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Have You Ever Been in Love Before?
akascrubber commented on Laura S. Fox's story chapter in Have You Ever Been in Love Before?
A wonder ending, Thank you, Laura They in love and are going to get married. They will face the future very happy and hopeful. Otis and Hudson are right for each other. -
Chapter 57 - The Bonanza, Part 3
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 57 - The Bonanza, Part 3
Queens all around. Everyone had a great time with no one worried. What a needed break ! Soon the hunt will restart. -
The man in black found them in a Wal-Mart. He has been tracking them the whole time.I bet he put a tracker in Hannah. He claimed M was dead and he wants M and the baby. M saved them by pushing the cart at him. But Bradley is hurt and needs medical help. What is going to happen to her? They are screwed and are just fleeing to Florida. They have no plan and might run out of gas too soon. M and Connor will fight the man in black when they are traped, if and when it comes to the end. They badly need help!
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Chapter 56 - The Bonanza - Part 2
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 56 - The Bonanza - Part 2
Fiirst off--the food provided sounds wonderful.I am hungry and want to chose some of the offerings. The audience must be happy and very satisfied. Then we find out the three divas are good singers and want to find out who likes who. At the end, the three decide they are attracted to each other and will be a throuple. Wow! Life is good. -
Chapter 55 - The Bonanza, Part 1
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 55 - The Bonanza, Part 1
What a happy time at the bar. After all the killing and trauma, this fullscale entertainment is so joyous and being appreciated by all. -
Poor Juan--slashed and trashed. The 4 will be on the case formally or informally. Ken and Joe and the boys and maybe some consultants will make a real difference, I bet
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What a rollercoaster ride--ups and down JJ and Kris are comming to visit. It was analyzed fully by many as it is natural for the group. They agreed JJ and Kris will be welcomed. Jake with the translation help of Travis is working on the legal case Kris has. It is a big weekend, Will leaves soon with Marie for Harvard. Travis and Will have discussed the move and both see it as the right step. But, I can see they both are going to be going through severe withdrawls from ther separation. The big meal ended with a discussion over Claire and Jack. Is Claire going to try to help Jack adjust? The pain is very evident. She is not willing to say she wants to re-connect with him.
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The three found they had many things in common. Keith was so sharp and acerbic. Thomas kept having revelations and took time to think and consider his relationship with Keith which made him very happy. The commentary is wonderful and very educational for me, an American. The trip has been a success. The two males might come back in the fall for game .
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Slowly things are moving along Simon is with Vale and being taken for a long walk. She has lots to tell him. I hope he returns to the present and is able to take out Lord Crusnik. Connor as a wolf has been found by Yidian and Lord Crusnik. Yidian is taking hm away. I hope Connor is safe. The next chapter should be very enlightening and maybe very scary for Lord Crusnik.
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Chapter 54 - Blood
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 54 - Blood
The inhabitants pulled together to clean up the town. It seems 26 liters of blood may not be enough--oh no! But for now, they are going to attend a drag show celebraton--wowi -
Nathan is a mess.He killed Tran in a dark alleyway and took his coin purse so it looked like robbery, However, he felt so guilty and full of remorse that he pushed Brohm away and walked to a bar/pub and drank himself almost to the end. A good samaritan, Cormac, picked him up and helped him get home. In themorning, he found it so hard to reconnect with Brohm, but he was pursued and loved. Nathan reconcoled with him and they realized they had to help each other. Nathan is full of guilt for what he has done. He thinks Brohm should walk away. Brohm refuses and sees good in him and them. Brohm is the savior for Nathan. Now, they have to get their guildhouse up and running.
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Chapter 53 - Answers
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 53 - Answers
The last of the godstrolls was killed after saying they were hired to get revenge. The real enemy was identified....“I.C.U.A. does not care about tiny islands. I.C.U.A. is taking power.” The godstroll ships flew away to safety. Let us hope with all the dead godstroll bodies that enough blood is available. Peace is reigning in Bouilla Bay now. -
Finley and his older brother, Uther, have a video call. Finley describes his problem. Uther thinks Finley's dragon is going through puberty. Finley is shocked his human side is way past puberty. Uther says he needs to consult a library and will get back to him. Finley is worried that his dragon and human side might be at odds with each other. I hope they have a new conversation soon. Finley feels something like jealousy that Emmett is seeing Dex.-----And who really is Emmett?
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Good start--Corey is being stalked and influenced in some way. He needs more sleep. His handsome roommate seeks comfort him and will accompany him around campus when he can. Corey thinks he just saw his stalker and he vanished There is much more to develop......
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I can see why a wealthy guy no matter what ethnic background wants an NDA if he wants protection from being sued for any reason. It appears Kenji is ready with an NDA for sexual maters. Also, Kenji wants agreement to what they will and will not do so there will be no protests. He says the scenes will happen as he is free and, as he understands, they are not in a relationship or having a long term commitment. River is the sub. NDA's have been around for years and not a product of recent controveries. Companies might have employees sign then to prevent loss of company secrets when they leave. The FTC does not like this.
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Chapter 52 - Violence in the Streets
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 52 - Violence in the Streets
drsawzall You posted several good questions, I hope many are answered soon. I want to know who is directing the BC. The ones faced so far do not appear to have the intelligence to plan and direct attacks. I remember seeing Starship Troopers years ago and the enemy was composed of different type insects with various roles. They searched and found a head beatle and the fight on the planet was lost by the insects -
A few helpful insights-- "I’m aware we’re not dating. With that being said, do we just meet up, do questionable things, and then go our separate ways once they’re over?” --Yes--- ....... A partial list of agreed upon kinks--"I went over them one-by-one. Choking, breath play, sensory deprivation, consensual nonconsent, Shibari, and so on. It was an extensive list." At just over 47,000 words we are about half-way through your goal of 100,000 words, There is so much more to explore--Hooray!
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What an interesting, productive meal at Xi. They compared likes and River agreed that he and Kenji were compatible. ( Thanks for the short list) Many items or kinks are fine with him. He did not like doing anything associated with a bathroom. Kenji set up a time for their first scene. It was not soon enough for River, but Kenji said he was very busy and often far away. He range of languages is impressive. Kenji said they were having , in essence, individual meetings and not dates. They were not having a relationship--no kissing. He understood River did not want one which was correct. Let us see how things develop as they interact. " Despite all odds, I liked Kenji. We were obviously compatible and if he could exert enough control to make my mind settle, I didn’t see a downside."
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We great conversations and interconnections. Vaugh has so many friends and acquaintances to meet for meals and such. Heyward keeps coming up. Vaughn is sought for more art advice and pulled into giving a talk for a modest payment at a charity connected discretely to Heyward. Vaughn is going to be asked back by Heyward at some time to asdvise on art work placement, etc. Vaughn is learning more about Heyward and his finances. Rumors, only, suggest he is limiting his spending and may have difficulties. They have been suggestions of overrating his assets to get financing. I do not know about the UK, but it cannot happen to pubically traded sources in the US and such doing business in the US. The lender has to make an independent appraisal and be convinced the assests are sound. If Heyward was trying to pull a fast one, he would be found out and no one would lend to him. Of course,he could use off book or private--not regulated-lenders and they might not be ones that want to be disappointed or else. Vaughn is being more closely drawn into Heyward's orbit. Dan is right now along for the ride. They are having a good time so far.
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Chapter 52 - Violence in the Streets
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 52 - Violence in the Streets
Awesome--Lyoth is given the mysterious black sword and proceeds to kill all but one godstrolls and that one is next. He does not understand the sword's capability but it is marveous and totally effective. Thank you Quigley ! The Bocian Contingent is going down. -
Taking that First Step
akascrubber commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Taking that First Step
Wonderful progress Bass had his first sexual experience with a man and they both loved it. I see it will be slow going but they both are very happy. Rocky was his usual impertanent self and his big mouth got him in trouble asking about their sex lives. He learned a good lesson and has been punished. He only had to wash dishes for two days, The three are bonding better with stronger guidelines.- 41 comments
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How can they be safe as long as the MIB is around and the government wants them ? Mother has to help the two become invisible. Otherwise, one of their two enemies will capture them to study and likely end their lives after they have the data they want.
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It was a scam and the girl could still not talk honestly. Someone has paid $100,000 last week to her and Marco. The two will be thoroughly investigated and all involved will be told the truth. Ken and Joe celebrated by making passionate love. They intended to take a break and vacation in warm South Beach. You can bet trouble will arise in Florida !
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Chapter 51 - Lifeless Worlds
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 51 - Lifeless Worlds
Oh No Danger Danger-- The next planets on the list were destroyed--but they found put the godstrolls were headed to Boullia Bay The Galaxy Surfer is going to head to to Bouiila Bay as soon as possible with motivated fighters. I hope they kill the godstolls and get enough blood. -
They are in deep dodo. Driving away on the Interstate with no real goal--maybe Florida. But they are in Iowa and have onlty $100 left after Hannah was robbed. Things will blow up soon. They will be so hungry and out of gas. Maybe, the car will be reported as stolen and the police will stop them? I can see two other possibilities for an intervention : the man in black will find them and steal M away or Mother will reappear and take M and Connor?
