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I wandered away from this story temporarily, and I'm glad I drifted back. Shows the importance of clicking Following so I could find my way to the, um, Fishing Hole (??!?). I'm only a chapter behind, I think. Too bad I have to go to work today 😉
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There was so much about the evolving relationship between Greg and Chris that I just didn't understand at first. I'm glad I stuck with reading the entire story, figuring that eventually it would all end up making sense. And, it did. I am grateful. Lucky me!
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I am getting quite an unexpected education. I've suspected for sometime that I'm in a very mild version, long term version (approaching 10 years) of such a relationship, though my D has never used such language with me. There's no sense of coercion, really. At one point he raised the issue of handcuffs, and then discarded the idea, saying that he didn't need them because I let him do whatever he wanted to me. He is very tender, gentle, kind ... but I somehow get the sense that, in the end, he's the one calling the shots. And that's fine with me.
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Interesting thought! Hadn't occurred to me. Wish I'd thought of that myself...
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With a nod to the final paragraph: although I'm nothing to look at (objectively speaking), I remember viewing myself in a men's changing room, clad in only my whitey-tighties, and as my gaze drifted downwards, I thought to myself "Yeah, I'd have sex with you" ... I guess I can be rather full of myself, so I'm glad to see that Christopher has a healthy view of himself 🙂
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The closing line in this chapter is reminiscent of Humphrey Bogart and Claude Rains 🙂
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I'm thoroughly enthralled. I was dubious at first, even having had to re-read the Prologue, which had left me mystified the first time through. I'm glad I did. Too bad Christopher has lost all trace of a Scottish lilt. Instead, I'll give him a Voice based on the bro-ish singer for the current Burger King adverts.
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"Kiss first" ... that line is PRICELESS! I love this story, and now must look up everything else you''ve written. The read is WELL worth the time.
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Me neither!
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There is something So Sexy when one uses the French "version" of Michael 😉
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Was I as dense as Jason way back when? If so, I musta missed a LOT in my late teen years - not that there was an older-and-wiser Michael going after me tooth and nail. Or maybe there was, and I was too stupid to realize it? Oh, well...
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Olivia's no dummy. I'm sure she had it figured out from the get-go. From Day One, she might have even been rooting for the match to succeed.
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I suspect that one or two other "things" are UP as well 🙂
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My thought, exactly LOL
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Thank heavens! Now we're REALLY beginning to get somewhere 😉
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So realistic, so true-to-life, so excruciatingly aggravating - I love it!
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Not long??!? I'd have shoved my tongue down his throat AGES ago LMAO
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This has all the makings of a Riot <evil grin>
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I really like how this is developing! I only wish I had been so, um, attractive at that age - and it hasn't gotten any better with the passage of time LOL
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I was so shy back then when I was their age ... or was I? This whole episode reminded me of doing something even more brazen when the lights were out in science class. I'm sure just about EVERYONE could see what I was doing to, well, after all these years I've forgotten his name. Still, I'm convinced that the T.A. knew exactly what I was up to. I guess I was overwhelmed by it all. At least Comsie reminded me of a forgotten episode from my life.
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More of the Tangled Webs! Nice job!
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Now if only I could follow through like that in my own little soap opera LOL. Thanks, Comicality, for showing us that it CAN be done!
