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  1. Never took either of you for being potty mouths
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 19

    Much better explanation than I expected.Miles had serious burried issues with his dad and sister. He knew he and Troy had a too red hot love going. The bottom line--he felt he needed to leave to not stop Troy from pursuing his dreams. There are so many issues and you covered them You gave us another cliffhanger. Miles is going to see Troy in Virginia and hopes Owen can be present I do hope the three meet and work out a peaceful and comfortable modus vivendi. I especially hope Owen will no longer be worried that Troy wants to be with Miles, instead of him
  3. Love the new picture of Hollis and others on the command center of the ultra-modern USS Zodiac. They look very alert and competent and have risen to the occasion. Now tested, Hollis and the ship have a Number one and Number Two.
  4. Andrew reached the CIA and PM Hesston and asked for help while they were in the American Embassy compound. Andrew is going to get more ammo and small arms fire to aim at the local terrorists and keep them away until an American airstrike can stop them If things work out in the favor of the Carters, they will flee and look for two other diplomatic compounds. The know the British compound is surrounded. The insurgents from the palace will not give up looking for them.
  5. At my favorite local English place, the Fox and Goose, I enjoy my scone of the day with Devonshire or clotted cream and jam
  6. akascrubber

    Chapter 15

    Julian feels at peace. Daniel notices it. He knows Julian is waiting for someone to arrive. The actions to prepare a festive celebration are carried out with Julian's imprint: shining stars from a tree, a festive wrapped fence , individual generous monetary gifts for the workers plus toys for the kids. Christmas will make a happy impact on the families
  7. Flip helped Hollis realize they were in an alternative reality. " "We have a billion-credit starship, and we are still the exact same miserable, unqualified idiots flying it." Why are they in this new reality? Is some force or being in charge over them? Are they going to be attacked?
  8. Colonel Yusuf al-Maghrabi looked at the wrecked BTR 50 and the area and just knew where the Canadians would wrongly end up . They would flee to the American Embassy seeking protection, but fail. The Americans had evacuated their embassy, unlike the British who stayed. Andrew is going to realize he and Will are now trapped and the insurgents surround them. Can he find a way out not known to the enemy? Does CSIS or MI6 have any contacts in the city that could help them? West has found a way to have the enemy machine gun dstroyed, but created a huge explosion inside the compound. Peter creatively told the kids in the vault that it was a dragon sneezing. He comforted the kids and kept his story up. The people inside the embassy continue to survive.
  9. Cal and Nos are finally united in having glorious, passionate sex. The description of Cal's horns and tale glowing were fascination. Cal is so excited and his tale has been growing longer. They are a happy, fulfilled couple. Orion apologized to Nos for his past insensitive actions and hopefully cleared the air.
  10. akascrubber

    Chapter 26

    Raith started out very angry at Azula and kept his anger hot as he spoke to him. Azula did not tell him of his plan to present the foreign offer and to break the sword of the Baselius. He could have been killed. It had to be a surprise for everyone to work and it did. Together with the evidence Raith provided, the Sura Clan was exhonorated They broke apart and harshly spoke as Azula left for his home. They needed time to decompress. Raith at home realized Azula's home was not ready for him and ordered the needed material and food Raith visited Azula to see if he was satisfied. The tensions dissolved at their next meeting. Azula said he was no longer a morning chief after 6 years. He could make a promise and he did. He told Raith he loved him and Raith told him he loved him. They placed a braid in each other's head to show their commitment The night became joyous and passionate. These two strong men are united
  11. Yes and the little one, the mouse, always gets away Sorry, T'Virith
  12. Collectively, the Zodiak crew survived their challenges and surprisingly joined forces with the enemy ship to become victorious. Everyone held a final celebration. T'Virith and Hollis knew the truce held for now in respect. Later, the Zodiak will be hunted.
  13. Will knows the people in the palace want him for a hostage and leverage. Al-Maghrabi wants Will to make his faction more powerful. Andrew is not needed and might be killed. Time is short. They are trying to escape. With the DSO killed West is in charge. He authorized lethal force. Good. But, the situation is grim. This is not 55 Days in Peking with a multinational rescue force on the way.
  14. Jack and Vince feel happy and accepted by the pack and Theo's parents. They learned the Whiteflame still...." guards the realm to prevent all kinds of evil from spilling into the worlds." They still need to react with others in the real world.
  15. Jake survived the horrible night in his dorm and left to get coffee and admire Kody again. He almost asked him out on a first date, but things got awkward when Max walked in and saw him behind the counter. Will Jake apply for a job?
  16. What does it say about Voss that she fixates on a synthetic human who is scared of her?
  17. They always seem to survive and they did not have to eat the foul, alien based chili Enough of Barium Silicate or the Slug's kidney stone was brought back to keep the ship running. Poor Guy! He is Counselor Voss's singular object of affection and hates it.
  18. So--this is like the TV show 24 hours ! West drove Peter and Jacob through the rioting crowds to safety at the British Embassy Will and Andrew are at the palace and cut off from them. The palace has been attacked. Andrew is leading Will away. Will has lost his glasses and needs to follow Andrew This is a violent, unpredictable situation
  19. akascrubber

    Prologue

    What a horrible story of peoplewho will not take any more punishment and repression. The dictator's 42 year old reign seems to be coming to any end. This country will go through a great upheaval. Lots of lives will likely be lost. Why are West and Peter in Tripoli? They are in danger and West feels it.
  20. Will Carter faced the most serious political disaster of his career. He held his seat but the Liberal Party was down to a small standing in Parliament. He has to decide what to do and find allies. Julian Defresne, his sociopathic opponent, will take over the control of his party. The country is undergoing a severe financial crisis and needs international help. The PM appoints as his trade representative to find help from the Chinese i Hong Kong. He does not know Andrew is going to be with him to stop the FSB hidden role in the crisis. Andrew will face multiple efforts to stop him and kill him. Chinese intelligence will be watching him. This is a fascinating ,complex story worthy of a Carter tale. You need to read on to the end through the back and forth contours of the plot to find out who wins and loses.
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  21. akascrubber

    Chapter 25

    The presentation beforenthe court was detailed but eventually the Sura clan was exonerated. The Baselius apologized to Azula. The Dowager Basilinna Olneth was confined to her quarters under heavy guard and stripped of her privileges, Investigations were ordered with a two week deadline. This was all good news. I do not think those who benefited from the Sura Clan disgrace will be inactive. They might kill key people and sabotage the investigation. Raith needs to be watchful. Azula still needs to decide whether or not to support Lyria.
  22. What a good. conclusive final chapter. There are no loose ends. Andrew and Yani indirectly saved the economy. Will accepted his backbench role and plans for the future. Andrew and Will's family and friends are comfortably together. Now, what is going to disturb their lives next?
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    Miles gave him the push he needed Then left Troy was strong enough to follow his dream. Owen became part of his life
  24. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    Troy needs closure He asked the key question "Miles, Why did you leave me?"
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