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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    Given how the two talk with each other now, they may not be much more verbally expressive if they become romantic. When they realize how they really feel, they might just act it out.
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 12

    Both Jackson and Noah were asked at the BBQ about their love life and if they were single. Both said they were single. They ended up sitting next to each other and being very comfortable. They are not finding their teammate annoying and not acting competitive. It was a new phase in their relationship.
  3. It is encouraging to note the cook did not try to make octopus or hatchling soup after his kitchen was invaded.
  4. Vex's world was re-born with 30 hatchlings alive on the Zodiac and explored the ship. 29 retuned to be with Vex and the smallest hatching is being parented by Tweek The ship is healing and exploring. Byk wants to marry Liam. Hollis and Tweek repeat the expressions of love. All is right with the crew of the Zodiac.
  5. They robbed the wrong wealthy man, but got a heavy purse and lived for another day. They had the money to survive. Edward was devastated and guilty because he was so passive and he stole from an innocent man Jonas consoled him and held him close in bed. He said they both must be mad and will figure out what is next in the morning. They needed to sleep now. Ever the survivor, Jonas is going to support and guide his "partner." I can see they might become real wolves on the road.
  6. Wow--Jake took a drunk Kody to his dorm bedroom. Kody asked to stay so he is gay. Will Jake stay or leave and ask for a raincheck when Kody is sober?
  7. I am looking forward to the chaos with the 30 babies are born
  8. Jonas is teaching Edward about male to male sex. Jonas likes it. He can be very convincing
  9. Jonas raised a gambling stake for Edward by blowing a wealthy for money. Edward lost his stake at the tables. Jonas watched the betting and saw another lord cheated Edward Jonas and Edward are going to rob the cheating lord on his way home. He will need to be killed so he cannot ID them.
  10. Two losers meet up and share a meal. One is a broke lord who gambles and loses. Another is a former inhabitant of bedlam with a gift for gab and larceny They meet later to steal the money they need/
  11. akascrubber

    Revelations 2

    I still miss reading how this story concludes
  12. akascrubber

    Outsider

    I hope Ali keeps his special crusty sock well hidden.
  13. akascrubber

    Chapter 22

    Owen has been seeing another teacher since before Scotland and them meeting Miles. This could account for the long teacher meetings Owen broke up with Troy after earning the job as principal. He is leaving Troy and going to see his parents. Their relationship has ended. He said he felt he could not compete with Miles after he saw Troy's reaction to Miles. However, this was after he felt a connection to another man. Troy is going to see his dad before deciding what next to do with Miles
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 10

    What wonderful competition at the gym. Noah always beats Jackson and arrives first no matter what Silently, Noah is pleased he worked out first.
  15. Their shuttle was shot down by hunters. The crew have to find defendable ground with Hollis seriously injured. Hollis put Tweek in charge and he rises to the occasion. The hunters attacked and Tweek leads the mobile defense. A few hunters are killed, but it looks like they are forced into a final stand. Hollis orders Tweek to leave him behind so they can climb away and set off the emergency beacon. The hunters find Hollis and prepare to kill him. Tweek throws rocks from above at the hunters. All really looks lost. But, suddenly T'Virith and a squad of his shock troops appear and kill the hunters. He heard their emergency beacon and came to help and get a soft pillow. The Zodiac will arrive in two hours. T'Virith will be long gone Once again, luck is on their side.
  16. In a fast paced, shocking narrative what was to be a family event around negotiating a basic financial treaty with a North African dictatorship turned into a chaotic, unexpected violent revolution where survival is not certain. Special Envoy Will Carter and his spouse Andrew found themselves at Gaddafi's palace as rebels attacked and began killing. Andrew led their escape. Will became the grand prize and was sought by brutal enemies who wanted to use him as political leverage. West, Peter and Jacob resided in the British embassy which is attacked by multitudes of fighters who want vengeance against those who supported their dictator. Great, violent uncertainty pervades this revolution. Heroic actions and unyielding determination and imagination are needed to survive. You will see key opponents try to use the Carters who have to be flexible and focused. West rises to the occasion leading the embassy defense against overwhelming odds. Things never seem to be safe and uneventful. You will find the action scary and upsetting and the Carters will be physically hurt. How they all act and struggle will be fully entertaining. They never give up. The fights and acts of heroism will fascinate you. They are helped by skilled allied forces. Victory is well earned.
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  17. The bruised and battered extended family was reunited and now very happy. They do need time to recover and should get a well earned rest. They will have memorable stories to share; They have put their time in the layers of hell behind them and are going to be living in a bright, safe future. Thank you for composing a bracing, exciting story that tested your characters to use all their skills to survive. They never gave up and came out on top.
  18. Travis began this period saying he hated Will and saying they were over. Will kept supporting Travis kept talking with him. Travis began to relax and spent time racing outside the ship on sea dogs. He mood improved. Then Will had a mind opening business meeting with him. His fears about the show ended. He was asked for his opinion and agreed with Will's message to the show. Travis was told he was too important to not be on the show. He will be seen as going into rehab and will return. actions. Travis is going to willingly take part in his next treatment. He is now fond of Will. Travis can only think of his near term siyuation. He can focus on the show and his new situation when he returns to the show. Kendo's name has not come up.
  19. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    Julian is slowly processing Sam's death. He dreams of Sam twice. Sam tells him to keep living. There is no indication Sam will later appear in person. This is called a healing dream for Julian Julian is surrounded by friends who comfort and support him. Daniel does not want to leave his side. He clearly cares for Julian.
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 9

    There are bets being made on the actions of Noah and Jackson. Those betting are hiding the reasons from Noah and Jackson. What is going to happen on the road trip to make the two stars realize they are more than competitive teammates?
  21. I hoped they were able to record their humming so there will be a continuous vibration for the 30 babies. Has the crew size doubled? Vex needs to tell them how long the babies stay in the incubators. A nursery will be needed. The babies must be fed. They have lots to learn !
  22. Will and Andrew could not leave Libya without facing more danger. A Hind 24 gunship was chasing their helicopter seeking to destroy it. Machine gun fires were exchanged and the Hind was only stopped when blow out of the air when a fighter directed sidewinder missile hit it. "Colonel Yusuf al-Maghrabi was simply erased from the board." Later Will foolishly promised Andrew he never would have to fly in a plane again. Will cannot keep that promise
  23. Rambo faced a Hind-24 in two of his movies and survived. The helicopter was a very deadly attacker that did not survive in a Hollywood movie plot.
  24. akascrubber

    True to Form

    Lawrence thought the fighting in the boiler room seemed like a homoerotic performance, He broke the rule when fighting Bastien--He won and Bastien conceded to him Anton was furious. “Truly, Bastien? Was this fighting or fucking?” Anton wanted to exclude him from being Bastien or his reputation will be impaired, Bastien rebuked Anton and said he wanted Lawrence nearby. Anton was not happy Has Lawrence set himself up to be a target or injury or worse?
  25. Carter and Carter are both injured and not yet safe. "We need to move before the upper levels pancake." Let us hope they make it to safety walking fast through the tunnels. Andrew and Will are going to need medical help and time to rest. They will want to re-connect with Jacob and Peter.
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