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  1. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 15

    2 mimics?! Ok so now it’s like Star Wars meets Highlander plus Matrix . There can be only ONE! Oooohhh shiiiiiiittttt
  2. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 13

    Ok I can definitely relate to Justin’s feelings of inadequacy and self loathing. I’ve made a lot of ground over the years in healing from my trauma but damn.. it still likes to come back on occasion. For me it wasn’t the anger and frustration it was pain and fear of more pain.
  3. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 10

    I envisioned more of a Alan Rickman a bit older than his Die Hard days. Maybe Jeremy Irons. Someone British with a real educated yet visible slimy and a real snake like disposition
  4. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 10

    Donald Sutherland is still alive
  5. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 4

    I think the conversation between him and Dylan was crucial. The only way I can see the prophecy being wrong is Justin having faith that he will be able to protect Taryn. It’s his faith that he will need to defeat Rage.
  6. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 3

    Justin needs time to grieve and come to terms with the fact that Jarrod got himself killed because he was not shy about his plans and also because possibly he was sniffing around about the mimic rumors and wasn’t being too quiet or careful about. But yes it could’ve also been a mob hit on him because of the whistle he was about to blow on the humoglobs. Either way dead men tell no tails. As for Trevor, he needs to get out in his place. He’s poking a bear
  7. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 1

    Taryn has reddish brown hair..😔
  8. Frankly it depends on what happens. That said, generally speaking, I try to live by the mentality of “Failure to plan is a plan to fail”. Now, obviously you cannot plan for every possible scenario, but do consider myself well rounded. Always have a backup for your backup plan and be flexible. I think one must be able to adapt on the fly…within reason. I’m not a HUGE prepper or anything but I do like to be somewhat prepared 😉
  9. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 15

    So basically I’m still caught up? Ok, what is recommended while I anxiously await? Taryn’s Song?
  10. Honestly, I’ve got a spot well away from the city. My ppl wouldn’t be alone, but we’d have to start fresh and live off the land. No electricity. That wouldn’t be a problem. The problem would be keeping the outsiders out.
  11. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 15

    Now what story is next? This one was great. Sort of The Matrix meets Twilight with a bit of Sons Of Anarchy mixed in but much better.
  12. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 15

    Sigh. Such a violent dichotomy is the balance between love and hate. Such a violent dichotomy. To be forced to have to accept that you have to make a decision between sacrificing your own love and peace selflessly or not doing so in selfishness in order for the greater betterment of a world that has never once treated you fairly, except for that love and peace you stand to lose. I’m sorry but the world hasn’t earned it. Comicality, you sir, have outdone yourself and have a rare and true gift. Take it back I would take it back For just another minute Just another chance with you Give it up I would give everything up Every last breath Every first taste, for you. Just to make it alright. Just to make it alright. But its too late, to go back. I can see the darkness, through the cracks. Daylight fading, I curse the breaking. The day is gone. The day is gone. Run away I’ll just run away. Like a child from all them to you And now I see my most constant mistake is I don't know what I love till its gone But its too late To go back I can see the darkness Through the cracks Daylight fading I curse the breaking. The day is gone. The day is gone Its too late to go back. I let the darkness seep through the cracks. Love is bleeding, I curse my breathing. The day is gone The day is gone
  13. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 13

    The big clue here is WHO PAID Cato and his goons to attack Justin. Kieran?
  14. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 11

    I almost put a sad face at the end of this chapter bc it looked like Justin went full hate mode and I was worried somehow in the melee that tyran would get killed. It’s not over yet but it got dicey there for a while
  15. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 8

    Ha right! Like a 12yo with a 7” cock Smdh
  16. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 6

    I like that Rain didn’t get huffy and storm off at the end. I like she’s coaxing Gyro to stay with the group and he’s listening. I love the fact Bryson went. Really loved that the group stood behind Justin when that douchebag got hostile with Justin.
  17. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 9

    I think Justin is gonna made another bad decision here. I worry he’s gonna get recognized at the hospital. I worry Ritchie is already gone.
  18. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 8

    Finally.
  19. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 7

    All I can say is holy shit…Rain is impressively strong and even so, she still needs someone special.
  20. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 6

    I wonder if the beast isn’t a manifestation of Comicality
  21. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 5

    Ugh the more answers Justin gets, the more confused he gets.
  22. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 4

    Ok super long chapter. And it was great. Finally some details on the live making bt these two hotties ya tease! It was hot. Mm …mmmmoving along.. to answer you ok I give Comi. I’m hooked. You’re too good of a writer. I crave more background story and one thing that I’ve noticed is that the details on everyone’s story who they were before turning and how that happened is ..curiously absent. I’m sure it’ll come out in time. On to the next
  23. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 1

    That or they’re being followed
  24. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 1

    Hmm rage.. I think Justin’s reputation is preceding him
  25. SilentandBroken

    Chapter 5

    I feel like Bryson finally has realized and fine to terms with that Justin’s progression cannot be stopped. Might as well begin training. What I don’t think what anyone truly realizes is the blossoming threat inside their family in Michael. I don’t even think Justin is fully aware. I take that back. Kyra might be full aware. It’s about to get real now and nobody is ready. That is impossible.
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