefe said; 'However, since our guest’s prior visit, I have been looking into the matter; I do not think it ended ten years ago'. He said in reference to the 'supposed' tape, I wonder what he meant by that? Now if Bridget succeeds and kills Sanchez, Trevor is most likely going to remain safe for awhile. But what if Sanchez is alerted of Bridget's upcoming promotion? If Bridget is killed, along with poor Billy, then Trevor's life remains in danger right now. I don't know who is more devious here, Bridget or the goat Great chapter P.S. The only way Trevor and Shane are going to survive is if the found evidence is recovered and handed over to the police, I have said it many times before, once found and exposed the threat is over. Especially if Bridget overestimated the contents and they only named herself and Sanchez. The rest of the cartel are not going to be concerned with Trevor if they are free and clear of any implications.

....................... I will get it tonight around 10:30 - 1100 pm tonight, always do!!

I agree with you and wonder if this victim was his first, he sounds very much like a serial killer in the works, or just one that let his over-zealousness take over for him to film it! There may be more victims that are unknown, perhaps unsolved murders in Montreal, I'm sure the Police there are looking into it!

Breaking News! Montreal's Murder Suspect Porn Star Caught In Berlin Germany

.............That is where the 'mole' comes into play, somebody has been feeding info to the cartel about the fact that Trevor's mom was still alive and that the Kookaburra was actually the Ares. Notice that the supposed trap set up by Fowler and Ned of the Atlantis was never a target? Bridget knew the boys were on the Kookaburra, and there above ocean flight proved what she was looking for, after all they had the transmitter still working on the Atlantis.

............But what? I just saw Krista's long awaited chapter of 'Standing In Shadows' I missed her 14th chapter some how because she was posting to far apart. Better known novelists can get away with 'monthly postings' because they built a fan base, you are just starting, so why are you surprised? I still follow Driver, he posts monthly, Also Ronyx, he posts weekly, as well as CJ. They don't get a following for nothing, they keep the reader intrigued in the story, I have noticed that you moved this story into Jacobs site, I hope you get many responses there. That said, I think you should post chapters for your own enjoyment, and not worry what others think.

Ok, Krista, how did you slip a chapter (14) in without me knowing about it? I had to find it by reading 15, because I was lost in the timeline. I kinda figured Clinton out early on as being a mate for Corey, the boat/fishing trip was a major clue to me. Corey's father is a major ass, I don't know Corey's mother puts up with him. I actually think he has known all along that Corey is gay and was in denial and put the hard down on his son. Why his wife put up with it is beyond me, could be that she saw him being protected from the town in some strange twisted way by her husbands demands. Back to Clinton, that is going to be one strange conversation in the morning like I said I was not surprised by Clinton, and I wonder if he backed out of the trip with CJ claiming illness or was really left behind. Next chapter will be very interesting................ Whenever it comes!!!!!!

........ The Kookaburra (Aries) has never been searched, there was never a need before! Now that they know the kookaburra was also being sought Trevor will think why? I don't believe the bows are where Arnold hid the 'evidence', that was another misdirection by the goat, I wouldn't be surprised if when showing Shane where and how he built a hiding spot in the forward cabin the idea occurs to them to use the magnet everywhere.

..................Nope, Bridget has no desire to take Trevor's life unless it needs be. She is only seeking the contents of the boat, in which Trevor seems to stand in the way of.

.................I disagree, why would someone want the boat? Unless there is something on board it besides Trevor that they want? At first it was a trap to indict Dirk, but that has passed on, so now the quandary is why they wanted the boat? Trevor has to figure this one out, there is something on the boat that the Egyptians, pirates and Mr.B where after, first it was his death and now his head is warranted, that should clue him into the fact that Bridget once owned these boats and something was possibly aboard it. Trevor also knows now that the cartel is involved with Bridget, only conclusion he could come up with is that there is something on the boat that they want kept hidden, so logically it would seem he would do his own search and find the damming evidence that would do much damage to the cartel. I kind of seriously doubt that the remaining cartel have any qualms about Trevor anymore. But have many against Sanchez and Bridget.

................ I noticed that Trevor only gave one gun back to the Commander and kept one. I hope he finds a great hiding place for it. If Mr. B told Trevor everything, then they know that the boat is also a target. Trevor and Shane are going to do a search for a hidden compartment. I don't see anyway Bridget is going to be able to complete her mission unless she gets Billy to buy another 'toy' and launch it with the dynamite attached. Mr. Gray won't touch this with a ten foot pole and will be quite pissed at Mr. B for his indiscretion.

Jodi from Soap (Billy Crystal) many decades ago.

...................Methinks you over-think this too much! A weekly posting reminds people, there are so many stories coming out of here in GA, that a lapse can make people forget they were reading it. I remember reading 'Charlie' then the author didn't write for awhile, I forgot I was reading it until I saw it on another site. Found out it was completed, Hahaha! I respond to every story I read, some don't, and that is a shame, apathy is a funny thing, but readers should always acknowledge the authors time and at least say something or put up a like!

...........Ditto!!

...............Holy crap the second is like out of the movie water world

..............The goat has been known to throw in a monkey wrench or two! ..........Steve, Steve, Steve, you know the goat loves to mix villain and hero in a name calling fest! And we all know of the 'evil little brother that Eric was' I still want to strangle that little SOB %***@@*&&* Yep, I too see the demise of Mr. B and Sanchez, but if he leaves Bridget alive is another matter that would seem to think of a sequel in the future, IDK. depends on the ending I suppose. Grundig as a possible criminal? I think it is plausible given the goats inference that false information was being fed into the Customs department, plus Gundig's guess that Fowler and Trevor were related seemed odd, but not out of line. Still there is Julie to consider, she could very well be the cartels pacific connection.

.........Nope Mr. B. is done for, even if he escapes the authorities, his taped confession is his death warrant. Nope, no sequel on this one yet, but there is another story in the works that deals with an 'evil little character named Eric' From 'For The Love' I do believe!