Benji

HAPPY BIRTHDAY OLD BOB!!! ..............Hope it was a great one!!

............Hey, nice chapter! I liked Nurse Nancy, now the truck making an appearance makes something ominous seem to be about happen soon.

...............Actually I don't get it, Bridget used up her trump cards as they went in here favor, so her saying of the failed attempt by Mr. B was just a guess at the outcome, she hedged it by having up photos in case it went wrong. Her goal was along to unseat Sanchez from the cartels chair, and she had hoped of his failures to back it up. Bridget wants power restored to her, and Sanchez is a fool not to recognize it!

You know what, in certain instances I believe society needs to be protected against the likes of these from ever being released back into the public to re-do their fantasy crimes. How can you atoll the life of one that had no indifference on another? I doubt it was his first, I think it was his first videoed and sent on the net.

........... A lot of people seem ready to retire, Mr. B took a long retirement, thanks to Bridget. And now she is ready to attend to Sanchez's retirement party. I wonder if Gonzales will surprise Bridget and attend the party, since he is town? One thing baffles me, When Jefe said; 'However, since our guest’s prior visit, I have been looking into the matter; I do not think it ended ten years ago'. He said in reference to the 'supposed' tape, I wonder what he meant by that? Now if Bridget succeeds and kills Sanchez, Trevor is most likely going to remain safe for awhile. But what if Sanchez is alerted of Bridget's upcoming promotion? If Bridget is killed, along with poor Billy, then Trevor's life remains in danger right now. I don't know who is more devious here, Bridget or the goat Great chapter P.S. The only way Trevor and Shane are going to survive is if the found evidence is recovered and handed over to the police, I have said it many times before, once found and exposed the threat is over. Especially if Bridget overestimated the contents and they only named herself and Sanchez. The rest of the cartel are not going to be concerned with Trevor if they are free and clear of any implications.

....................... I will get it tonight around 10:30 - 1100 pm tonight, always do!!

I agree with you and wonder if this victim was his first, he sounds very much like a serial killer in the works, or just one that let his over-zealousness take over for him to film it! There may be more victims that are unknown, perhaps unsolved murders in Montreal, I'm sure the Police there are looking into it!

Breaking News! Montreal's Murder Suspect Porn Star Caught In Berlin Germany

.............That is where the 'mole' comes into play, somebody has been feeding info to the cartel about the fact that Trevor's mom was still alive and that the Kookaburra was actually the Ares. Notice that the supposed trap set up by Fowler and Ned of the Atlantis was never a target? Bridget knew the boys were on the Kookaburra, and there above ocean flight proved what she was looking for, after all they had the transmitter still working on the Atlantis.

Ok, Krista, how did you slip a chapter (14) in without me knowing about it? I had to find it by reading 15, because I was lost in the timeline. I kinda figured Clinton out early on as being a mate for Corey, the boat/fishing trip was a major clue to me. Corey's father is a major ass, I don't know Corey's mother puts up with him. I actually think he has known all along that Corey is gay and was in denial and put the hard down on his son. Why his wife put up with it is beyond me, could be that she saw him being protected from the town in some strange twisted way by her husbands demands. Back to Clinton, that is going to be one strange conversation in the morning like I said I was not surprised by Clinton, and I wonder if he backed out of the trip with CJ claiming illness or was really left behind. Next chapter will be very interesting................ Whenever it comes!!!!!!

........ The Kookaburra (Aries) has never been searched, there was never a need before! Now that they know the kookaburra was also being sought Trevor will think why? I don't believe the bows are where Arnold hid the 'evidence', that was another misdirection by the goat, I wouldn't be surprised if when showing Shane where and how he built a hiding spot in the forward cabin the idea occurs to them to use the magnet everywhere.

..................Nope, Bridget has no desire to take Trevor's life unless it needs be. She is only seeking the contents of the boat, in which Trevor seems to stand in the way of.

.................I disagree, why would someone want the boat? Unless there is something on board it besides Trevor that they want? At first it was a trap to indict Dirk, but that has passed on, so now the quandary is why they wanted the boat? Trevor has to figure this one out, there is something on the boat that the Egyptians, pirates and Mr.B where after, first it was his death and now his head is warranted, that should clue him into the fact that Bridget once owned these boats and something was possibly aboard it. Trevor also knows now that the cartel is involved with Bridget, only conclusion he could come up with is that there is something on the boat that they want kept hidden, so logically it would seem he would do his own search and find the damming evidence that would do much damage to the cartel. I kind of seriously doubt that the remaining cartel have any qualms about Trevor anymore. But have many against Sanchez and Bridget.

................ I noticed that Trevor only gave one gun back to the Commander and kept one. I hope he finds a great hiding place for it. If Mr. B told Trevor everything, then they know that the boat is also a target. Trevor and Shane are going to do a search for a hidden compartment. I don't see anyway Bridget is going to be able to complete her mission unless she gets Billy to buy another 'toy' and launch it with the dynamite attached. Mr. Gray won't touch this with a ten foot pole and will be quite pissed at Mr. B for his indiscretion.

Jodi from Soap (Billy Crystal) many decades ago.

...........Ditto!!

...............Holy crap the second is like out of the movie water world

..............The goat has been known to throw in a monkey wrench or two! ..........Steve, Steve, Steve, you know the goat loves to mix villain and hero in a name calling fest! And we all know of the 'evil little brother that Eric was' I still want to strangle that little SOB %***@@*&&* Yep, I too see the demise of Mr. B and Sanchez, but if he leaves Bridget alive is another matter that would seem to think of a sequel in the future, IDK. depends on the ending I suppose. Grundig as a possible criminal? I think it is plausible given the goats inference that false information was being fed into the Customs department, plus Gundig's guess that Fowler and Trevor were related seemed odd, but not out of line. Still there is Julie to consider, she could very well be the cartels pacific connection.

.........Nope Mr. B. is done for, even if he escapes the authorities, his taped confession is his death warrant. Nope, no sequel on this one yet, but there is another story in the works that deals with an 'evil little character named Eric' From 'For The Love' I do believe!

.............Great chapter, I knew those shark sticks would come in handy! Mr. B underestimated an angry Trevor, and Trevor knew exactly what buttons to push in getting the confession. So glad he had the hindsight to record it, that is the end of Mr. B. one way or the other he is gone. Sanchez failed again, this time by being greedy wanting Trevor's head has cost him the kill he needed, Sanchez is finished once word gets out of the assassination attempt on Trevor failed, the bombings are world wide news, and the cartel is watching. Bridget is still holding her trump card against Sanchez, she has just about used all her 'nine lives' and still needs the Kookaburra. I can see this wrapping up in 3-5 chapters

Give it up guys, it is a ploy the goat uses here and then to irk his readers and inflate his ego! When I agreed with another here that the author left not one cliffhanger I did not mean it was free, rather then there were more then one cliffhangers involved. Suck on that Goat!

Actually, I think he got off lightly considering he was not remorseful nor apologetic for his actions. However, I think this will follow him for the rest of his life, that may be justice enough. I imagine he can not go anywhere without being pointed out, or have to look behind his back everywhere he goes. This will haunt him.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY MYR !!! .................. 35 is young my friend! Have a good one!

................ I agree also, I thought it was Jessica that would go home and it would be between Josh and Phillip. Personally I think Josh sang to many 'old' songs. I also expect Phillip to take the crown.

...............Okay! I agree Steve I did not find one cliffhanger in the last chapter!