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Chapter 6: THE ART OF THE MANHUNT
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 6: THE ART OF THE MANHUNT
Isaiah has to be ready to accept and help a broken Mickey. Finding him with Kyle who is his sex partner will shock and test his resolve. But, Mickey needs help. -
Norman Schwarzkopf Jr. Commanded The Allied forces to Defeat Iraq using Schock and Awe https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Norman_Schwarzkopf_Jr.
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Noah looks like he is going to be responsible and stable. He feels connected to Chase like no one else He set up a scholarship program anonymously. Now, he just saw Shiloh applied to it. I think he should follow his feelings and say no. He cannot trust him. Shiloh will not know he was the donor. He must be applying to lots of places for help.
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Yes--Theo knows he has been listening to an evil spirit and has stopped paying attention to it. Jack and Vincent want to see the battle and told an evil spirit they will not be discoutraged and think less of Theo. The evil spirit hopes not.
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Palomar is in the cabin next to Granger. He will know if Granger has sex with an officer, I wonder how he will react when he finds out Granger has sex with men. Willl he be upset? Will he join the list of men who wants to have sex with him?
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So, Harry and Aled are going to move in with Callum to take his spare bedroom. Can this situation remain as is? Will Callum make a play for Aled or Harry? We will see.
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Chapter 5: THE ART OF THE CRASH
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 5: THE ART OF THE CRASH
Mickey is still a coward. He will not tell Kyle that the sex they had was a mistake. He will let Kyle enjoy more sex with him and let Kyle keep masturbating too. Mickey is going to be even more depressed, Will something happen to shake things up? Will the veth find them? -
The correlation of forces has changed. Raymond has lost his commanding prophet who was burned in a pyre. Haskal is the centerpiece and Geoffrey will lead the crusades to capture Jerusalem. Haskal will be holding he key high ground territory of Bethlehem. He is preparing the city to defend an Egyptian army. He has Greek fire.
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Granger has to be looking for the two French spies/sympathizers One officer already sems to want to seduce him. “Don Rafael Herrera de Soto y Benavides, sir,” he said, his voice deep and resonant. “If I may be so bold, I have been looking forward to meeting you.” His smile was captivating." He bothered Palomar. I expect Granger will be wary of him, too. He may have a resource to check out for information on his officers. One midshipman likes him since he is from Roses.“Don Jaime Riquelme, sir,” he said. “I have had the pleasure of seeing you before.”
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I bet George is going to spend some of his own money to outfit his new men and ship and see the ship is up to high standards. He is going to need better sails as is and for sail drills and extra power for gun drills.
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Wow--Granger definitely took charge of his new ship and laid down the law. He explained his mission for the ship, the immediate sailing plan and his expectations for what must happen when the ship is in the drydock. He is making several new requirements., including his normal bodily health standards. George is going to have many opportunities to evaluate his officers, men and ship. After the main meal he should get his report on the food for the men and discus his thoughts with Captain Palomar. George's initial impression was to be suspicious of his purser,
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Here is the premise-- Jim , a rural farm boy has a chance encounter with handsome tattooed roughneck, Orville, that will open a new world for him. Jim visits a cheesy space exhibit at a carnival that came to town and was mistakenly hit in the head and knocked unconscious. Orville takes Jim inside the place and tends to his wounds after getting out of his alien costume wearing only boxer shorts and revealing all his tattoos. Jim is attracted to Orville who tells him each tattoo is for a guy he was sex with. Orville then tells Jim he is good looking and one has ever said that to him Find out how they become closer and willingly experiment with each other. Jim learns he loves to have sex with a guy. This is a feel-good story and the beginning of a journey for Jim.
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Chapter 4: THE BOY IN THE BIOLAB
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 4: THE BOY IN THE BIOLAB
OMG--Denver rocky mountain oysters could be made from many types of beings.. In Africa on a safari, I was offered a version made from impala gonads -
What a shock! A strange small animal, Barnaby, weirdly dressed appears out of nowhere landing on the consol of a moving car. He lies between the uptight driver and he rocking passenger thrashing about and singing to the World Cup song Barnaby understands the situation and takes the right action to calm the situation and make everyone happy and able to enjoy their trip This is a nice, feel good story, Read on to see what happens,
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Barnaby the time-traveling capybara was, frankly, a bit annoyed. He was supposed to be visiting a garden in another era. But, he arrived on the center consol of a car on the way to a world cup game. He moderated the music being played to give off a better vibe and helped Leo and Marcus better enjoy their journey. Barnaby was the perfect catalyst
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Both Travis and Will know they need to change their relationships with significant counterparts. Travis has to be careful and not fall for potential traps. Will trusts him to do the right thing. Will's approach to Austin is more complicated and emotionally difficult. He cares for the guy and does not want to hurt him. I hope Will can thread the needle and succeed
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Jim found his man on the moon, Orville, and for a while he left his place. He was fucked by Orville and then he fucked Orville. Jim learned about sex and what goof feelings he could have. Orville was the first guy who said he was good looking and treated him carefully and congenially. They easily got along. Orville invited him back and the carnival will stay for a week, Jim will be back, I think he really likes sex.
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Chapter 4: THE BOY IN THE BIOLAB
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 4: THE BOY IN THE BIOLAB
Isaiah is the glue holding them together. It is comforting that Dimitri calls him dad and says how important he is to him They have to be lucky enough to find Mickey and then Isaiah has to be diligent and insure Mickey takes his meds. Bipolar is treatable and not rare. Hemmingway was mentioned. Churchill drank heavily. Winston Churchill famously referred to his periods of deep depression and dark moods as his "Black Dog" -
We have not heard about Ishan? I wonder how he is faring? Are the witches going after him or leaving him alone? Might Ishan help Wylan when he faces Darien and the terrible future he sees?
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Darien saw a different path. In the spring he will support Geoffrey and not his rival Ramond who is leading an army of ghouls and cannibals. He cannot trust Raymond, He will not give Wylan to Raymond. The King is not a factor. "I am going to offer Godfrey an alliance," Darien explained rapidly" Darien intends to have lands to control after Jerusalem is taken. Wylan had a vision of them all dieing or suffering if Darien rules lands. Wylan decides not to tell Darien and upset his current plans.
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Travis and Will discussed Kendo sfter have more good sex. Will made his position known. “He wants you, not just to be with, but to possess you; at least that’s what my instincts are telling me,” he said. Travis is going to keep boundaries with Kendo and is mindful of Will's real concern Will talked with Stef and Grand about Austin. Will was given a 4 part plan that included limiting their intimacy and find him other guys. It is going to be tough but he knows he has to find a solution
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Frosted Hearts: The End Part One
akascrubber commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Frosted Hearts: The End Part One
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Will the emir want a repeat? I wonder what he can offer Stephen and Ashot to return.
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Chapter 3: THE ART OF INTERSTELLAR SHOPPING
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 3: THE ART OF INTERSTELLAR SHOPPING
Mickey has been so lucky and has gotten away from the veth. Is Kyle his good luck charm? -
Another painful rejection--Johnny thought he tried his best and was told he was missing depth and honest emotion. He quickly began to think about his criticism and what it meant against his expectations. Would he be sad and discouraged? No, he would keep trying to improve and seek honesty. He would keep on trying. Good for Johnny.
