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Will correctly knows what is happening with Kendo. Travis told him they only exchanged bow jobs and handjobs. Will is flying out Memorial Day weekend to see/confront Travis Kendo crossed a line. He gave Travis and he willingly took GHB and directed Travis to fuck him and he did multiple times. You can expect Kendo to give him more GHB. Travis will be an emotional and physical mess The stage is set for a huge explosion. Travis might need serious medical intervention. Will should rethink how he can help Travis. As a minimum he needs to end Kendo from being near Travis and may have to put the fear of God in him.
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Julian is adapting well, growing and actively seeking knowledge. The captain recognizes his uncommon ready willingness to be part of the ship and salutes him. Julian playing the piano impresses him. Julian surprisingly is thinking ahead about coffee distribution, and the captain will discuss it further with him later. Julian is taking charge of his life and wants to be successful. His relationship with Sam has become intimate with kisses exchanged. I hope that the experience they share in his cabin tonight is very rewarding for both. It will become known throughout the ship. Julian's education continues to grow in unexpected ways
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Well done. What a very satisfying ending. Andy is made part of the family and feels the joy of freedom. Andy and Lucas are in love and they share qualities that assure them long compatible lives. The BBQ was a wonderful victory celebration Thank you !
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Two comments on the cars. These thoroughbreds require regular, intensive maintenance. They will need special care. Also, there is an opinion around that males with excessively showy cars maybe compensating for an inadequate physical capability.
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Chapter 31: The Battle of Ontario
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 31: The Battle of Ontario
This is depressing. There are no happy people here. Their lives are unfolding apart. Things eventually will work out and the 4 main characters will lead fulfilling lives. They are going to be surprised, -
Chapter 31: The Battle of Ontario
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 31: The Battle of Ontario
I agree with drpaladin. Will and Peter have each other upstairs. They are losing the boyfriends they love and cannot prevent it Jason and Andrew know they are considered outcasts. Yes, they are "two exiles sat silently in the shadows, waiting out the storm. " -
Ali described thusly...."Bastien, who’s like a cat, always needing affection but never asking for it.” Lawrenc learned there were three fast cars at the school. Bastien drives a Porsche and offered to have Lawrence ride with him.
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Poor Felix, an OCD ruled student, finds his ordered world turned up safe down when the star student he follows disappears. Things begin to turn his favor as he given the choice benefits of the star and Felix feels guilty and does not think he should not benefit Into this perceived catastrophe, a messy, irrelevant Ryder essentially captured his opposite Felix saying he has hexed others to rule. He kept up close to Felix in a potentially more than intimate scenario. The school gossip caught them and thought they had become a couple. The rumor quickly ran through the school. Felix was mortified. Felix and Ryder do not have an easy time. Read on to learn about their struggles and find out if they actually become a happy couple.
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Act 2 and 3 : The other bit
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Act 2 and 3 : The other bit
Ryder was ready at the right time. He led Felix to the Master's office and fucked him The next morning Frelix realized Croft was back so his lucked ended and he thought his old routine would return Wonderfully, Ryder sat next to felix and gave him s joyous pudding. A new pattern was established. Felix and Ryder were a firm couple. Things have turned out much better than first expected .. -
Act I: The Cosmic Glitch
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Act I: The Cosmic Glitch
Felix is not having a lucky day. His lodestar is missing. Ryder thinks Ferlix is responsible and goes after him. Felix is very unnerved. Ryder wants to see Felix crack and dominates him in the library acting controlling. Someone's reputation might get maligned, if another person thought they were acting like a tragic couple. Oh wait, it is going to happen -
This was a total victory. Andy is now identified as the Trickster and freed Andy from his lab torment. Marcus and the werewolf pack overwhelmed and ruled the security guards. The werewolf scouts were adorable. BTW, Andy is now safer since he has the magic ring protecting him from daylight. He does not know Lucas is also the trickster.
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Will saw Andrew returning in his tactical gear." He was offering a profound, heartbreaking compromise born of absolute, unconditional love. "'I won't ask, if it means you have to lie to me.'" Andrew hugging Will in bed realized the consequences of his CSIS life at this time. "I'm going to let you go, Andrew thought, as the exhaustion finally pulled him down into the dark. So you can finally be safe." These are two defining moments in their relationship at this time. Will is not going to find out about Andrew's CSIS service much later when he is a Member of Parliament.
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Mile's trust is set up wisely with a phased release of control of money. He does not get it all at 18. There are lots of stories of lottery winners going broke after a year. They could not handle a large infusion of cash spent it all.
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Things have turned out unexpectedly positive for Miles. Mr Riggs is now his guardian. Miles also is now wealthy. His uncle's will left him $14.7 million from winning the lottery A local Wyoming law firm will handle the money. Miles is going back to Troy and the ranch. I am sure they will talk about his good fortune. Miles is not able now to consider what options are open to him.
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Andy has to be saved. The corporation is removing from his body what lets him live. Esca did not care if he lived. The irony is now Esca is dead and the corporation has no CEO to direct it. There is a huge rescue mission underway. Batholomew is leading it. The scientists are going to be very surprised and scared.
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OMG--Lucas tricked Esca to free him from the mage's trap. Then, he shook Esca's hand and secretly removed his magical ring that allowed him to live in daylight. The morning sun came up and Esca turned into ash. Wow! Lucass turned into a coyote! He fled the house to save Andy. Lucas unnaturally was very aware and knew exactly what to do to defeat Esca. So was this really Lucas , the huskie werewolf, or was he Loki in disguise? We will find out soon, I bet.
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Chapter 29: The Reckoning
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 29: The Reckoning
You have created an amazing, very interesting and compelling body of work. Thank you. -
Chapter 29: The Reckoning
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 29: The Reckoning
Peter is a force of nature. He intimidated the medical staff and left the facility with Jason who was out of it from the drugs Marcus gave him He kept his head and found a way out and got on the train to find a phone to call home. He did not give up and solved the problems they faced in tough winter weather Her acted heroically. He saved Jason. -
Chapter 29: The Reckoning
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 29: The Reckoning
Jared's phone call saved Will from being a killer. The police are arriving and they might have arrested Will They know where Peter and a drugged-up Jason are. Marcus is even more trouble now. -
Why shoot and paralyze Andy? He would return to Esca after the scout jamboree. Is this to show Andy he was in charge? Did he want to neutralize or kill Lucas who he wrongly thinks is Loki? Esca could bring down on himself the real Loki who is the trickster.
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I could guess the captain or Sam might think Julian was going to the kingdom of Hawaii to make his fortune. Young men traveled for good opportunities. Many landing in San Francisco after gold was found left for the lure of the gold fields. Ships even lost crew members
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Julian is quickly adapting to his life at sea and is rapidly learning about the ship. Sam is a good teacher. They both easily become comfortable with each other. We will see how their relationship evolves over the next 10-12 days. Julian is showing he is a quick learner with a very good mind who wants to learn. Sam is helping him to pay attention to nature and the weather. I can see Julian use these insights growing crops on a large island.
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Andy is captured by men of the evil corporation. Will he be used for their scientific research purposes and killed? Esca thinks he captured Loki with the help of mages. Lucas said he was just a high school student. But Ecsca said they will find out and he intends to run Lucas through his tests and maybe do him great harm. But, Lucas is a husky werewolf ! Esca is not counting on any attack from a real werewolf pack and a mysterious coyote who might be Loki. The upcoming battle will be fierce.
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Chapter 28: The House of Healing
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 28: The House of Healing
The House of Healing has been fooled by Marcus to mistakenly treat the two boys But, Peter stands up and says "no" with reasoning and evidence. He is not a drug addict ! Peter is awesome and a righteous male. He demands to be heard. He sounds convincing. -
Chapter 28: The House of Healing
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 28: The House of Healing
Peter is exploding and putting the fear of God in Marcus and the medical staff who think he is a sad addict who needs help, not a kid kidnapped by a pedophile. Time has stopped for them while they handle Peter's outbursts, Will and Andrew are on the way and may arrive shortly." Will Carter was currently operating as a functional psychopath." I fear for those who oppose him. The CSIS clean up crew might have business.
