SilentandBroken

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I have to take it slow too. Trevor is too manipulative for me for too long. Taryn isn’t listening to his 6th sense too well. I think that’s his biggest flaw right now.

Ty!! You

It’s been pulled 😭

They’re gonna get spotted and casted as Trevor and Michael aren’t they? A couple of the girls might get casted as Jenny and Rain.. that would be brilliant.

I wouldn’t be worried about Ryan for Randy but Shawn is cringe worthy for sure

“And as a few people were still clapping for us in the background, Parker lightly lifted my chin with two fingers, and with a smile...he whispered, “I love you...because you saved me.”” awwwwwweeeeeeeee! Omg Comsi!!!!

OOOOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMMMMGGGGGGGGG!!!!! That ending was sooooo cute!!! I want to squeal myself!! 😂

Gary reminded me of Comicality in this chapter. These two boys are too cute together

Sorry dude. I’m itchin’. When can we hope to see more?

Ok..OMG BOI!!!!! This was a lit chapter for so many reasons. First off, Parker…(fans myself) you are even finer for showing your backbone both for flashing your topless boy bod off to Kevin like that and THEN daring Brett to step up like that. Mmm..I love a boy who will stand up to haters. I love the fact Parker has zero filter but also has tact and is sensitive enough to pick up on Kevin’s jealousy. All that is soo appealing. These two are cute and sexy all in one and dammit Comsi you did it AGAIN.

I second that.

Simmer down dude. Don’t get all jelly just yet.

Ok it’s been a year nearly since we’ve seen another chapter and a month for me since I got into your Magnum Opus, Comicality. I need more of Justin and Taryn. I am trying to work my way through Fanboy which is easier than Taryn’s song bc I really don’t like Trevor and he gives me super cringes and reminds me of my abuser in ways. I wasn’t gonna post a comment about this but it’s been a few days since I thought about doing so and I can’t stand it anymore. It’s Justin that I want to read about. I hope you have a new chapter ready to post soon.

I like long novellas so yeah I’ll bite.

I don’t mean to sound harsh. So please don’t take it that way

I swear you’re the only author who can write to articulate anxiety perfectly like this.

Omg that was soooo cute and funny. “Talking. Saying words. Words that relate to the words said to you. Shouldn't be this hard” “Breathe, Kevin. Breathe. In. Out. In. Out. No wait...now that's making me think of something else!!! Shit, now I'm getting a boner! THAT'S not good! Go down, damn you!!! Go DOWN!!!” BUHAHAHA so damn cute. I fucking love it

I feel the need to be honest on the story. It’s over all good and flow is fine, if it were to be a much longer story. Only a little bit of teasing and hints on vampire type lore up to this point. For a completed 12 chapter story and little by way of sexual activity 10 chapters in makes me wonder if this long buildup was a waste of time for the genre. I get the author had to include the tags as subs because there is some references to those actions but…the build up feels a bit short on delivery. I didn’t expect the super detailed explanations of business setups to take 2 full chapters on and little else. I agree with Dragonfire. There’s no timeline for established for how long it’s been since Scott and Greg met before they’re talking life long commitments. There’s only hints of supernatural something or other with regards to Scott’s family recognizing Scott’s choice of mate being a life long pick. It was a bit disappointing when I looked back at what was left only to find I have 2 chapters to go and that’s it and the party has yet to start. The next 2 chapters will either be short flashes in the pan or long grand finales that will lead to another series spin offs. If so, will it be more of the same? Is that worth the investment in time reading? I hate to be a Debbie downer but that’s just my take.

I can hear Charlie already..”I might know a guy…” As to the draw of readers. Most are probably looking for an escape from reality for little while. Now whether that’s hot boy sex or fangs and blood. I personally think a little more additional love scenes and time to get on with the vampire storyline . Otherwise it’s good.

I mean Donna DID serve venison burgers and Scott said they hunt all the time…also he did more or less acted as if it was his grandfather with such familiarity of the information Greg gave him about the car. Almost as if he knew it already. It is interesting that gramps was from “Germany” not Austria next door. The family seems to move around a lot every few yrs. Would that be to avoid suspicion? Hmm

I was hoping you were going to do the first disclosure of affection scene with as much nerves as is typical for most realistic moments between people. You did and wonderfully so too. You and Comicality should team up on a series. J/s. Scott is clearly a cutie and doesn’t even realize it while Greg is the stud muffin. Both are sweeties. I cannot wait to read on.

I think though I would’ve liked the boys a tad younger. 13-14 maybe. Idk that’s just where my discoveries happened and where my abuse began. I fantasize that these stories could’ve been my POSITIVE experiences vs the very negative ones I had. One can dream I suppose. Your flow is great.

Ok. Cute and intriguing start. Even if this wasn’t a fantasy story, this would’ve sucked me in as a teen romance. All I can say is double major plans seems a bit of an over achiever for me but who knows, some ppl are just super efficient with their time. I’m excited to see where it goes

Charlie keeps giving Toby compliments that are more of a suitor vs best friend just saying