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  1. I felt like an anthropologist attending a new culture so foreign to an American. I observed it and was educated. Vaughn is very insightful and descriminating. He is to me a good educator. Heyward clearly had purposes for the meeting. He wanted to know more about them and wanted art advice which he got and accepted. His happy agreement to place a shocking picture of man in the front as people entered his home reminded me of what the late, disgraced Jeffrey Epstein did. He had a painting of Bill Clinton in a striking dress placed at people entered his New York townhouse. It was quite a conversation piece. Heyward's self-description had to naturally part truthful and part fabricated. If they have more discussions, they may begin to see what is more real than false. I am glad that they are being critical and not ready to accept his full story about his partial benign nature and generousity. They wonder if Heyward has more in store for them that now meets the eye. Dan will check on what has happened to his former police buddy who posed in the nude and was seduced by the artist. Heyward has many pictures of the straight man. Heyward says he will help him indirectly if he needs it. I hope he does not have ulterior motives,
  2. One of tywo puzzles addressed.They know about the absurd and strange development of the dangerous godstrolls. They are fighting with the Broscian Contingent as mercenaries. So, they will look for some as forces on a planet and need to be smart about taking some blood from one. Still not answered--is there a connection between two genocides that happened at the same time. Stawren's people and the Voscija were the targets.
  3. Manny made in through his first legal test and is on track tbe Rocky's guardian. Rocky approves as well as Bass. But, Manny needs to be more security conscious. He unfortunately let the two kidnappers in. Luckily they were not smart or skilled enough to succeed. The alarm system caught and shocked the first one.The second one shot his captured partner so he would not talk. The shooter was them entraped and held by the swift gate closing, The police showed up quickly and took charge. The two kidnappers were surely not going to be enough to take Rocky away. Only one entered the house and he could have been stopped by the house staff. I say again-- the bad guys had to be stupid or just incompetent? The police said the rounded up the rest of the gang associated with Rocky;s father. Others not yet known in the gang or related gang members could still be around and a threat. Bass made sure Manny was armed now. Manny needs to be on his toes, I hope Rocky is not traumatized.
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    The Troll

    The warning for this chapter are needed. The abuse is terrible. Simon is without hope. Simon was continually massively abused, Fisting was not the ultimate terror. Lord Crusnik and wizzard Akar Kalayvan arranged for a monster troll to fuck him with his huge cock and load him up with semen. They wanted to be able to play sexually again with an empowered Simon. Instead. Simon now load with cum attacked and killed Akar Kalayvan. But Lord Crusnik took on Simon and drank his blood weakening Simon and making himself more powerful. Simon remains lifeless. Yidian cannot yet bring him back. Meanwhile, Lord Crusnik is in an uncontrollable blood sucking and killing rampage. Will Simon not be eaten by Lord Crusnik? How can Yidian save him? A ravenous Lord Crusnik will upset/kill those around him.
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    Chapter 18

    The rogue hated by Rovnar is a great red dragon. The one from the story that captivated those around the campfire was a red warrior dragon
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    Chapter 13

    BTW, purely for my purient and voyeuristic interests, I hope you publish the full list of Kenji's kinks. I assume Kenji will include the rope bondage called shibari which can be an art form.
  7. If Jack's current fling wants him to marry her and not just be a friend with benefits, then she could follow the route of any second wife to a wealthy man. Quickly get an heir and a spare to insure her potential divorce settlement is very lucrative.
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    Chapter 13

    River is fascinated, terribly fascinated by Kenji as a person, a sex object and the promise of wonderful, new forms of fulfilling sex. They have done nothing yet--really. River has read 50 Shades of Grey so he has some ideas of what to expect and is intrigued. Kenji has said there will be scenes and specific time limits and kinks and he will be in full control. River will get a list of the kinks. He will have to sign a NDA and a contract . He will not be able to tell others what they do. Kenji has done this before and River is the neophyte. River is ready, he thinks. It will be a new world. Will he feel the same once he is a sub and experiencing all the kinks Kenji enjoys? This is not going to be a one night stand.
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    Chapter Four

    Damn--Nathan is an idiot. Out of guilt he hires the former guard who was fired when he escaped from the keep. Now he is going to help repair their new headquarters. Nathan has taken a big risk and Brohm is very upset. If he suspects their true idemtity, Brohm has said he will kill Tarn, the former guard. What can go wrong- Lots.
  10. Quigley was so lucky--again and again. He lived after all. Two ladies saved him and he decided he was fit to be a bounty hunter, He has learned some lessons to be better next time. He never had a plan. Pickle made sure the guys were drunk and ready to be captured. They woke up in his ship's storage and knew how to disable ii. He had to kill them when they escaped from storage. Lady Talula and her robot saved him on his disabled ship and took him to the person who wanted hs charges. He has only their heads. But, everyyhing went South. The buyer wanted them alive--Quigley was unaware of this need. He found he was facing the father and brothers of those he killed and they now wanted to kill him, A fight ensued and they were all killed. Quiglt lived. Lady Tabula left. Howver, the father wanting his charges was even stupider then he should have been. Sight unseen, he paid Quigley upfront and paid a bonus. Quigley was a happy man--a successful bounty humter.
  11. Jack is clueless and JJ is too. Only one found a solution. Brad was the honest couselor/adviser to Jack who seems to be on a path to destroy his marriage by wanting an open relationship. He did not understand Claire after years of marriage. Brad clarified his two choices and did what he promised Claire he would do. Right now, Jack seems ready to prefer having sex with others and insuring a divorce. He fits a type who is chasing his youth.with new and younger women. I like JJ's counselor. She unnerves him , says new things to JJ and gets results. The suggestion JJ made to Kris to travel to California to see his family was perfect. Kris liked it and will make it work. He sees JJ as sensitive to his worries. They later had marvelous sex. Kris told him he did not need an expensive gift . JJ perceived way to accept and respond to his concerns was enough. Kris is very good to and for JJ.
  12. Quigley has been very lucky so far. Pickle talked to him and got him to be very honest. She guessed his targets. She hated them and how they treated other. Her attitude changed as they talked and she agreed to help him. The targets can leave and her staff will not interfere with him. Pickle warned him they were very dangerous. How is he going to capture the two? Quigley has been winging it so far. He needs a plan." Fortune favors the prepared mind"--Louis Pasteur
  13. So much pain, it hurts to read their stories--So many missed opprtunities. Is this going downhill fast with hope fading? How can these tortured souls recover?
  14. Very, very touching-a thoughtful, heartfelt resolution of the key issues. Otis is moving in with Hudson at his home Otis and Hudson openly confessed their love for each other. Otis simply said--"You’re like grandma. You care about me.” They are people you like and want to know and wish they have a fulfilling, safe future
  15. Is the young, just starting out on his own bounty hunter going to make a terrible mistake and get killed on his first job? 17 year old Quigley is not listening to a person on the street who knows how things operate at the bar/brothel. We will find out what happens next time, it seems.
  16. Quigley now has time to rethink and analyze his past. He is not where he thought he would be. He has his family but has lost so much and has to restart....
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    Twenty-One

    Keith is becoming much more comfortable with his athletic activties and mates. Having Thomas along to support him is a decided plus. In a relatively brief period they are fitting together and enjoying each other and new friends as a happy couple. They fit and all seems natural. Keith is wondering if it would be time to consider a next step just as he was cuddling and ready to go to sleep...." Keith’s final thought was to wonder what it would be like to do this every night." Good !
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    Emmett

    Finley's time with Emmett may have provoked him into wanting some more insights on his unsettled condition. Talking to Tony with Emmett overhearing, Finley now will talk to one of his brothers for advce. Emmett and Tony discussed who and what Finley is and decided he maybe a mxture of Fey and Orc and other parts. Emmett still wants to calm and better relate with Finley. I hope they will find things to do together and be able to better know each other..
  19. Lyoth and Stawren landed on the far away planet looking for Suoki. He was not present at first so they went to a bar and along he way met the Voscija. Friends knew Lyoth and they reconnected. Lyoth and Stawren had a pleasant meal with the bartender and his partner. It was a convivial time. Getting back to the safe house they finally met SuokI and updated him. They have one last, difficult component to collect.
  20. What a great time. Suoki heard a wonderful singer, met old friends and even kissed a former lover. Now in his safe house, he finds out about Quigley's disaster and need for friends and a new home. He will wait for Lyoth to contact hm next. The pieces and people are not ready to fell into place yet.....
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    Chapter 1

    A connection liking your work to Comicality is high praise. This unfortunately, too soon and recently died author published 189 stories with almost 6.9 million words on this site. He mentored many and was very supportive and constructive as said in his RIP tributes.He had his own story filled website, too.
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    Chapter 3

    Well, she was kidnapped from the cab returning home from sharing Thanksgiving dinner. Ken is heartbroken and wants to help her. He thinks she is his daughter. The three others are sure this is a scam. They were not convinced she was real even after the meal. The kidnappers know her father is rich and a cop. They want a hefty ransome. This is suspicious. How did they know all this? The lab DNA test has not been finished to show any connection. She was not fully investigated with DMV evidence. So the three opposed to her could not be convinced about her at this point. Let them study her more. Ken will await a call asking for money. Can he be analytical enough to plan how to find them?
  23. As for what might happen in a kidnapping--think about the Ransom of Red Chief by O' Henry. A kid who is kidnapped causes so much trouble that the kidnappers want to get away from him and give him back.
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    Crisis

    Oh No Rosicky ! Did the Demon Generals gang up and kill the Platinum Prince in the Mediterranean Sea? The long time silence suggests some huge kind of foul play has happened. The world could be changed for the worse. All the humans, supernaturals and the great story author have been endangered.
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    Chapter 1

    It turns out two mismatched guys are perfect for each other. Outward characteristics , interests and backgrounds should have made them incompatible and barely able to tolerate each other. Fate worked for them. Tyler made the first move and it worked. It could have gone so wrong, but he was motivated and must have seen something in his roommate he realy liked.They will grow and learn more about life now.
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