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Benji

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  1. .................. Nice try goat but Trevor and Shane are leaving the area and why would Basingstokes head any where near Rye's cove? (BTW, WTF is a name like Basingstoke?) He has not flown over the water as of yet, only inland which means he has no idea what he is looking for. His interest is only in two locations, and by the lucky flip of a coin he is brought closer to Trevor in Carnarvorn. By the time he gets info intel on the subject he is hunting, Trevor and Shane will be long gone. But Kline will not be, and will be the lead into the assassins target. Minus a few fingers or toes I'm sure, I'll be disappointed if he does not offer Kline a skydiving lesson in his thanks for the information.
  2. Benji

    Chapter 12

    ............ Wow, another chapter! I wonder what Clinton is doing? My guess is he is gay as well. So Jenny figured out that Corey is gay, then it is a shoe-in Corey's mom knows also. The puppy will probably be a big issue at home, wonder how long it will take before his dad becomes attached to the puppy himself? Great chapter, Krista, keep them coming!!
  3. ................... And I thought the US topped the world in ignorance!!
  4. .............Wait a minute, his stop is at Halls Creek and the 2nd stop is Newman, It certainly looks like he is heading south to me and then headed to Carnarvon!
  5. ................ Plenty of mentions of beheading here in this chapter! So I wonder how long Trevor and Shane will be gone from the Kookaburra when they adventure into inner Australia? Will their boat be spotted by an aircraft, and a visit by errr....... a certain visitor come aboard? I still think the hit-man will get the wrong target, perhaps another hapless thief coming off the Kookaburra at the wrong place wrong time? Nice chapter goat, laid out Trevor's concern a bit too nicely, Martin was unfazed by the revelation which leads me to believe he knew ahead of time Fowler and Martin talk a lot to each other a lot! Oh BTW, By NOT releasing the title of the next chapter I deem it worthy of a cliffhanger!
  6. ............ BTW, Marty I never did thank you for that Now I'm on his damn sig.
  7. Benji

    Chapter 1

    .............. Nice start in the story, I think Brandon will find that he and Tyler have something in common afterall. Although it is too early to tell if Tyler is str8, bi or gay, I'm sure that if he said anything about being gay the drunk stupor they both are in might not be wise as emotions while drunk are not a good idea. Hey Jobo, I never knew you wrote, looking forward to more.
  8. Exactly, I couldn't have said it better James!!
  9. ................... By proxy of course, by proxy!
  10. I have tried to post a comment here 4 times already and erased it. This site was a blessing to me and a bit of a curse, I caused the CURSE. I finally felt a bit free and loved reading the stories and the exchange with people on here and on other sites. I think a friend gave me Comsie's site that led me here, been awhile I'm pretty sure though. I do not regret being here at all, I made the mistake of trying to answer on some stories and some how or another they made it back to my workplace computer, I never sent it to my my workplace back then, but it showed up just the same. I guess I wasn't witty enough to realize that this could happen, but it did. I was forced to retire as some of the stories had garnered enough interest to think them vulgar enough to warrent my expulsion. Truth be told the nasty ass director was in a bind over her budget and wanted to get rid of me as it fitted her mold of 'papered kids'. I was there for over 20 years, never been written up nor late and received many commendations on my work. BTW, those so called stories that went threw the system, the only thing I could see was a 'single' word of the word 'f**k' in it that was against policy. Retribution is great, they finally fired her ass last January. All in all I have never regretted joining this group, as I said before this site was a blessing to me and a self-made curse.
  11. ...... Oh yes forgot it, that is the third time the Lime Pie can into play here, less then two weeks until the statutes of limitations are off. Will Trevor's 'family' find him first, after all Fowler told Trevor at the 'end of the month' for the document search trail to unfold. But really, couldn't a government agency pull some strings in getting that information quicker? My guess is that Fowler and Martin are holding back, and watching Trevor's back at the same time. Trevor's mom is close, and her only contact is with an occasional Lime Pie.
  12. ..................... Well done! A nice chapter before you start opening up your chamber of terrors!! I think Dr. Anna was great with Trevor, surprised he opened up to her about Shane, but I guess it was necessary considering Shane was Trevor's distraction and it caused his panic attack. Surprised also at Dirk's insight into Bridget's motive in keeping Lisa and Joel close by in the guesthouse. Since they already mentioned 'bug' will Henry take the thought into a leap that the place is also bugged? I think Trevor's worries about Martin allowing him to continue to operate the Kookaburra are for naught, seems Fowler and Martin both know the safest place is out of sight, out at sea. Is Ned starting to warm up to Shane??? I thought it sweet how those two missed each other in just a days absence from each other. Will Barney still buy the crew rounds of drinks after he finds out the note and garlic crusher have already been turned over. and will Shane use it in his book? Humm, I re-read this 3 times, and could not find an inkling of some cruel hint of things to come.
  13. HAPPY BIRTHDAY CIA!!!!! .........................Have a great one!!
  14. .............. 'Nuff said here :lmao:
  15. My crazy thoughts!!!
  16. ............. I can try, but Marty can be as stubborn ...... as a goat!
  17. ............... IDK, could be referring to a psychologist/shrink. Could be the goat flubbed the word , wouldn't be the first time! I was trying to run through some scenarios out there, but nothing seemed to pop out other then Trevor's upcoming doctor visit. P.S. Marty, you never responded to my BS comment.
  18. ........ My thoughts!!
  19. .......................... Ackk, Don't add to the misery here for the goat to complicate upon our heroes.
  20. ...................... Humm, I like that scenario, maybe that is why CJ made this thread!!!! I had only 2 more deaths from him occurring, maybe 3 with the hitman. ( Henry and Kline). Others to follow Bridget and George, (In case of a sequel then only George with Bridget on the loose).
  21. ........ Yeah, big opps!! I forgot that convo.
  22. ............I know that, but that was not revealed until this chapter!!
  23. ......... True, but how you deduced that Kline had Trevor's mothers maiden name is beyond me.
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