Benji

My thoughts

DONE!!!, Again why didn't this make press????

................ I'm 99.9% sure that Trevor's mom is alive and well in Australia and I'm equally sure that she is either with the Fowler's or the Blake's, I'm not sure if she is really married though as that might complicate things given she is presumed dead and bigamy is illegal there and in the U.S. I'm leaning towards it being (Mr.s) Blake as Fowler said he 'just learned recently' of complicated issues. What we know; The Aries did not go down in the area that Trevor was searching, as Dirk almost blurted out everything when he chastised Trevor by saying 'You can't risk searching there, because she is not.... (there?)" Dirk is not afraid of facing the murder charges of his wife, because he knows he did not murder her, he must be aware of her still being alive, as he wanted to send Trevor to see his mom's family. As I suggested way earlier, all that needed to get the hint that she was still living would be a blank postcard sent from Austrailia every so often nothing incriminating about that. The 2nd reason I believe she is still alive is the subtle hints the goat leaves us with the key lime pies, I'm sure that Fowler's wife is creating them for Trevor, at his mom's request. Given Shane's shady past and against advice from several people including Mr. Blake, she let's Shane stay on the Kookaburra, Why? Could her motherly instinct have taken over and Shane reminded her of her own son Trevor? As far as the 'mother's dilemma' I concur with you 100%. My thoughts!!

............................ Looks good! LOL! WTH is with that guys toes though??

,,,,,,,,,,,,,, Nope, I would have gotten that title of the chapter in a hearts beat. That said, I'm sure things have now turned around enough that Fowler had to make this deal with the devil. The biggest hint is this chapter; "Fowler shook his head. “Thanks, but I’d prefer to take him out alone. I’d like to keep you out of this, as much as possible. Craig… I know you’ve guessed, or at least suspect, that there’s a lot I haven’t told you. It’s… complicated. There are some things I recently learnt that… I can’t say more at the moment, but I will soon.” Hmmmm! Still doesn't tell us if it is Fowler's or Blake's wife that is in reality Rachel, long lost mother of Trevor. Fowler is hinting here that he is being less then honest to Craig. But still is he misleading because of his wife or his best freinds wife? Confusion on where Disaster Cove is, if it is where the last map shows (South of where Trevor entered into Sharks Bay) then it is miles from the southern point to be reached, and how is Ned going to get there? Hey Goat I told you y'all needed new maps!! Great chapter CJ!

................... Don't even think of giving in to newbies comments! It was because of them that you ran a few chapters of Trevor and Shane together, they wanted it and more and now they complain that you are stalling the story? PLEEEEASSSSE! The story is going just fine here, do NOT change anything in it to quell the antics of a few that want more immediately. Your story is just fine and the time line although a bit excruciating it is in tune and great. I would be honored and proud to have an autographed copy of this book, which I know would be a best seller!!!.

Why would you even go there? You already now how hard it was for you to come to terms of your sexuality, so now you want to dream a dream that can never be done because of your desire for him? If there is a possibility are you willing to risk the friendship at your age? BTW, my guess is that he already knows of your feelings towards him and is waiting for you to confirm it and gently let you down.

.................. Nice try goat but Trevor and Shane are leaving the area and why would Basingstokes head any where near Rye's cove? (BTW, WTF is a name like Basingstoke?) He has not flown over the water as of yet, only inland which means he has no idea what he is looking for. His interest is only in two locations, and by the lucky flip of a coin he is brought closer to Trevor in Carnarvorn. By the time he gets info intel on the subject he is hunting, Trevor and Shane will be long gone. But Kline will not be, and will be the lead into the assassins target. Minus a few fingers or toes I'm sure, I'll be disappointed if he does not offer Kline a skydiving lesson in his thanks for the information.

....................... Congrats!!!!

............ Wow, another chapter! I wonder what Clinton is doing? My guess is he is gay as well. So Jenny figured out that Corey is gay, then it is a shoe-in Corey's mom knows also. The puppy will probably be a big issue at home, wonder how long it will take before his dad becomes attached to the puppy himself? Great chapter, Krista, keep them coming!!

............ Wow, another chapter! I wonder what Clinton is doing? My guess is he is gay as well. So Jenny figured out that Corey is gay, then it is a shoe-in Corey's mom knows also. The puppy will probably be a big issue at home, wonder how long it will take before his dad becomes attached to the puppy himself? Great chapter, Krista, keep them coming!!

................... And I thought the US topped the world in ignorance!!

Best of luck!!!

.............Wait a minute, his stop is at Halls Creek and the 2nd stop is Newman, It certainly looks like he is heading south to me and then headed to Carnarvon!

................ Plenty of mentions of beheading here in this chapter! So I wonder how long Trevor and Shane will be gone from the Kookaburra when they adventure into inner Australia? Will their boat be spotted by an aircraft, and a visit by errr....... a certain visitor come aboard? I still think the hit-man will get the wrong target, perhaps another hapless thief coming off the Kookaburra at the wrong place wrong time? Nice chapter goat, laid out Trevor's concern a bit too nicely, Martin was unfazed by the revelation which leads me to believe he knew ahead of time Fowler and Martin talk a lot to each other a lot! Oh BTW, By NOT releasing the title of the next chapter I deem it worthy of a cliffhanger!

............ BTW, Marty I never did thank you for that Now I'm on his damn sig.

.............. Nice start in the story, I think Brandon will find that he and Tyler have something in common afterall. Although it is too early to tell if Tyler is str8, bi or gay, I'm sure that if he said anything about being gay the drunk stupor they both are in might not be wise as emotions while drunk are not a good idea. Hey Jobo, I never knew you wrote, looking forward to more.

............... It was great, just what you would expect in a trial. I loved the reserved back seats for Jordan's family! I don't know how many more witnesses there will be for the Prosecution, they didn't really mention the names in the list. But I'm guessing Jason, Darryl and the girls that were with them the night Jordan first encountered them. What ever will Rankin do? My guess he will call the other defendants to the stand alleging that Peter was making homosexual advances at them. In Rankins mind this is a hick town. He hopes prejudice will prevail, if he puts Jordan on the stand, his case will fall apart. I'm pretty sure Martin can push Jordan's buttons and he will come unglued in front of the jury. Great Chapter, can't wait for more next Sunday!!

Exactly, I couldn't have said it better James!!

................... By proxy of course, by proxy!

I have tried to post a comment here 4 times already and erased it. This site was a blessing to me and a bit of a curse, I caused the CURSE. I finally felt a bit free and loved reading the stories and the exchange with people on here and on other sites. I think a friend gave me Comsie's site that led me here, been awhile I'm pretty sure though. I do not regret being here at all, I made the mistake of trying to answer on some stories and some how or another they made it back to my workplace computer, I never sent it to my my workplace back then, but it showed up just the same. I guess I wasn't witty enough to realize that this could happen, but it did. I was forced to retire as some of the stories had garnered enough interest to think them vulgar enough to warrent my expulsion. Truth be told the nasty ass director was in a bind over her budget and wanted to get rid of me as it fitted her mold of 'papered kids'. I was there for over 20 years, never been written up nor late and received many commendations on my work. BTW, those so called stories that went threw the system, the only thing I could see was a 'single' word of the word 'f**k' in it that was against policy. Retribution is great, they finally fired her ass last January. All in all I have never regretted joining this group, as I said before this site was a blessing to me and a self-made curse.

...... Oh yes forgot it, that is the third time the Lime Pie can into play here, less then two weeks until the statutes of limitations are off. Will Trevor's 'family' find him first, after all Fowler told Trevor at the 'end of the month' for the document search trail to unfold. But really, couldn't a government agency pull some strings in getting that information quicker? My guess is that Fowler and Martin are holding back, and watching Trevor's back at the same time. Trevor's mom is close, and her only contact is with an occasional Lime Pie.

..................... Well done! A nice chapter before you start opening up your chamber of terrors!! I think Dr. Anna was great with Trevor, surprised he opened up to her about Shane, but I guess it was necessary considering Shane was Trevor's distraction and it caused his panic attack. Surprised also at Dirk's insight into Bridget's motive in keeping Lisa and Joel close by in the guesthouse. Since they already mentioned 'bug' will Henry take the thought into a leap that the place is also bugged? I think Trevor's worries about Martin allowing him to continue to operate the Kookaburra are for naught, seems Fowler and Martin both know the safest place is out of sight, out at sea. Is Ned starting to warm up to Shane??? I thought it sweet how those two missed each other in just a days absence from each other. Will Barney still buy the crew rounds of drinks after he finds out the note and garlic crusher have already been turned over. and will Shane use it in his book? Humm, I re-read this 3 times, and could not find an inkling of some cruel hint of things to come.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY CIA!!!!! .........................Have a great one!!