Seraph74

Yes, I agree that it sounds like it could be the beginning of something longer... should you wish it to be so, of course. I, for one, would like to know what happened in the intervening 50 years, because while the vamps may have decided to make themselves known, what on earth happened to "the project" and the people involved such that Nick would A) not be revived after 2 years (or sooner, if there were complications), and has not beed discovered until now? I cannot imagine the materialism of today's world would ordinarily let a building remain unoccupied for long; and in times of crises, again it would have to be rare for a building to remain unchallenged for so long. So many unanswered questions... so much possibility for more story But do love it in and of its own, too. Thanks for posting!!

Awwwwwwwwww Does any more really need to be said?

I really love this one; so much said in so few words. Enough to fill in the blanks, but also just not quite enough for complete satisfaction. But a fantastic piece of work in total. I for one would love to see more of the story, but I cerainly won't demand you write more so we can see what happens next. *sits looking at you with big, brown, soulful puppy-dog eyes instead*

Fantastic story!!! Like Nephy, I loved the fact that John's reaction upon seeing the chair was basically along the lines of "... yeah? and? what's your point, I'm still interested in *you*". Something often lacking in today's world, but beautiful when it occurs...

Absolutely beautiful story, but pleeeeeease don't tell me this is really the end... there seems so much more to the story of Jamie and John (and even Marion!) that can yet be told!!!!

Great story... and made me realise that, as a hopeless romantic myself, I shouldn't give up hope now that I'm no longer in my 20's (and rapidly approaching my 40's... eek!). Stories like this one always leave me with contented feeling, so I'm really glad you chose to share!!

Rover and Felix... I should have known we'd see your trademark humour before long! Coupled with Glory's (not so) internal dialogue, you had me with a smile on my face for this chapter, and indeed while I'm typing this review. Can't wait to see where this story is going to go... it appears my weekly Wednesday addiction will continue to have something with which to slake its lust... yay!!

Awww, what a beautiful ending to a beautiful story!!! I'll admit that I'm one of few gay men who don't actually appreciate sex scenes within a well-written story; it's a bit like a musical can be - the storyline stops while everyone sings (fucks), and then resumes once the music is over. But this chapter... wow. Beautiful music all it's own, and I didn't skip over one bit of it like I normally do. This chapter alone puts you into a league of your own, Nephy; well done!! And while I should be satisfied that I have just read a fabulous story that I will enjoy reading again (especially now that I know it has a happy ending; I am a sucker for happy endings), I must admit I am gloriously (no pun intended) happy that there will be a sequel to enjoy. Keep up the great work, Nephy... 'tis truly a treasure to behold!!! Seraph

Great chapter (jeeze, I think I say that for every chapter... I'm beginning to sound like a broken record! ) You really captured Glory's state of mind throughout the whole chapter perfectly, and it was so easy to empathise with his confusion, spinning more and more out of control as more and more information comes flooding in until he finally snaps. The pacing was perfect, playing the chapter out like the perfect seduction - starting slow by capturing the sudden change in Sar with the beginning of the confusion, and building the intensity as more information about Glory's true nature was revealed, the almost orgasmic point of no return when he snaps, to the sweet afterglow at the end when Glory finally, finally feels safe. Brilliant!! I think this might be the best chapter yet. And nice to not have a big mean nasty cliff-hanger ending... though I am a bit concerned about your after-chapter comment of "how long will it last?" I look forward (I think) to the final chapter, as well as your next story so I don't have to say goodbye just yet to these characters!! Seraph

Great chapter, as always. I'm hoping that a bit more of the search details will be revealed in chapter(s) to come. Oh... are you are so totally the Mistress of 'Mean' Cliff-hanger Endings... gimme the next chapter, already! Gimmegimmegimme!!! Great story Nephy. I'm going to miss it when it finishes, as I really love all your characters (well, ok... except the ones I'm meant to hate... but I do love hating them, so that counts, right? ). Seraph

Great story. Particularly liked the acronym, which I didn't pick up until you spelt it out. Plus it made a particularly refreshing change from vampires! (not that I don't like vampire stories, but change is good, too)

Curious story... while I enjoyed it, I felt throughout that there were bits that you knew very well but didn't quite convey, and so left a slight "huh?" feeling; perhaps you expected your audience to know as much about what you were writing as you did? It's a fine line between teasing your audience, and not conveying enough; I think perhaps you need to 'spill a bit more dish' to assist in following the story. But certainly a great concept, and look forward to your further writings!

Awwwwww... what a great ending!! I so love the way that Kaleb stood up to his mother with honest conviction, and even more so that his father then not only supported him but gave him suggestions as to what to take and ordered the private jet ("if you have the means...") I'm really enjoying this story. It's also wonderful that while you sort of leave it on, not a cliff hanger, but an "I Want More" sort of ending, it's still a really positive "Awwwww" ending that leaves one with a 'warm and fuzzy' feeling. I also love the fact that I never feel, through your writing, that Kaleb is "special". He just comes across as one of those rare, beautiful, honest, transparent (in a good way), guileless people that one would love to be aquainted with. I certainly would love to be able to call him a friend, that's for sure. Great writing, great story... more, more, more!!! Seraph

Great chapter, as always. I disagree with Daddydavek's review, however. The (drug induced) ethereal state that Glory is in makes it difficult to tell *when* exactly this happened. More importantly, it also gives no indication of how *long* he has been in the Circus. I imagine (hope?) that that will be revealed in future chapter(s), but in any event, you really captured the timeless nature of the experience brilliantly. I can't wait to see what happens when Glory 'sobers' up. I particularly liked the way he reacted instinctively to Sar, even to the point of remembering his name. The not forgetting the pain was a great touch, and made Glory's decision to take Sar's hand even more poignant. I'm sooooo enjoying this story; you've done so well with the characterisation and the plot, too!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! Seraph

"And yes, this inner dialogue between my four natures IS getting a bit old and weird now."... actually, it's highly entertaining and not old or weird at all Interesting revelation of Glory's character, at showing how difficult life on the streets must have been for him. His reaction to sex with Sar. While regrettable that he cries 'rape' at the end, one can't really blame him as he's never really gotten close to anyone before so has never really been able to say 'yes' or 'no' to something taking place. If you haven't had that mind-blowing 'first time' of losing control, it can be quite unnerving at the end; which is exactly where Glory is, and not helped at all by the bond. Of course, poor Sar is no better. It seems age alone doth not grant wisdom in affairs of the heart, especially when bonded. I do feel sorry for him, somewhat, because despite his age this is so out of his comfort and knowledge zones that he, too, is 'juvenile' in his responses; but, just like Glory, cannot help himself. And Glory is not exactly a 'reasonable' creature to deal with (at the best of times!) Great development of the characters, Nephy; can't wait to read more!!