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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 20

    Awesome chapter--The red dragons have now all been killed and the fighters need to recover. Xavier sent Mablin along with some others to the outside of the cave to see that his caravan is in good shape. Meanwhile Xavier kept some back ostensibly to check out the battlefield. However, the real purpose was to find and renew the Sand Dragon Archive which has the important Sand Dragon records. No one has visited in 11,000 years. Xavier was accepted as the Prime in place of his father. Olga was accepted as the Archivist in place of her father. Great magic was involved in their identification. They both have things to read and have taken memorial objects. Their friends was taken into the archives and waited for Xavier and Olga to complete their introductions to their duties. I wonder how they will be changed? They were surprised at the end by a cry outside their stitting area that dead people were found who seemed to be alive? There is a great potential for disruption around the caravan during the next day. Xavier and crew will return by daylight. Two search parties are being sent out to look for the source of the unexpected red dragon deaths. One search party will be of dragons and the other will fly on griffins. One should eventually find the caravan and a investigative team from Kandric's army members will likely contact the caravan and be greatly surprised by what they find. BTW, the rogue great red dragon prince was not in the cave and therefore was not killed. Rovner may still have a new mission for Garnet/Xavier. This is fascinating, I cannot wait to read the next chapter.
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    By the end we realize that Nick is halucinating and has created a rich, complex fantasy world while he is in a coma. He is coping as well as possible. His real mate Malcolm is his very attentive husband who stays by his beside in the real world. Nck has someone who really cares for him. I agree with others that this could be a first chapter to a longer story. There is lot of potential to expand on the story elements.
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    Chapter 33

    I am a dedicated Kandric fan--along with related spin offs. With his new information, I am very encouraged to learn that Kyle is moving ahead on chapter 34. I know he sets his own pace and limits. There were so many unresolved twists and turns that a new large chapter will be very satisfying. Chapter 33 stands out on the website for its first of a kind length and complex subject matter. I hope he is open to keep his various story lines moving in his new chapter 34 and leaves some drama for his following chapter 35.
  4. I like the term--"reminiscence therapy" At the end, Greg accepted what was happening with him and Vaughn as therapy. Greg began to talk more about his experiences with Mitchell. Len explained in private that Greg has yet to explore all of his experiences and feelings about his explotation, Vaughn is preparing to write an article about Greg and has conceptualized an exhibit that includes Greg. Vaughn is going to expand his writing subject matter and Greg will be helped. Greg and Len have great ideas to develop the Priory and are very hopeful. Greg seems ready to be more open. Len fully supports him.
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    Chapter 5

    Cedric needs a marriage and wants Rileywho becomes scared and uncertain. He feels he would be a prostitute. But, Cedric would pay off all his debts and family bills. So, Riley is polling his friends for advice. I bet he will accept Cedric's proposal and then the fun will begin. Both are going to enter into new territory.
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    Chapter 1

    Two young people became united around a historic walled garden. Their interests blossomed into love and eventually marriage and ownership of the garden and house. They are kind hearted, lovely people with supportive parents. What a delightful, upbeat, encouraging story of shared interests that grow into love and commitment.
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    Chapter 1

    Two friends bond and begin to say they love each other. Kittens unite them and they share a new one, Minnie, at the end. What a touching,feel good story that is going to get better for the young men and their cat as time moves along.
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    Chapter 10

    Marc and Janet are becoming more comfortable and expressive. Marc steals times to kiss. Finally, Marc tells Bryan off. Their relationship has ended. Bryan was not able to go public and show his sexual feelings for Marc which upset Marc.
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    Chapter 19

    Thw hard themes--Alec finds out his parents erased hhim from their lives. It hurt, He is going to see his sick mother in the hospital. He wants to go alone. He knows River will help him and tells River that message. Secondly, River fled Kenji. They need to discuss their relationship face to face and will do it when he gets back. Kenji is in the dark, River does not want to lose Kenji , but is uncertain what Kenji wants.
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    Chapter 15

    Andrew has given Matt unexpected financial freedom and choices. Matt is going to London to get his legal papers and is thinking about seeking out his former lover in Turkey. Can he really find Ahmet? Will he be accepted by him? Ahmet supposedly is not living as a gay man to his family who would reject him. Is it too soon to seek out Ahmet? Matt has not gone thrrough any counselling to help his come to grips with his slavery and abuse. Meanwhile, Andrew and Maeve are going to miss him. They like Matt. Andrew cannot yet figure out or express his attraction for Matt. I bet they would welcome him back.
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    Chapter 9

    Their relationship is advancing. Marc has arranged for a hotel room Sunday, He and Janet can have real sex. Marc might be moving to consider him more than friends with benefits.
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    Thirty-Eight

    His past was grim and little physically is left of it, But, Keith has matured into a good and strong man and let his true character to blossom. He is much better than the limitations of his past. Plus, he has a good partner to help him to continue to grow. He needs to look ahead confidently.
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    Chapter 21

    The boys are in deeper trouble. They have found out thr real Marta has been killed and is hanging in the basement. Zdan has been severely beaten. Marta wants information. He did not know what she wanted. Who is the fake Marta? Who does she work for? If she eventually cannot get what she wants, She will let them die. Luck wants Zdain for his pleasure and maybe this will put off his death for a while. They are going to need outside help or they are lost. Who will help them? The goblin? or ????
  14. What a mess---I am looking foeward to find out how our author untangles this huge mess. I do not see how JJ and Will can reconcile this weekend and they are flying together when they leave CA.
  15. Rabbit boy is really trepressed. I hope he enjoyed his orgasm and sees his opponent differently. He might really sees him more favorably
  16. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    Nilus and Max finaly connect after 5 years. Max reveals his nature and attraction for the singer. Now, they going to eat at a food truck heaven. Both are going to get what they want, I believe. What a happy story. Thanks.
  17. akascrubber

    Chapter 14

    This transition is going much better than I expected. The pressure of fearing an owner was off. Matt became angry and felt he might be a tool or subject for a book but did not act violently or shoutout forcefully.He does not yet understand his new situation as a free man without a legal identity and with no demands for sex. The gentle care and kindness of Maeve soothed him. When Andrew explained he was seeking help to give Matt a rightful place in society, he realized Andrew could get into trouble. Andrew stated he has to tell the truth and any lies could come back to haunt them.In a sign of his acceptance, Matt asked to accompany Andrew on his walk. Matt will have time to decompress and talk as he wants. Maybe he will draw and read. The online image Andrew saw of him showed his ribs. He must need better food to come back to improved health. If painful things were physically done to him , he may need a doctor's care to recover. He could use some friends and possibly some counselling. BTW, he likely knows very little about his Arab owner or location that he could not be helpful very much to the police. Andrew needs to further come to grips with his feelings and motivations. Matt caught his eye at the auction. He wanted to save him if he could and asked Dante to keep him in mind. Is he hoping Matt would be his friend at some point and maybe more later? He has thought that he would help Matt get home. Andrew wants a real boyfriend. Matt is only a distant possibility at this time.
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    Chapter 5

    Ricky really is playing the field. He has at least 4 fuck buddies-not bf or friends with benefits. He took care of Red and Larry who are central to him. He engineered them getting together and then becoming an item. He will not have time for them when he is on an extended tour. He has decided to compose and prepare an album and be ready to tour. He is so happy with his new career move and is helping his two good friends find each other as a partner. Lett us see after sowing his oats , if Ricky finds his real boy friend while singing.
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    Chapter 8

    Excellent--Marc took the initiative and now he and Janek are now an item. The had an extended honest talk and kissed and hugged . No sex play yet---Jacek agrees with the concept of friends with benefts. They will get together again when their schedules connect. Their comms are linked. Janek is very pleased, Marc thinks he might be his first actual boyfriend. Bryan is history to Marc.
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    Chapter 13

    His new home is so different for Matt. It will take time and swome exploration for Matt to understand where he is and who are now going to be supporters. For now his new place, Maeve, the storm and the island are his anchors. He is expecting a new "master". He cannot accept any other arrangement yet. The turmoil of his discarding by his old master, the pain of the market and the uncertainty of the sea transit have to weigh heavily on Matt's mind. I hope he can continue to meditate. Tomorrow he should meet his new owner. He will expect sexual favors will be required and might see them as his way to pay for his life--for now. A might act inappropriately sexual at first. I am betting Andrew will surprise him at first glance. Then when he says he is freed, he may find it hard to accept. But, he will need to transition to his new life and not act out. He was a whore--forced, but a plaything for a male. With the pressure off, he has to find a new self concept.I hope he can recover without long term guilt or pain and find inner peace. I hope he lets Andrew help him. We will see.
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    Chapter 18

    Wow--It is happening. Alec and River are going home and will confront their demons. It is not going to be easy and they might easily find their mental health issues enflamed. Alec's mother is in the hospital. River gets to meet his dominating mother. River is thinking through how he can support them both. He will compose more erotic pics for sale.Right now his focus is on Alec and his needs, At some point, he must consider Kenji. The new visit to his place showed Kenji wanted to be with him. As Kenji mentioned, they needed to reconsider their relationship. I think he wants to go beyond the contract. River has not yet been thinking is a different way. Kenji is going to have to initiate the discusion. He, I think, will reallly miss River if he stays way too long. What will Kenji say if River tells him he is leaving?
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    Lunch and Tea

    What wonderful excursions and meals ! Dan and Vaughn thoughtfully found ways to join Gran and Mother in two separate events that let them shine and remember their happy pasts. The descriptions were as usual colorful, insightful and evocative. The men did not leave untouched. Gran is going to connect them with estate agents so at least Dan can mover closer to Vaughn, Mother wants to go to the Priory , a place where where some friends used to live. A trip will be arranged for the three. Matters always seem to interconnect.
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter 4

    The ordinary guy achieved two recent great sucesses in his career--A great song and a successful role in a broadway play, But then his love life became complicated--He was having sex with Red and began having sex with Larry, his manager. He was not going to tell his lovers about his sharing his sex life with two men. So, Ricky favors older men and thinks he can keep secrets--What can go wrong?
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    Chapter 7

    Bryan's strange behavior and rudeness makes him history to Marc. But, now he learns Janek is being treated for problems in part because of an infatution with him. In the end Marc cuts his mining effort short to travel to Janek . He is concerned. Does Marc really want to be involved with Jakek's issues? He really only wants a friend with benefits. He is going to investigate him more to learn more about Janek.
  25. akascrubber

    Thirty-Seven

    They seem to need to come to grips with their dads who formed them. They will be stronger and better adjusted after their exploration, I bet, "Both he and Thomas had Fathers who were, in a way, demons. Thomas was going to have to come to accept his Father’s ambivalence (to put it mildly) and Keith his Father’s violence in the face of their being gay."
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