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Now we find out Ghil rejected Logan's advances and is terrorized by him at the office. Ghill isnot very socially aware but he made the right decision with Logan Now later at night he finds a strange bird sized form on the top floor that has a hole to the night sky. It is odd looking amd membrane covered. He takes it home and hides it from his cat. Ghil is very protective of it. So this adventures better unfolds. What did he rescue? Is he in danger?
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Will he get into trouble seeking out a professor ,a grad student or staff member? John needs to be careful now that he knows what he wants.
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California, Here We Come.
akascrubber commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in California, Here We Come.
I am wondering, if the evidence gathering about Kris is mistaken. Maybe, it is a weak hope. When he hears what is reported , will Kris say this is for another branch of his extended family--the ones not revealed in polite company? Many in the former East Germany collaborated with their rulers and spied and reported on their neighbors to the secret police. The Stasi, East German secret police, were known to be exceptionally effective and ruthless. Anyone, though with Nazi roots would have tried to keep their history hidden. The Communists would have imprisoned and killed any Nazis unless they were useful--like scientists. Never the less, any discussion of his family wll be painful. -
They endured the journey through the portal and retreived enough crystals--even though Nathan was injured. A trip to a healer confrmed Nathan was mortally wounded by the gobling bites, He was given a month to live with the end being very painful. Nathan chose to not tell Brohm so as to not make him sad and keep their happiness for as long as possible. It is a mistake that can make his end time even more painful and mentally depressing. They will meet the scholar in two days. Nathan's time is limited. He wants to succed in their quest. Will he take risks protecting Brohm knowing he will die soon? Will some miracle happen to keep him alive?
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Party time at the Villa Torronia
akascrubber commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Party time at the Villa Torronia
So, a rent a crowd and rent a critic? The dscriptions of the mixed group was fascinating and painted bold word pictures like the futurist paintings on display. Dan , the ever aware security man, noticed the odd mixings of people and discussions. He suspected dodgy illicit dealings of an as of yet undefined nature that supported the expenses of the owners. Meanwhile, Vaughn sensed but was not certain that the owner's son was gay and appeared to be advertising his nature. Tomorrow is another day to see what developes. -
California, Here We Come.
akascrubber commented on Mark Arbour's story chapter in California, Here We Come.
Luke and Claire are hapily getting along. This is very good JJ is acting up and being nasty. He is going to ruin things if he does not self correct. The news on Sunday could be devastating. We will see !- 31 comments
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Ok--nice set up When he is 18 Johnny decides he is gay and likes older men. His uncle is going to set him up with his first sexual partner who is an older man. In the fall, Johnnny will start Harvard. If he acts like his uncle, he will hide evidence of his wealth to make sure people like him for who he is not how much money he has. He better have a convincing story.
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Stay to the end to find who will help Scott find the help he needs. It will all become clear. This story speaks to character of the people involved. Scott needs to find the right people. He does. This is true to the generous spirit of the late Carlos Hazday.
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Chapter Twenty-Four: Void
akascrubber commented on drown's story chapter in Chapter Twenty-Four: Void
This will be a new world. Chronos was banned, But, he said the constructs will not give up control easily Tke 4 are now united and on a great journey. The Triad has to be defined, powers found and understood, and the world made safer and more reasonable. " The path forward was uncertain, yet it seemed clearer that our connections, our new powers we still had to learn to control, and the wisdom gained from places as mysterious as Ginnungagap and Ginnregin would guide us in the challenges to come." Now we need to see who and what they become and how they create and stand off and replace the constructs. Things are so new. It will be very interesting -
To The Medical Center We Go
akascrubber commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in To The Medical Center We Go
What a great love fest in the waiting area. People connected and hugged and were tickled. Everyone was made part of the extended family and group. Both injured boys returned from successful treatment. They will need follow-up care and need to be careful. Levie is wearing a sling and has limited mobility This is time to celebrate the care care the boys received and acknowledge their much better health. Looking at what happened can wait till later. Unknown to the people in the hospital, an evil man is hidden away and can cause more trouble.. -
Tne two sides of the story are now shown--Matt is further along his sad path to sexual slavery and Andrew has started slowly his investigation. It looks like Matt is going to be a sexual pawn soon. Andrew is entering a region where his life is on the line. How he meets and seeks to save Matt will be fascinating and maybe very scary.
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One Parent Full of Shit, and a Foster Parent Waits
akascrubber commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in One Parent Full of Shit, and a Foster Parent Waits
Surprisingly, Bruce's father is sharper than expected. He got Bruce to admit he was a sexual predator and is going to see he sees a therapist. He went to see Manny and Bass wgo agreed to a mutual legal truce. Manny and Bass offered to pay the medical bills for Bruce, Bruce left Rocky alone and told another guy to do the same. School is peaceful The doctor suggested Manny get an artificial arm since a transplant is years away. It will be expensive. Manny talked to the estate lawyer. Adpotion of Rocky would solve the financial problem since payment for his med billls in full would then be possible. It is up to Rocky to agree. -
Return to School, and a Confrontation or Two
akascrubber commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Return to School, and a Confrontation or Two
What a mess! Rocky beats up his sexual predatorr at school. No one knes the whole story, Rocky is suspended for a week. His enemy is in the hospital, The injured boy's father calls Manny and is abusive, He denies his son forced himself on Rocky. He shows up and is shocked three times at the gate. The interactions are recorded. He is not very smart. Next time, should involve the lawyers and the therapist. Rocky needs help and a resolution of his psychological pain. Justice moves slowly and this matter might take time to resolve.- 42 comments
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Keith and Thomas are going the extra mile to learn about Micheal Atkinson and his works They travled to meet two experts and saw a small exhibit. They received useful information about his works and restoration. I think Keith is better prepeared to do a careful, well crafted restoration of the project he has. He met the board and they were eventually suppportive of his work plan for the art proect. He knows he has a interested board member and funder , Isobel Bonner, who he really needs to please. He agreed to talk to her ladies group next week, He knows he has to keep her support. Thomas is helping him prepare his talk. Keith seems very wedded to carrying out this proect in a responsible way Along the way, Thomas joined his football team after practice and conveyed lots of interesting facts to them which won ther praise. Keith's mates like Thomas. They are a very good team.
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Ellina is now a werewolf and has joined the Greymere pack, Yidian in Simon's body has sex over and over, ending with Connor. But, Yidian is bound to Auren Qualls. He loaded up a jar with semen for his use.
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OMG--Rabiah has them entering fractional dimensions to capture and bring back black crystals--This is so dangerous. If they get enough crystals, then they will have the next step towards opening a way home for the demon. But, then they must steal the key to the restricted area from the librarian or kill him. Can they complete their tasks safely? Can they trust Rabiah to carry out her word or will she try to rule this demon? Will Nathan stay healthy enough and not be held back by his bites?
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The war wounded, lipless vet has come for Bartos. I am sure Darren will go with him if the lipless man can convince them' They are not safe from the Shaddow Cross. This is one more building block to this story.
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It is probaby a mistake, Weinerdog. Disney World is nearby in Orlando.
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Love the idea of John Wick style justice But, I think Matt is going to be trafficked the next day and eventually sold to a wealthy predator who might use him untill he is tired of him. He then might be sold off to a gay brothel or killed unless some hero finds him and saves him I am only guessing. I think this is a very promising story concept
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Rocky is facing too many traumas--death of parents, Manny shot and now remembering a sexual predator at his new school. He does need counseling and very supportive friends. He should watch out for Bruce and maybe observe those in his orbit. Bass and Manny need to consider informing the police.
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Amazing--they are a very happily married couple. Connor dotes on his kids. They have three with twins on the way. He wants lots more. M keeps getting pregnant . Julie is a great babysitter. Connor drives a truck and M is becoming a nurse. Life has turned out very well for these folks. No one from far away has appeared.
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Wow--a trip to Itlay and a a stay in a villa brings out an idea of marriage. It seems a comfortable idea. They even talked about moving in together and other options. The place relaxed them and they were really enjoying themselves. But,, soon they will be on display and need to be congenial.
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I am very hopeful that the epilog will tie the loose ends up and maybe hint about any future stories Thanks for this story.
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Love the fight--Two bad guys killed. Greg ran away from the agent and being controlled. Connor was needed. M and Connor doubled team and killed the agent by bashing his head in and opening his jugular. He is truly dead. Mother is injured. M will try to fix her. They drove back to the baby. M wants to take care of Liam. Nathan wanted to go to the hospital. His girl woke up and is having a baby.Conner went along and planned on getting his broken ribs repaired It is over.New life will be the focus now. No more aliens will get in the way--unless there is a sequel.
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After a meandering ride, they reach a motel. M gives birth in the pool--because he wanted to use it. Baby Liam is born and residing in a motel room. M and Mother go out to face the agent and his aidess. M will not let Connor follow him. Connor intends to leave Liam with Nathan and Marcus and help M--even if he said no. This is very dangerous.
