Jim Fraser

Awesome chapter my friend. It's great seeing Fabian and Ryland's characters developing. The snow in the dining room was a great touch which is going to keep the story interesting. Thanks again for a great chapter

I love the characters you've created. I can't wait for more to see these characters come to life. I too heard an Irish accent when Alvora spoke. Keep up the great work.

Loving this story already can't wait for the next chapters this story I think is going to go places. Great work as always.

This is going to be a roller-coaster ride of emotions judging by the first chapter. Waiting patiently for more.

Awesome chapter and overall storyline. I love your writing style. Can't wait for what's next.

You never fail to amaze me @Mrsgnomie. I hope we're going to see more of Loren, Jay, Kyan and Perry in a story involving all four of them. And a new story involving Max and Reid is a natural next step and would be wonderful. I know I'm asking a lot but I love your writing and it would keep us busy for the next month or two reading the two stories. Way to go Mrsgnomie.

Beautiful story @Libby Drewand but from you I've learned to only experience perfection. Made my heart so warm.

I love this group of characters & how you brought their personalities to life. This was an amazing chapter and I agree with the others I was hungry by the time I finished it. The children are always welcome with their little personalities showing who they are. Keep up the good work and I will keep reading all your work. Cheers Jim

I'm loving the story this chapter was very interesting. It reminded me of an incident with a raccoon and the dog across the street from me. This Golden Retriever stepped between the mother and her baby. I was sitting on my porch when I heard this unbelievable Screech as the raccoon went for the dog's throat and ripped it open. My neighbor came out to try to save his dog She chased him back up his stairs and stopped when he went in the house. That was the one and only time I've ever seen a raccoon do that. Thanks for this story I'm loving every chapter and please keep going I wait in suspenses to what's going to happen next.

What a beautiful way to end a story that has some tragedy in it. All the hell that Aiden went through he deserves to be happy and it's obvious that Xavier makes him happy. I would love to see the look on Jason's face when he finds out that there are a couple. I hope it lasts and I hope marriage finds the two of them together for their life. Maybe an epilogue that includes their marriage would be wonderful.

What an amazing story. It was a roller-coaster right but a good one. I loved every characters personalities and the way you brought them to life. I'm sad it's over because I loved the storyline. Did I miss any mention of the lawsuit settlements? Keep up the great writing and work.

Wow @LibbyDrew is all that I can start with. Great start to what appears as another magical, intense, suspenseful story that will captive readers chapter after chapter. Thank you Libby I can't wait for more. Cheers

This is an amazing series it is a must read. I guarantee that you will fall in love with each one of the characters in the way that Jonathan has brought them to life. You will see them in your mind and you will feel what they feel in their hearts. You will experience their grief and their sorrow and you will cry with them laugh with them and I guarantee you that you will love them. This story emphasizes what family is all about and it doesn't mean that you have to be blood to be family. As we know so well in the gay community we have our chosen family that we're often closer to than our own who may have disowned us. This story will lift you up and drop you down just as fast you will have a roller coaster of emotional experiences that will affect you and stay with you. Jonathan you are an amazing author and I will continue to follow all of your works. I just wish I could get you to continue with this series as it's become to mean so much to me and all of the characters I feel like they're part of my life and part of my mind and it's all thanks to you.

Well done Jonathan. I hope there's some more Chronicles from the orchard coming. You've worked so hard on these characters that I hate to see them Fade Into nothingness.

Well Jonathan you did it you surprise me with how quick this came down. Josh will now have the family that he's deserved all of his life and he will build strong bonds with his brother and his nephews and his brother-in-law and I'm certain he will become the six member of the team. Great chapter I don't want this to end I've fallen totally in love with all the characters even though I was devastated by David's death because it brought back so many painful memories of the losses in my life. But you captured how grief turns around to wonderful memories the pain never goes away but the memories keep us surviving. Thank you.