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The chapter is worth reading several times. You cannot understand and connect to all the bravery and determination and heroism in one reading. I will be reading it again and again.
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Thank you What amazing, intense combat well told with awesome pacing and use of every skill possible . They played their part and kept going--injured and shaken, I think all did their duty and more. The reds and their helpers were killed. I hope the last dragon death healed them all. I wonder where the Great Red is? How do the two elves fit in with Rovnar's plan? Why did the cave feel familiar to Xavier? It is interesting to find out Xavier has a reduced breath weapon as a half-elf. I looking forward for the next chaper. This was brilliant.
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So, the man in black lied again. He is injuring them one at a time. Now, after a terrible accident, the rest are in trouble heading for possible jail time. M needs help from Mother. I hope she arrives soon.
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They are on a grand quest with the demon following at night. Will the lady help them? Is the demon speaking the truth? He is saying what they want to hear.
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Chapter 68 - The Ulaa-Lah
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 68 - The Ulaa-Lah
Oh my--This ship will need to be recharged and they have to go back to get the needed power. Then, the distressed ship is about three months away. This is going to be so stressful. Are their friends still alive and safe? -
Things are not good for Joeel amd Zdain. They becoming pawns and need to escape--soon
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Stranger and Stranger Corey has found his stalker and sees he is now living in his dorm. But, even more unsettling is finding out he is a distant cousin of Grayson, his room mate. Alvise the stalker does not know Grayson is his rooom mate. Grayson is staying later to talk to Alvise. Alvise seems to have some unusal abilities and can move fast. I am sensing Grayson likes Corey more then Corey knows. Am I wrong?
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Chapter 67 - The Computer
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 67 - The Computer
With the new computer they scanned the unknown areas in uncharted space for 11 days. But then, they heard a garbled transmission from the missing ship. They need to be prepared for trouble, I think -
Pictures at The Manor
akascrubber commented on Robert Hugill's story chapter in Pictures at The Manor
Heyward seemes to open up more to Vaughn , especially about his bifircated art collection. He is coming more into his own vesus his father's esthetic. Vaughn could not fathom Heyward's real motive for asking him for his opinions, but he is responding as asked. What happen next is up in the air. Vaughn keeps hearing of unsettled financial matters concerning Heyward, but thie issues do not relate to what they are doing now. The tour of the art is very fascinating.- 15 comments
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Calm Before the Storm
akascrubber commented on mastershakeme's story chapter in Calm Before the Storm
"Connor snorted with amusement. "Never better," he said. "But I think it's time to start thinking about my future. I'm sick of the way I am. You were right all along, I wasn't happy at Pizza Hut. Maybe I do want to go back to school. For something," he said vaguely. "But most of all, I don't want to become my father." Connor is ready to look ahead, support M with a job and build a loving relatonship. M wants him. They are ready to face the unknown together. -
Progress? Or Surgery, Round Two
akascrubber commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Progress? Or Surgery, Round Two
I agree with drsawzall drsawzall said: "These are challenges that will be overcome with dedication and persistence...it sucks but considering the alternative..." Accept what has happened. Try to avoid any more surgery which can go wrong. Accept a prothesis. Dedicate yourself to therapy. Remain positive. People worse than Manny have recovered and lived full lives.- 32 comments
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Chapter 66 - Back to the Aergoroth Nebula
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 66 - Back to the Aergoroth Nebula
Good--They reached llial in the nebula without a problem. He was very pleased that they collected what was needed. Now, on to building the computer. I hope Stawten recovers from her injuries. -
Things are never normal for these two. Nathan wakes up from a 5 month slumber after being bitten by goblins. The evil ones are still attacking others at night. He finds that the guildhouse is very busy and successful. Late at night Nathan senses the demon and gets Brohm to go out with him to find the monster. Eventually, they find the very gig deon who wass for help. He needs to find his way back and needs help to find his portal. He says if he goes back the goblins will leave also. They agree to help him, but as of now do not know who to ask. Cormac sneaks up on them, and they are worried he knows too much. They need some to to think. Does the former monk have an idea about a portal? Should they contact the witch who helped them? Is Nathan still in danger from his bites? Who can heal Nathan?
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Thank you for telling us about the interesting live of the 4 fathers and sons. They faced and overcome adversities and serious killers and solved crimes that needed their help and always found time to have terrific sex. They were a geat combination.
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"Thank you.” The thanks took some while. What a wonderful way to end a conversation....
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Chapter 65 - Stealth
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 65 - Stealth
I love it when a plan comes together. The three godstolls were in the nest close together. Fonith and Lyoth know the key to killing them. They should have all the blood they need now. -
Let me list the ways this is going to go wrong.....1...100. I just hope the boys are luckier than the killer.BTW, if he is wearing a swim suit, where is his knife or knives?
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Dispatch to All Units, 10-73 at Charlie's Bar
akascrubber commented on Lee Wilson's story chapter in Dispatch to All Units, 10-73 at Charlie's Bar
This felt real--the uncertainty,the messes, the too long waiting, the inconclusive surgery. etc It would not be uncommon for Manny to have more surgery. I can see Manny, Bass and Rocky bonding closer. This maybe the one good result of the shooting. -
The boys are placing themselves in great danger. Things always go wrong--The unexpected messes a good plan up and they do not have a good plan. The killer will be wary and likely willing to kill easily.
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Chapter 64 - Success
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 64 - Success
It is almost over. 3 godstrolls have been found and are in their nest on a new planet. If they can be killed then, then our heroes will have enough blood,. I hope the plan is successful. -
Chapter 63 - Injury and Death
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 63 - Injury and Death
Stawren was the main hero--Realizing they were going to be thrown into space, she kicked the airlock door and stopped from being closed at great pain. Fonith showed up and surprised and killed the enemy officers. They joined Fonith and flew Stawren to a Hope medical ship. Happily, she did not lose her leg. Luck and quick thinking by all when facing serious problems worked out this time. They are a great team. -
They visted Dan's Gran. She finally learned he was gay. It took some adjusting. But, she wants grandkids. They both are not sure about having kids. "Gran didn’t so much accept us as resign herself. A battle she had lost. When Dan phoned her, she would ask after me, though he wasn’t convinced that she was either accepting or understanding. Simply resigned."
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Chapter 62 - Through the Empire
akascrubber commented on Adam Andrews Johnson's story chapter in Chapter 62 - Through the Empire
Wow--just as they are fleeing the empire, their ship is boarded by the enemy soldiers/[police who promise to have them killed Please Fonith arrive soon and rescue them---- ! -
Finally, Yidian explains himself and his need for Simon. Wow ===what a terrible past and revised life, Simon made him feel alive and mpw Yidian is fucking Connor. Will Simon ever be free of Yidian?
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Simon learned his calling....? Until at last, you were born, Simon Lorall. A being whose power is harvested from the world around him and the only one who could pass between both worlds to return the gifts of the gods and destroy the Mirror of Souls forever.” “You…” Simon felt the panic rising in his chest as they had walked, “Expect me to do all that?” “I expect you will do what you think is right,” Vale considered, “The gods can only ask for your aid. We will not interfere with any decisions you might make in the end. Our fate and the fate of all magic rests in your hands.”
