Jim Fraser

Awesome chapter my friend. It's great seeing Fabian and Ryland's characters developing. The snow in the dining room was a great touch which is going to keep the story interesting. Thanks again for a great chapter

I love the characters you've created. I can't wait for more to see these characters come to life. I too heard an Irish accent when Alvora spoke. Keep up the great work.

Loving this story already can't wait for the next chapters this story I think is going to go places. Great work as always.

This is going to be a roller-coaster ride of emotions judging by the first chapter. Waiting patiently for more.

Awesome chapter and overall storyline. I love your writing style. Can't wait for what's next.

You never fail to amaze me @Mrsgnomie. I hope we're going to see more of Loren, Jay, Kyan and Perry in a story involving all four of them. And a new story involving Max and Reid is a natural next step and would be wonderful. I know I'm asking a lot but I love your writing and it would keep us busy for the next month or two reading the two stories. Way to go Mrsgnomie.

Beautiful story @Libby Drewand but from you I've learned to only experience perfection. Made my heart so warm.

I love this group of characters & how you brought their personalities to life. This was an amazing chapter and I agree with the others I was hungry by the time I finished it. The children are always welcome with their little personalities showing who they are. Keep up the good work and I will keep reading all your work. Cheers Jim

I'm loving the story this chapter was very interesting. It reminded me of an incident with a raccoon and the dog across the street from me. This Golden Retriever stepped between the mother and her baby. I was sitting on my porch when I heard this unbelievable Screech as the raccoon went for the dog's throat and ripped it open. My neighbor came out to try to save his dog She chased him back up his stairs and stopped when he went in the house. That was the one and only time I've ever seen a raccoon do that. Thanks for this story I'm loving every chapter and please keep going I wait in suspenses to what's going to happen next.

What a beautiful way to end a story that has some tragedy in it. All the hell that Aiden went through he deserves to be happy and it's obvious that Xavier makes him happy. I would love to see the look on Jason's face when he finds out that there are a couple. I hope it lasts and I hope marriage finds the two of them together for their life. Maybe an epilogue that includes their marriage would be wonderful.

What an amazing story. It was a roller-coaster right but a good one. I loved every characters personalities and the way you brought them to life. I'm sad it's over because I loved the storyline. Did I miss any mention of the lawsuit settlements? Keep up the great writing and work.

Wow @LibbyDrew is all that I can start with. Great start to what appears as another magical, intense, suspenseful story that will captive readers chapter after chapter. Thank you Libby I can't wait for more. Cheers

Cinnamon alcohol stings under the foreskin lol.

It's tequila or sambuccas poured into a stretched foreskin & you put it in your mouth & suck the alcohol out lol. No oysters lol.

I'm surprised they didn't do foreskin shooters. I learned to do those at a bar in Toronto a gay pool tournament. Our team went on to play in the grand championship at Miss Kitty's in Dallas Texas where foreskin shooters were the drink of the night.