Jim Fraser
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Awesome chapter my friend. It's great seeing Fabian and Ryland's characters developing. The snow in the dining room was a great touch which is going to keep the story interesting. Thanks again for a great chapter
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I love the characters you've created. I can't wait for more to see these characters come to life. I too heard an Irish accent when Alvora spoke. Keep up the great work.
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Loving this story already can't wait for the next chapters this story I think is going to go places. Great work as always.
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This is going to be a roller-coaster ride of emotions judging by the first chapter. Waiting patiently for more.
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Awesome chapter and overall storyline. I love your writing style. Can't wait for what's next.
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You never fail to amaze me @Mrsgnomie. I hope we're going to see more of Loren, Jay, Kyan and Perry in a story involving all four of them. And a new story involving Max and Reid is a natural next step and would be wonderful. I know I'm asking a lot but I love your writing and it would keep us busy for the next month or two reading the two stories. Way to go Mrsgnomie.
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Beautiful story @Libby Drewand but from you I've learned to only experience perfection. Made my heart so warm.
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I love this group of characters & how you brought their personalities to life. This was an amazing chapter and I agree with the others I was hungry by the time I finished it. The children are always welcome with their little personalities showing who they are. Keep up the good work and I will keep reading all your work. Cheers Jim
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I'm loving the story this chapter was very interesting. It reminded me of an incident with a raccoon and the dog across the street from me. This Golden Retriever stepped between the mother and her baby. I was sitting on my porch when I heard this unbelievable Screech as the raccoon went for the dog's throat and ripped it open. My neighbor came out to try to save his dog She chased him back up his stairs and stopped when he went in the house. That was the one and only time I've ever seen a raccoon do that. Thanks for this story I'm loving every chapter and please keep going I wait in suspenses to what's going to happen next.
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What a beautiful way to end a story that has some tragedy in it. All the hell that Aiden went through he deserves to be happy and it's obvious that Xavier makes him happy. I would love to see the look on Jason's face when he finds out that there are a couple. I hope it lasts and I hope marriage finds the two of them together for their life. Maybe an epilogue that includes their marriage would be wonderful.
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A birthday, a Flash in the Pan, and College Maybe?
Jim Fraser commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A birthday, a Flash in the Pan, and College Maybe?
What an amazing story. It was a roller-coaster right but a good one. I loved every characters personalities and the way you brought them to life. I'm sad it's over because I loved the storyline. Did I miss any mention of the lawsuit settlements? Keep up the great writing and work. -
Wow @LibbyDrew is all that I can start with. Great start to what appears as another magical, intense, suspenseful story that will captive readers chapter after chapter. Thank you Libby I can't wait for more. Cheers
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Cinnamon alcohol stings under the foreskin lol.
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It's tequila or sambuccas poured into a stretched foreskin & you put it in your mouth & suck the alcohol out lol. No oysters lol.
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I'm surprised they didn't do foreskin shooters. I learned to do those at a bar in Toronto a gay pool tournament. Our team went on to play in the grand championship at Miss Kitty's in Dallas Texas where foreskin shooters were the drink of the night.
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Part One. Chapter Nine.
Jim Fraser commented on Mrsgnomie's story chapter in Part One. Chapter Nine.
Sorry Max you're not going to get the big one from Perry Kyan is. Kyan is in love with Perry as much as Perrys in love with him. I'm glad they're finally figuring it out.- 126 comments
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What a wonderful chapter Jim's Life is starting to unravel in front of them and there's not going to be a thing that he or Claudia can do. Now that David knows Amber recognized Ben he's going to push her for answers. I just hope we don't have to wait a long time for the next chapter the story is too appealing that I want to read more now. Thank you and keep up the good writing
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What an amazing story. I was captivated from the very first few paragraphs., I certainly hope this is not the end of The Adventures of these two, their friendship with the prince will only become stronger and he will be an integral part of their lives. I also foresee somehow Jamie finding a way to bring snave back into a human body that he creates for him. I'm so looking forward to the future with your writings. I'm a fan for life. Thank you again for such a marvelous story.
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The loyalty, respect, unwavering love between all the characters is amazing to see it developing. It will be the strongest magic that will save them all. All from the castle will be a tuned to the search party & their loyalty will provide strength that Lodda, Povis & Urvan will crumble under. I'm certain Master Thorvil will return to help with the battle to be fought. Amazing chapter.
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I will always follow and read what you post.
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Amazing as usual, well written & the food description left my mouth watering.
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Great chapter reminds me of my grief journey but as the time has passed the pain is still there and but happy memories are filling many voids. I thank you for your amazing writing talent. Your very special person.
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I'm having a blast but your posts are the highlight of my day. Thanks
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Your knowledge and writing continues to amaze me this chapter was loaded with so many new things to be learned by everyone including the readers. Keep up the good work you have us all with bated breath.
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What an amazing chapter Bill. Living in Canada all of my life and having native Canadians as part of my family I've watched the horrors of what the white man has done that affected members of my own family. The residential schools that forced native children into run by horrible Catholic priests and nuns results in the murder of many children that are just being discovered now thank God the late Queen Elizabeth and now King Charles we're determined to write this wrong it's taking many years to get a Canadian government on board but we're starting to finally see progress in the area to bring reconciliation to all.
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