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  1. akascrubber

    Boiling Frog

    Lots going on--Hudson missed one key item, though The unknown kid badly injured in the fire 10 years ago probably was Otis. I wonder when he will learn the truth about Otis and his past? Will he be given the chance to come clean first with Otis. Hudson was wise to not take things as they appeared first to be. He suspected he was being played and he acted well. Hudson--Vegas-- became a star. Watkins (and Keres} tested him to see if he could take Angel being destroyed and painfully fall apart. Hudson did not fall apart. He took the sick pics he was asked to take.When he returned to see Watlkins he was told he passed and now will be brought into the whole scheme. Hudson is going to get the evidence he wants.
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    Chapter 2

    Love Etta James--The mood in the tattoo/piercing shop had to be so cool and smoothly easy. A young Asian girl and an adult walk in for help. River has found his next fixation, a hot asian male, expensively dressed--Kenji--who seems to have seen him and heard him before? River says he has not met him . Did he pay to see and hear him online acting as a gay boy best can do? Kenji, the good looking male, might be a paying customer on his online paywall guarded web site where he does shows and has pics for sale. River could try to search him out but his customers are hidden. I can see Kenji follow up if he is intrigued by River. Let us see if Kenji comes back to the shop and brings up his show or maybe during a show ask pointed questions and then might try to buy more than pics--like cum rags-- to see if River is bolder and more open to new sex play. River needs the pay from shows to support himself. He might be open to selling more things. Any interest by Kenji shoud get River willing to go out on a date with him. He is not going to be cautious,
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    King Maker

    Simon seemed to have saved himself from the control of the Orcs, We will see if he is triumphant. Simon strengthened his champion through several excangenes of seed. His chapion fought a huge Orc rival for the throne. Both were injured by the evil one clearly lost to the dismay of many. Let us hopoe Simon can repair and restore his champion d so he can served as king and dsyroy his opponents Simon and Yidian felt jointly powerful and supreme to all. They are ready to move on and leave the Orcs and and face new opponents and win. “You are power,” Yidian was breathless with pleasure, “Together we could do anything. Own this world. Just us, not Belothemid or Auren Qualls or even the fucking Wizard Counsel could rival such awe-inspiring power.”
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    Chapter 1

    Until the tumor diagnosis,I thought he had a form of aspergers syndrome which is a type of autism. After the surgery and career change all seems well I would caution them to not delay having fun on a good vacation or such until they retire. My dad has a very short retirement. He had a heart attack and died when he was retired at 65.
  5. So Grey is a god, Beatrice is or was a druid--Hmm-- Mark ,Dave and Grey has an as of yet not revealed purpose or function. But Dave is the saviour for now and has created a protective bubble to ward off what/who is attacking them. Much more needs to be revealed. What will Maio say has to be done?
  6. A rougher than normal place did not impair the great enjoyment they all created and shared. The sex had to be great. Russ fit in as a part of the family. Toby was a wonder and truly joyful. He is no moody teenager. I hope he keeps his enthusiasm and ability to see the bright side of things. They will have great memories of this trip
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    Chapter 12

    Thank you Al Norris--I love knowing there is going to be much more to the two stories. Please do not stop !
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    Chapter 12

    I enjoy the author's descriptive, story telling ability. He builds intricate, fascinating scenarios that I want to see playout I have read Kandric sevaral times and am hoping for crossovers with this story or the Sands of Time rebooted. The last chapter of Kandric is especially compelling which brings together several individuals and stories. The ending green dragon disclosure rocks the Kingdom. In chapter 12 we have hints of something significant. I am unsure if we are presented with some red herrings ( no connection) or Easter Eggs like a Marvel movie portending new battles and contests. I remain very interested to see what actually develops. Thanks for your creative efforts
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    Chapter 12

    We learn of many interconections and mysteries. Some may be relevant to Adga and her mission. Some relevant to Xavier--Gardagam Koladic, Prince Chark, Sprit Warrior Guild by the City of Lucas the Lost ( which might help Xavier) and serious legends of someone or some force that can restore or save the Desert. There is much not known or only barely understood about the history of the desert. An arrival of Xavier at Scorpion Falls with what is gained at Lucas the Lost could really shake things up. Adga and crew are exploring the passage they have found and are surprised by what they are finding. I am looking forward to their further searches. They are expecting the truce to end soon.
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    Oslo bound

    Jock strap sex--I like the sound of that and so did the boys. Colin made up for any concerns. I bet they will have more fun like that. They are finding their own ways of travel and touring and it seems to work so they both can enjoy what they do. It reminds me of traveling in Germany with a friend and we found ways to fit in our own interests in separate ways. They seem to not be interested in tours. Some cities have the easy on , easy off bus rides with guides so a visitor can see sites at their own leisure. Oslo has a similar tour bus operation. I have in the past when cities were safer, used these kind of bus tours in Washington, DC and San Francisco. But, Colin and Owain are just starting touring. They could get better at it with more expereince. They will fnd their own style that works for them.
  11. So Grey is the opener of the ways--you sly fox--the name has a valid meaning
  12. Clara drove them to Eldarwood through the arid high desert. Grey and Mark reconciled to a point they accepted why they had grown apart. They needed new answers now. Their powers had been dampened in the town which was not normal. Reaching the hidden location, they had to cross a barrier . Surprisingly Grey was able to speak in a strange language to the guardians and gain entrance. Eldarwood seemed so different as they walked deeper into it. As described it was a lush, cool redwood like forest with vibrant colors and with tiny houses for the magical inhabitants who could be druids like Clara. Grey thought--"This place felt healthy, and right, and ancient. " Now they are going to talk to Maio , Clara's friend, over homemade soup. Let us hope they find enough good answers. I think it is strange that no mention has been made yet of Beatrice!
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    Colin 9

    Colin and Owain are good for each other. It is important to learn more about Colin and hs feelings.Thank you. Colin is growing out of his family and childhood limits and negative feelings. He likes having a boyfriend and showing him and Mhari and Joe off. He is no longer alone and really enjoys being with with Owain and trying new thngs in small steps. He does have aways to go, but that is not a problem he cannot overcome. Singing in the choir and having a solo part is a positive step. I expect when they move in together there will need to be adjustments, but they have such great affection for each other that things will work out.
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    Dumped

    I think JJ is a useful contrast to Will, his brother. I do not want him killed. If he is to be done in, I bet your readers can offer ideas. I think getting run over by a bus or hit by a meteor , unless he lingers and suffers may not give the revenge some may want. JJ might get the wrong people in the fashion world too mad and have him kidnapped and turned over to human traffickers.
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    HMS Endymion

    I wonder which officer Granger will bed first, if he does so? He is only in command for about 2 months. I suspect anyone who wants to be with him will signal their availability. The ship is on patrol and peace is at hand. At the most,the ship may need to handle any smugglers and the King's business on the ship. There might be time for extracurricular fun. Mark will craft any assignations discretely, I expect. Adding to the Austen lore--Jane was raised in a family of 6 boys and two girls. Brothers Francis( Frank) and Charles John ( Charles) served in the Royal Navy and rose to the rank of admiral. BTW--I have read a history of George III at Weymouth-- "The King’s routine varied little from day to day. He usually rose early and bathed in the sea and then spent time riding, walking and sailing.....George loved to sail and frequently went on cruises aboard the warship Southampton often visiting the Isle of Portland." Will he want to see George's home on the Isle of Wight or is it too far away?
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    Chapter 19

    With heroic skill and determination Micco and Chase save Burke and Calhoun from a hurricane damaged BIA vehicle. They all reach the animal shelter safely but need to find a place safe from the winds and rain. They surmize Sam and Martina were in on the scam and would share the money. It was likely not planned that Sam be killed. Micco is no longer a suspect but Martina is. What about Danny seeing long ears? Micco is going to move to save the animals and knows they will follow him. The others will go to safety. Where is Martina? Will she go quietly or make a fuss? Is Micco in danger from her as well as the hurricane?
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    Chapter 5

    You figured out a plausible way to cut the Gordion Knot. Harry regained hs memory under deep emotional pressure. They reconciled. Stuart kept on wanting him and Harry finally caught up to him. Their love rekindled rightly and honestly. You gave us a fair HEA. Thank you.
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    HMS Endymion

    Granger is giving temporary command of what he terms the best frigate in the navy. He has found friends and former officers among the crew which is encouraging. He is bringing his doctor, purser and close servants like Winkler. He does not yet know his next orders, but he has been requested by the King eventually to guard his location at sea while his majesty and family in residence at Weymouth. Granger wants to learn about his ship and its men as soon as possible. He is not expecting any problems with his command. I expect he will need to practice diplomacy and be on his best behavior when dealing with the royals. Perhaps, the King will want to visit his ship. His cook can prepare a great meal for him and others, at least, when he visits.
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    Dumped

    So JJ is going to totally surprise Kris and call him. Kris will realize JJ had to get his number from somewhere and be impressed by the contact so soon after they talked. JJ is not ignoring him and really needs a partnerthe next night . JJ will invite him to go out to the charity banquet, instead of Susannah. She should be livid and may see the handwriting on the wall. I like seeing JJ take charge and not being a victim. It should be interesting to see how JJand Kris get along and if they have more than a one night stand. JJ might see Kris as more fun and a better mate/sex partner than his current one. The bloom of their potential relationship is not off the rose at this point.
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    Holiday

    They are getting along and enjoying each other and the area. What a pleasant, unstressful, completely different break! Smalll town French life lets them focus on each other and the area. Gosh, what a treat to have fresh bread and croissants. Toby is fitting in and that is no small feat with a teenager who does not have his best bud along. They are spending time out of doors and Toby has a storehouse of knowledge about the flora and fauna. Gordon and Brian are havingh sex and Toby knows it and supports it simply by saying they are putting their feet up. What a nice euphemism! I wonder how Russ with change the dynamic when he arrives? Will he want a family life or want to spend more time in bed? We will see soon.
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    Dumped

    JJ wad having a pity party until he talked to Will. They are eventually good for each other. JJ needs to separate from Zanie/Susannah.It is in the cards, they will separate.I can see her humiliated and ignored. Without JJ, she will lose her social entre and need another sugar daddy/sugar boy. I can see JJ is going to fuck and date Kris, grandson of a Prussian Prince. They both will have fun for as long as it lasts. After all Kris will find out JJ is very high maintenance along with great benefits. Kris will gain a hot twink along with social credit at parties and maybe pride at his firm with his connection to JJ and his family and also be given much better new clothes.
  22. Connor is taking on the role of the alpha. He is learning and becoming a more benevolent leader. He will see the pack is safe and able to defend itself, but will then go on a pligrimage. He believes he has part of the magic moonstone when broken apart that led ro a curse and has to seek Raigar's help to end the historic curse. He does not know what dangers lie ahead for him as he travels, but they must be many. The largest sanctuary ever built to honor Raigar is in Votu N’Saga. Connor when able will go to this island and pray at a temple to Raigar. There are also thieves and bandits at the entry port. We learned Ellini has been robbed when she landed and was fleeing to prevent her rape. I hope she becomes safe . She has to be terrified. Connor, a powerful werewolf, might protect her when he later arrives. I can feel things slowly connect.
  23. Life is hell for the survivors after Southport fell. The enemy's forces have moved on. Amos is badly injured and slowly recovering with the help of Dagon and a friend, Zara. Ellina has been robbed after being sent to a strange land and forced to run away to save her body and mind.
  24. Grey was chained up by the pack when Mark reported he was going to flee . Silver chains must have been used. He later escaped After Mark arrived at the bar to find Grey , he was eventually tied up in silver chains--chapter 5--by Grey, Dave and Clara Grey,,,"I looked towards Clara. She said, “What kind of establishment do you think I’m running here? Of course, I have chains.” So she got the chains. I dragged Mark out to the porch behind the bar, and we tied him up. I made sure they were secure, so even a shift wouldn’t rattle them lose. Plus, Clara really did have silver chains, so they would hurt if he tried shifting. The woman was full of surprises. Everything today was a surprise, to be honest."
  25. Could the man with all the money and big boss Gideon Keres who was disfigured with a mechaical larynx be the one had set the fire that killed Otis's mother and almost killed him? If he sees Otis, Gideon will want to kill him and/or entrap him to be a sex slave in a snuff effort.
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