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Getting Used to The Routine
akascrubber commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Getting Used to The Routine
Both Manny and Rocky finally seemed to get along and survive so far. Manny is learning more about the job. Needing to keep a gun shows security is more important than he first thought. The dad having so many weapons shows he was concerned. Is Manny going to have a big test to show is is the one for Rocky? BTW, Dear Author I am very glad you are able to express yourself in writing. That ability is a wonderful. quality. I could not write as much as you.- 34 comments
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Prince Millen surprised me. He was not first a warrior. He was a harried administrator who found it hard to be open to new ideas. It took constant re-reading and then to see a halfling to turn into a green warrior dragon to finally accept the fact they could change their skins. He did not know about sand dragons even though Xavier had written him using old magic. Once the Prince was able to act, he gave duties to his brother and chancellor and others. Green dragons hidding out will be located and killed. He does not want the green dragon changing capability to get out. Millen's brother, Prince Syl’b-urn, has to investigate who the sand dragons are. Are they real or were they real? He has found some incomplete ancient texts that mention the 13th dragon race, the sand dragons. They have been lost to history. Also he saw a mention of a Xavier who had 3 faces. He does not know what this means. What can he do next? I suggest he have the ones who sent in the reports to appear before him or send someone out for more information from them about Xavier. Xavier gave a Pantherling Elder and Silver Dragonling a letter to give to Prince Millen and they must know more about Xavier. BTW, if Xavier and Garnet lead the attack and do kill the rogue, troublemaking great red dragon, their names will be prominently known by others, I bet. Heck, they are close enough by Slome that their successful fight could grab the attention of the nearby Alphar and Garm leadership.
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Chapter 40 - The Eighth Location
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 40 - The Eighth Location
Hiding out on a distant planet, Suoki met the furry Voscijas he helped save from destruction and moved them to this planet. Suoki is to happy to learn how the population has grown and how friendly they are. He had a great meal and is now going to play cards with 4 brothers. -
OMG--Everything has changed.....Rovnar showed up in person and asked a huge favor! He wants Garnet his priest and Xavier and the fighters in the caravan to attack and kill a rogue Great Red Dragon who is causing great trouble,.Rovar wants him destroyed. Garnet asks for special amour for his student and he provides it. They will accept Rovnar's request. People in the caravan are shocked and uncertain at all the change and distress. The caravan and people are unexpectedly transported to swamps near Slome--maybe. They do not really know where they are. Lew and Lucas are sent out to find the enemy dragons. They succeeded and found a cave that promises to be the base of the red dragons . Garnet leads to forces into the cave and organizes them into a fighting triangle with everyone assembled to use their skills. It is the fighting form they used 11,000 years ago and won battles. They begin fighting rough , but not so tough beings and handled them easily. The chapter ends as they faced their first red dragon. What a cliffhanger! Will Garnet and Xavier change into their dragon skins to win ? So far, the fighting is very intense and very compelling. Our heroes are winning.....They are fearless. But, the battle is just beginning
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Laird recommended them and Shaw accepted them in the guild but he was not pleased with their not telling the truth. Setting up operations is not easy. The owner of the old tavern is a cranky hermit and is not open to selling the unused building. He was mad they came into his run down home. They are going to see him later with a gift. Strangely, a beggar seems to be able to see through their disguises. How can he do it? Will he cause trouble? The senator whose life they saved wants them to attend a party in a month. After a back and forth, they decided to go. Might something good result or do they need to be on their guard?
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Vaugh was the model of discretion to his friends who wanted salacious gossip. But, he did promise to be more forthcoming if he experienced things first hand at a Heyward party, Going to Club 122 made his friends jealous. Dan showed up with a coworker and made a good impression. It seems others want to know about Vaughn, the boyfriend and art critic who had the boss's interest. The two seem to be willing to experiment with bare outfits if they are challenged and are comfortable. Who knows what they might face and what Heyward really wants from them?
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The cop is getting what she wants--a blood test to connect M to the supposedly dead boy and evidence they are crazy. She is going to work toward having them locked up, I bet. If M is a medical freak-he cannot be an alien--then she will see he is turned over to the FBI for study, So far this is all off the books and the med person is helping the cop on the side. Connor is too pissed off and freaked out to suspect he and M are possibly facing trouble. The more he reads about babies, the more upset he gets. They are so messy and hard to handle. Besides, the baby cannot be his. It is 9 weeks old by the ultrasound and they have not been having sex for that long. He is rejecting M who feels terrible by Connor's terrible, accusing attitude. Connor does not consider the baby might grow faster in M. There is not concern, yet, for how M will give birth."Connor could support him and stand beside him, but this wasn’t his fault. This wasn’t his fucking baby… That’s the only way Connor could accept what was happening."
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Chapter 2: Foundations and First Impressions
akascrubber commented on Alan2's story chapter in Chapter 2: Foundations and First Impressions
Liam's introduction to the college has been very pleasant and welcoming. Daniel, his room mate, has put him at ease and introduced him to friends he also seemed to like. Now he is going to the incoming student lecture and Daniel later will help him find out about clubs he might like to join. Liam felt at ease and thought he might have found new home. I hope he is right. -
Ken jumped in and believed the girl. The exchanged some briefs family/personal details. She was invited to meet his family for thanksgiving dinner. Joe was cautious and rightfully so. He is going to have their glasses with DNA tested to see if they are closely related. He wants confirmng evidence. So, if she shows up and Joe has confirming evidence then their next meeting will be pleasant and convivial. We know she will be kidnapped. Is is going to happen before or after the Thanksgiving meal? They barely have enough data to find her if she goes missing now.
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Damn--Connor is a fatherl He is shocked beyond belief and initially very, very mad. Now he is searching the Internet for information. M bid not tell him he was pregnant. Mother did tests on M in the spaceship and did not tell him.M is going to need support and compassion. Heck, how will he deliver a baby? How long is the pregnancy? M and Connor are in the dark. Mother is not around to educate them. Only Mother should know what to do. How will Hannah react? The could be big medical news. The doctor might tell others --even anonymously --on line or publish an article not using names. It could give a hint to the man in black as to their location.
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Finley told the hard story of his last painful mission where only he and one other individual lived after a magical explosion in a cave. Noah seemed to understand. The others were aghast. Emmett kept sending other magical feelings of calm and helped to drive away Finely's worry and pain. Finley's dragon evoked a strong feeling--protect--which was new to him. Finley was special to him. After his military stories, Emmett wanted to go hime. He asked and Finley is leaving with him. What is going to happen next?
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OMG--Connor met Mother and he was freaked out and so scared. He was immobilized and distraught. At least the tracker is out. They are in the spaceship and will not return to Florida. They hopefully will not be found by by the man in black. Connor asked to be sent to South Dakota, his hometown.and that is the information she wanted. So Connnor and M will end up back where they started. M is supposed to explain what is going on now. Mother will not return for a while to hide from the man in blacK. Is Connor free of headaches? Is M pregnant or seriously ill? Hannah will want to see them and maybe the police who will want to know about the blood in the trailer. Life will not be calm.
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Damn--what a mess full of ups and downs The main in black got Connor fired by causing him to have a seizure and destroy a car M and Connor make love and truly enjoyed each other in a series of wonderful, passion filled times Gref arrives in the hotel and beats and bloodies Julie. Connor rushes in and pummels Greg and eventually is pulled off by the police. It is termed a domestic dispute.Who will be taken to the jail? Now, what will happen now that the police are involved? Julie will have the evidence and possible motivation new to file for divorce. Can she take the right step? Will Connor let Mother take him and then remove the tracker from his brain? They need freedom and to stop the man in black from enabling an invasion.
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Moving Day, and Multiple Surprises
akascrubber commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Moving Day, and Multiple Surprises
It is a new world for Manny. He is learning about the estate and staff. He liked the giant Bass and Bass is gay and likes him and that is a decided plus. The child , Rocky, is abit prejudiced and rigid. I think they will get along. The family had been connected to Russian crime interests. Rocky's parents were killed and Bass says the Russians were told Rocky and others did not want to be involved in their business. I hope they stay away. Bass says Manny needs to be trained to use a gun. The estate stll could be robbed. Bass is very security conscious and Manny will need to be wary and ready.- 52 comments
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Oscar and Jarrad have taken on a great challenge--working on a distant ranch. They will be busy during their school break The drive to the ranch is long, but they are well prepared and equipped so far. I hope they stay safe. They are fearless.
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Angered at the agent Connor shouts---“What the fuck do you want from us!” “I want permission to study my colleague,” the agent said with that same, bloodless smile. “I have a purpose, a mission. I’m going to save my entire race with my research and you will get to watch in awe as we improve your world,” he said. “You should really help me, Connor. I could make your life a lot easier–” Talk about an alien invasion. M tells Connor Mother was watching--But she did nothing. “The agent can do whatever he wants, but you guys can’t do anything. Fucking excellent.” Connor got an uber to Julie's house after learning Greg was hitting her. He woke Greg up using a belt to strangle him and make him unable to respond. Connor took Julie and Nathan and Jamie away from the house of pain using Greg's Hummer. They are going to pick up M and go to a cheap motel. He has not thought beyond the moment.I bet Julie can get a rich divorce settlement. I do not think the man in black will leave Connor and M alone. Will M and Connor ever find safety and peace?
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River looks hot in the clothing you suggest. But, then he must intend to get out of them soon. I hope Kenji is a good, sensitive teacher. River must be open to more adventurous play then we know yet and is not fully considering the dom-sub implications, I think. For now, he sees no need for a safe word, I do not think Kenji wants a one night stand so he might work his magic to seduce and draw River in and finds what excites him and really turns him on like no one else had done to him and with him. Kenji is the expert . He might give River a safe word before things get very intense. He might slowly turn up his domination and new experiences/pain, etc. I wonder what kinks Kenji has and we should find out soon. Will they play in private or will Kenji want an audience at some point in the club or elsewhere? Will he take pics or make a vid or vids of what they do? River posts pics of himself on line and Kenji has seen him. Will he like certain parts of River's naked body or want River to treat certain parts of his body with great affection ? Will he try out a range of toys on River's cock, ass and body? Will he creatively tie River up? There is a Japanese art of rope tieing/bondage called Shibari which is now part of the BDSM world. Is Kenji skilled in acupuncture which could be used to please, punish, control someone? There are so many possibilities. I am looking forward to how you advance their sex play and growing relationship.
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I had a handsome, blond haired, caucasian gay friend in college who sold his sperm to a fertility clinic. He also was limited to six loads . He was not allowed to contribute if he had cummed within 3 days. He said the donation process was very clinical. He signed in and went into a small room with gay--straight porn mags available. He jacked off and filled up a vial and put it in a small holding area and left. After sign in, he did not see anyone. He assumed he was helping hetro or lesbian couples have a child. But, not all insemminations take and lead to a child. He assumed he would not be identified. Only his basic description was provided to help the person pick the sperm donor--height, ethnic background, body type, athlectic interests,hair color, etc. I do not know what the law is on donated sperm and claim of parentage. I assume everyone signs legal releases giving up any claim. The one providing the sperm would expect not to be identified. A DNA donor bank from a job would upend things.
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A New Branch On The Family Tree
akascrubber commented on Ticklishboy30's story chapter in A New Branch On The Family Tree
Levie has been taken into surgery and a good doctor is operating on him. Jaycen was found to have a large bruise and slight concussion. Meanwhile Linda confesses to her recommendation to take the boys away from gay guardians. Linda blamed her action on recently attending a rigid curch which no longer guides her. She was forgiven and embraced. Her actions raising gay sons showed her heart was in the right place, -
Amazing--Ken donated to a sperm bank for money while in college. Now, a female has found out she was conceived with his sperm by doing an online search She would like to talk/see him and left her phone number. She says she does not want anything from him. She wants to know more about him. Will Ken call?
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Keith and Thomas are exploring things they have in common or can grow to like and share. They are acting like a couple and even beginning to act a bit affectionately in public. I like this interchange-- “So, we’ve both been crap at relationships?” “Or bad pickers!” Feeling horribly daring, Keith gave Thomas a quick peck on the cheek (not that anyone noticed), “Not this time.” Thomas agreed, “Not this time.” They are showing they are making good choices now.
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A great high point--Dagon and Amos had great, unbridled sex and loved it all. Finally, they consumated their relationship naked with great passion Meanwhile, Lord Byron moves ahead without the forces he needed and expected and gets furious. He knows Simon, pushed by the wizard Auren, prevented him from raising a large orc force. Lord Byron killed the orc leader for failing. He grows mad and disgusted with Auren who has not carried through with his promises. Will Auren stand by if Lord Byron threatens him? Will he flee? He must know he is in trouble.
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Well, if Laird says no, can they consider operating on their own? The guild is not in their area and it will not compete with them if they provide private security for people in their area. I guess the two may need to be flexible on what they can do next. Kind of--if a door closes, another door opens.....Let us wait and see what Laird says...
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Chapter 39 - Cults
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 39 - Cults
Nunta and Alihte have been given hope in the form of experienced deprogrammers. They will struggle after their long time with Mama Goddess. Now Lyoth and Stawren are on the track of the last computer component. I wish them luck and safe travels. -
Chapter 38 - A New Meditation
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 38 - A New Meditation
Lyoth continues to help Nunta to understand her experience with Mama Goddess and to be able hopefully to move on and be with her real mother. It is a rough road to think differently as it should be after years of indoctrination. Lyoth is not giving up and is challenging Nunya like she has not been before. What is her next tactic? Will it finally give Nunta new insights?
