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I viewed two versions of a s Simon Rex--screen name before he was a MTV DJ--popular masturbation video on the on Xtube-. The first was a straightforward action vid that led to his happy conclusion. The second one added several intermediate steps and repeated scenes until the director was satisfied and Simon could have his exciting conclusion. The second version was less appealing and seemed that Simon Rex had to fake his enthusiasm before his orgasm I thought of Sky and Brant pacing and repeating some of their somewhat sexual scenes before they got to their real personal action
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Epilogue VI - A Star in the Night
akascrubber commented on dragonthusiast's story chapter in Epilogue VI - A Star in the Night
Fenn was on an emotional rollercoaster, He was so happy. He cried and cried. He and Ain were getting married at the Temple of The Sun. Mhaly officiated. The chose a name that combined their best parts. " A star and its night, darkness and light, one unable to exist without the other, always together" What a welcomed outcome. The two lovers are finally united and supporting each other Thank you for bringing this story to a happy, very satisfying ending with no lose ends. The good guys succeeded and the two evil beings received a fitting ending.. -
Will and Travis are going to have some hot sex, But I think he needs to sober up. Kendo has found Travis's late night weakness and will , I bet, exploit it when he returns
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I think Johnny can build upon this approach and attitude and help create a healthy mindset and help him better treat others and himself.
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A tense mission accomplished successfully in an alien vessel. Now they could relax in the shuttle returning to their ship. Jace decided Leo needed to laugh so he proceeded to tickle his ribs and Leo's underarms. Leo fully and deeply laughed Jace kissed him t- add to their solid connection.
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Both wanted this. They made love. Both males experienced new levels of pleasure and understanding Aled went ahead almost fatalistically. He could only think of this weekend. " And deep down, beneath the heavy weight of the farm and the strict expectations waiting for him back in Wales, a heartbreaking thought solidified in Aled’s mind: This might be the one and only time I get to be entirely myself. My time." They have time to make love again and lie to each other about their possible shared futures, if they desired.
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Ishan will defy his grandfather, the sultan. He cannot kill his friends Wylan and Darien. He might help them and come up with a new solution for his future. Meanwhile, one of his brothers could kill the sultan.
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Hey, I live in Sacramento--I agree nothing happens here. I expect the telegraph operator might like the quiet lifestyle as long as he avoids the state politicians who work at the state capitol. People do not really grow oranges in the area--It is a very productive food growing area--olives, grapes for wine, almonds, apples, peaches, etc.
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Johnny changed his attitude. It started at work .He saw himself as an actor in a play and became calm and observant and very skilled, Nothing bothered him. He was very competent and kept his solid, practice actions. He was surprised at the end of the day to find he received some very generous tips, including some from troublesome people. He felt strangely validated. For something new, he went to a dinner to have a full breakfast. He realized his server was like him and he gave him a nice tip. In acting class, it was apparent to his teacher he had changed. She forced him to be more honest in his acting part. He tussled with another student who did not get his mindset. He spoke his mind and said it was the truth. "I felt like I had arrived." What a glorious feeling.
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Wow--Your fans expect another murder But, none of the main characters seem aware that another death is likely. If another death happens, it should raise the tension levels. Will Lawrence be able to see any connections between the murders. Ever read the First Deadly Sin? The killer was finally found but it was very difficult to discover who the killer was. He was mentally deranged and killled at random.
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BTW, Julian should have taken the shot and killed Raymod of Toulouse. He must continue be an evil sore threatening death on Darien and Wylan
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You have just painted a picture of a very formidable army that has a tested leader, Darien. Raymond has fanatics and lots of them, Baldwin must be weakened. Baldwin can incite Raymond but can he help him with men. Khalid is arriving soon with heavy calvalry to lay waste to Baldwin's land The sultan has sent Ishan to Jerusalem to get a treaty agreement with the Egyptian occupiers, He is to wait till when the crusaders and Egyptians fight intensely ."And when they are both broken," Arslan whispered, "I want you to light the match."
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The ending was magical, Sky and Brant felt so pleased at the location and with the people in the crew, and the movie. David gave a wonderful speech and champagne toast, Everyone felt very good. Sky, Brant and Rachoud went back together. Seems Rachoud had some male partners over the 7 weeks They all ended up at the Ford house for a meal and break before they went their own ways. Sky begged off from his parents to sleep and then have time to thinks Sky and Brant need to agree on their new public steps. They have attracted great interest and need to carefully act. But, they will really have to decide what both of them want to do emotionally and romantically.
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Of course, Lawrence was a disaster in his first fencing class. He was given no real instruction. Anton roughed him up. He was first to take on Lawrence, He wanted to assert him dominance, Norris continued his punishment, Bastien came to him but left upset when he saw Lawrence was given the helmet of the dead Lukas Lawrence is clearly the odd man out. At least someone is trying to unsettle him. Others just think little of him. Some are paying attention to him. He left the changing area knowing Anton and Abelard roomed next to Lukas time to play spy>
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Epilogue V - Castle Renovations
akascrubber commented on dragonthusiast's story chapter in Epilogue V - Castle Renovations
The chapter shows the new relationships. Neven and Denir will marry. Yarima, Enlin and Mhaly will marry New types of marriage are becoming possible. -
Will something terrible happen at the full moon ceremomy?
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They saved the ship. They did deserve a celebration Jace backed Leo into an alcove and mercilessly tickled Leo until he was wrung out and gave up---mmm
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Chapter 14: PORT HAVEN
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 14: PORT HAVEN
Saved by the hard-wired laws "A robot may not injure a human being, or, through inaction, allow a human being to come to harm. A robot must obey the orders given it by human beings, except where such orders would conflict with the First Law. A robot must protect its own existence, except where such protection would conflict with the First or Second Law." Lukas loves Eriks and wants to fuck him often They are on their way back to stop Tripp--This will be very dangerous -
Chapter 13: THE EXILE
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13: THE EXILE
I think Rikard would be angry, He must have plans and Tripp has gotten in the way -
Chapter 13: THE EXILE
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13: THE EXILE
Tripp should not get over competent and think just about Lukas ending Eriks. His rule over the constructs may not be assured I do not think Rikard will give up so easily after some code is written. He must have an alert system and backup measures to assure he remains in control after the inconvenience caused by Tripp. -
Darien, Wylan and the Vanguard have to clear enemies that want them dead Baldwin of Edessa and his men who feel they were robbed of their treasure Raymond of Toulouse who sees Wylan as a threat to his fanatical religious rule. He had the bishop poisoned to prevent his opposition
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Brant is committed to a loving relationship with Sky. They will be tested when they return home He is very forceful and he sealed the deal fucking Sky twice as asked “Sky, I’m not lying when I say I love you. I honestly am not sure about my orientation, but there is no question in my mind that at this moment in my life being in love with you is the most real thing there is. It is my truth and my reality. I want to be with you in a full, loving, sexual relationship, openly and without some stupid shame or fears of rejection.”
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Noah is going to strip and have a good time with a naked Chase. I hope his spirits are lifted.
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Noah is troubled, but he is fortunate to have the love and support of close, caring family members
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Chapter 13: THE EXILE
akascrubber commented on Topher Lydon's story chapter in Chapter 13: THE EXILE
Yes, keep fucking again--because it feels so good and you will love this science experimant It will keep you both alive
