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He manifested as a mate as soon as he met Greg; his eyes turned green.
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Because Greg's eyes glow green while Scotts are simply green. It's how the fates decided it should be.
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Thank you so much for the kind words. Charlie isn't a major character yet, but you'll see him grow up. Passing flashes that will demonstrate the growth rate.
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A Missing Lineman, and One More Step Taken
Justin4Fun commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A Missing Lineman, and One More Step Taken
I'm hoping Roy has called his mom, and we just haven't been let in on it. I'm hoping there are some changes in the school admin coming soon!- 12 comments
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A Missing Lineman, and One More Step Taken
Justin4Fun commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in A Missing Lineman, and One More Step Taken
As much as I like writing cliffhangers, I'm looking for a doghouse for you for this one... I guess the great story, lovable characters, and wonderful interactions make up for it. Can't wait for the next installment!!!- 12 comments
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To be honest, the delay in this chapter was due to a block. I'm extremely happy to hear you like it because I was unsure of how it flowed. As to when book four is ready... I have two words written, and both will be deleted. "Chapter One". Debating trying it in 3rd person... We'll see.
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I haven't, mainly because I don't know how many there will be. I'm posting as I write and have an end goal, but I don't know how long the road will be. The original was 104 chapters, and considering the fact that books 1 and 2 covered the first three chapters of the original, I think we can expect at least half a dozen. Twice that if I meander too much!
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After getting nods from Chris and Josh, I followed Brian when he opened the door and walked confidently into the living room. Chris and Josh split up, with Josh standing by the front door while Chris stood in the archway that led into the kitchen. I stood behind the recliner as Brian walked in front of his father, reached down to grab the remote, and turned off the television. “Brian, turn that back on; the game starts soon,” Jason angrily whined. “No, Dad. We need to talk,” Brian repl
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Trying to make every chapter 'intense' is why version one moved WAY too fast. I kept trying to 'top' the previous insanity.
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Absolutely the most addictive story I've read in my life. I found myself using internet searches to view locations and boats, as well as other things, throughout my journey with Trevor. So many twists to the plot, and so many artfully crafted foreshadowing events I found myself going back to double-check things. This is actually my second full read, I enjoyed the story SO much, I'm sure I'll revisit it in the future! I would love to hear more about these characters I came to love!
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By the time the sun broke over the horizon, Chris and Josh had fed three more times. Riva and Vega were sent back to the farm to gather camp beds, a tent, and a space heater so the humans could rest, and Mary sent three dozen breakfast burritos wrapped in foil and in a cooler, along with coffee, orange juice, and blood. When Josh woke for another feeding, shortly after nine, Scott insisted I take a break. He sat at Josh’s side, slit his wrist, and allowed Josh to feed. Five minutes later, Billy
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This is not an unfair point, but that blood was exposed to the vampire blood on the initial change via osmosis compared to Josh's, which is being introduced directly into the bloodstream. BTW, you do realize you're arguing the details of a vampire transformation by using science?
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Josh's leg was crushed, not cut off, and when Greg drained him, he didn't drain the blood in that leg. Once the rest of his body began the change, Jake started letting the human blood return to the body, mixing with the changed blood. Chris was drained from head to toe; no blood to mix.
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Don't forget, a changeling hasn't survived the change until he walks on his own. They're both still asleep...
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I pulled through the gate and drove half a mile up the dirt road until I saw Josh’s truck parked off to the side, along with a dump truck backed up to a pile of dirt. The Denali hadn’t completely stopped when Jake, Scott, and Billy bailed out of their doors and went running; Jenny, Brian, and I followed seconds later. Chris appeared to be unconscious in the cab of the skid steer, which was lying on its side on the slope of the dirt pile, leaning so far it seemed ready to roll onto its top.
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Or Greg wakes to find it was ALL a dream, his father is alive, and Mr. Z still lives across the street...
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Actually, on the way to the job site, Greg hits a deer, and changes the deer. They name it "Bambi"
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