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  1. Dan South
    The Gorgeous Gordons are three very different boys. Nothing implies that Mason is unkind to Brandon…yet. I’m left to wonder if the parents know they are raising a sociopath. As always, great storytelling.
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    Chapter 1

    Dan South commented on Hryjknyk's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Always excited to read an Author’s first offering! I have no doubt that this will be excellent and engaging storytelling. Following you so I don’t miss a word. Welcome!
  3. Dan South
    “He said yes” sums up their entire breakfast conversation beautifully. They both said yes. Jared pulling Craig up and kissing him should allay any fears Craig might harbor. I truly can’t remember what happens next but no one roasts marshmallows over a dumpster fire. Here’s ye one chance Carly…don’t let them down. Don’t let Bailey down.
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    I didn’t leave a reaction somehow but that has been corrected. Bedroom scene is still hot as hades. Love the humor you always manage to sprinkle throughout. The VCR tracking was priceless and took me way back. Love it. Pressing pause on my binge to go earn my keep. I won’t be able to put this down now so I better pace myself 😀
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    I would leave the same reaction today: ❤️ I also stand behind calling Carly a dumpster fire 😂
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    I’m going to sorta repeat what I said before. I called Carly ‘a bit pathological’ when I probably should have said she’s a sociopath. I definitely should have said how incredibly well written she is as a character. The whole scene at the kitchen table is fantastic, masterful. I’m so happy to reread this. Without the shock and awe of a first read I’m noticing much more detail.
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    Chapter 8

    Dan South commented on Justin4Fun's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Same regarding the original and totally agree. This is a fantastic standalone accomplishment that I hope the Author will be proud of since it deserves admiration and nothing less.
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    Chapter 8

    Dan South commented on Justin4Fun's story chapter in Chapter 8

    Pfft! 395 views last chapter and 132 for this installment in 24 hours. I don’t need to understand how you view your metrics because I’m just entertained and engrossed by your storytelling. Please tell me more.
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    Chapter 3 Tsunami

    Dan South commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 3 Tsunami

    368 days ago I left the same reaction I have now: ❤️ You know I’m a fan of your westerns but this makes me want to beg for another modern love story.
  10. Dan South
    Same reaction I had before ❤️
  11. Dan South
    I can’t react again but I can comment this reading. A new story review brought me back here, happily. Reaction: ❤️
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    Chapter 8

    Dan South commented on Justin4Fun's story chapter in Chapter 8

    I have to love the story and at the same time feel compelled disagree with the comments, politely. S-Corp is definitely the way to go. An LLC offers little personal protection, it’s all personal income, and the S-Corp is much better for drawing an income long term. The S-Corp can share your tax burden in a way that the LLC cannot. *steps off soapbox* This is a great read, great storytelling @Justin4Fun
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    Chapter 7 Castle

    Dan South commented on Headstall's story chapter in Chapter 7 Castle

    Quite a hot flame on this slow burn.
  14. Dan South
    I am a huge fan of historical fiction and the intricacies of this are intoxicating. History with a splash of Hermaphroditism. Please tell me more
  15. Dan South

    Chapter 24

    Dan South commented on John Henry's story chapter in Chapter 24

    Diego is such a great dad. Steve’s a natural too. Bryan brings the meta with the forced side plot. Gawd I love that
  16. Dan South
    One Gay boy, one Pan boy? @weinerdog wants you to describe Karl’s ass in detail 😂 Same here 🙋🏼‍♂️ So glad you like to share your ideas ❤️
  17. Dan South
    Expanded sounds really nice. These guys are more than just adorkable they’re really good for each other. Expanded. Heck yeah. Tell me more. Their chemistry seems undeniable. Alex has a sexy touch of Dom and they’re not oppressed to a bit of kink. Melted into one? You know it when you know it… Not my high school experience so it’s exciting to share theirs ❤️ Super solid storytelling. Loving it
  18. Dan South
    Cliffhanger <sigh>. Love the boys already. Hope they get to keep all of their parts.
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    Chapter 34

    Dan South commented on frozenphenix's story chapter in Chapter 34

    This is Oblivion in control. Has to be.
  20. Dan South
    No one can advocate for your health and care better than you can. Stay strong. Sending you good vibes and strength ☮️
  21. Dan South
    Wild ride ahead no doubt. Buckling my seatbelt…
  22. Dan South

    Prologue

    Dan South commented on W_L's story chapter in Prologue

    Wish I could remember the first time I lived and died. I’m wonderfully confused and entirely engaged. Tell me more…
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    Chapter 14

    Dan South commented on Justin4Fun's story chapter in Chapter 14

    Out of the mouths of babes. Oh my. Wet eyes three times while reading this installment. Tears fell twice. Powerful. Each one has a pup now. Was there a dream with pups? How will they meet again? Can’t wait to find out.
  24. Dan South
    This really feels like a ‘yes’ and ‘no’ situation. That was a whole lot to absorb in one evening, from Ava to Dayna. Being the odd-man-out is not a good feeling ever. He seems to think there’s some intent of malice based on his reaction and silence. So that’s a ‘yes’ to me. He must think he’s in the right. I’d say ‘no’ twice as loud though. They love him, all of them. I can see Kyan being situationally immature but this feels like an intellectual and emotional choice to behave badly. To treat the family badly. To treat Perry badly. Time to grow up? Face the music? Yeah, probably.
  25. Dan South
    We met the menagerie! Otis speaking about ‘being so small’ seems worth noting. I can’t help thinking of another menagerie and one of my favorite (tragic) quotes… ”When you look at a piece of delicately spun glass you think of two things: how beautiful it is and how easily it can be broken.” Spoken by another Laura. Penned by Tennessee Williams. Here’s hoping Otis remains beautiful and unbroken.
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