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  1. akascrubber

    Chapter 13

    River is fascinated, terribly fascinated by Kenji as a person, a sex object and the promise of wonderful, new forms of fulfilling sex. They have done nothing yet--really. River has read 50 Shades of Grey so he has some ideas of what to expect and is intrigued. Kenji has said there will be scenes and specific time limits and kinks and he will be in full control. River will get a list of the kinks. He will have to sign a NDA and a contract . He will not be able to tell others what they do. Kenji has done this before and River is the neophyte. River is ready, he thinks. It will be a new world. Will he feel the same once he is a sub and experiencing all the kinks Kenji enjoys? This is not going to be a one night stand.
  2. akascrubber

    Chapter Four

    Damn--Nathan is an idiot. Out of guilt he hires the former guard who was fired when he escaped from the keep. Now he is going to help repair their new headquarters. Nathan has taken a big risk and Brohm is very upset. If he suspects their true idemtity, Brohm has said he will kill Tarn, the former guard. What can go wrong- Lots.
  3. Quigley was so lucky--again and again. He lived after all. Two ladies saved him and he decided he was fit to be a bounty hunter, He has learned some lessons to be better next time. He never had a plan. Pickle made sure the guys were drunk and ready to be captured. They woke up in his ship's storage and knew how to disable ii. He had to kill them when they escaped from storage. Lady Talula and her robot saved him on his disabled ship and took him to the person who wanted hs charges. He has only their heads. But, everyyhing went South. The buyer wanted them alive--Quigley was unaware of this need. He found he was facing the father and brothers of those he killed and they now wanted to kill him, A fight ensued and they were all killed. Quiglt lived. Lady Tabula left. Howver, the father wanting his charges was even stupider then he should have been. Sight unseen, he paid Quigley upfront and paid a bonus. Quigley was a happy man--a successful bounty humter.
  4. Jack is clueless and JJ is too. Only one found a solution. Brad was the honest couselor/adviser to Jack who seems to be on a path to destroy his marriage by wanting an open relationship. He did not understand Claire after years of marriage. Brad clarified his two choices and did what he promised Claire he would do. Right now, Jack seems ready to prefer having sex with others and insuring a divorce. He fits a type who is chasing his youth.with new and younger women. I like JJ's counselor. She unnerves him , says new things to JJ and gets results. The suggestion JJ made to Kris to travel to California to see his family was perfect. Kris liked it and will make it work. He sees JJ as sensitive to his worries. They later had marvelous sex. Kris told him he did not need an expensive gift . JJ perceived way to accept and respond to his concerns was enough. Kris is very good to and for JJ.
  5. Quigley has been very lucky so far. Pickle talked to him and got him to be very honest. She guessed his targets. She hated them and how they treated other. Her attitude changed as they talked and she agreed to help him. The targets can leave and her staff will not interfere with him. Pickle warned him they were very dangerous. How is he going to capture the two? Quigley has been winging it so far. He needs a plan." Fortune favors the prepared mind"--Louis Pasteur
  6. So much pain, it hurts to read their stories--So many missed opprtunities. Is this going downhill fast with hope fading? How can these tortured souls recover?
  7. Very, very touching-a thoughtful, heartfelt resolution of the key issues. Otis is moving in with Hudson at his home Otis and Hudson openly confessed their love for each other. Otis simply said--"You’re like grandma. You care about me.” They are people you like and want to know and wish they have a fulfilling, safe future
  8. Is the young, just starting out on his own bounty hunter going to make a terrible mistake and get killed on his first job? 17 year old Quigley is not listening to a person on the street who knows how things operate at the bar/brothel. We will find out what happens next time, it seems.
  9. Quigley now has time to rethink and analyze his past. He is not where he thought he would be. He has his family but has lost so much and has to restart....
  10. akascrubber

    Twenty-One

    Keith is becoming much more comfortable with his athletic activties and mates. Having Thomas along to support him is a decided plus. In a relatively brief period they are fitting together and enjoying each other and new friends as a happy couple. They fit and all seems natural. Keith is wondering if it would be time to consider a next step just as he was cuddling and ready to go to sleep...." Keith’s final thought was to wonder what it would be like to do this every night." Good !
  11. akascrubber

    Emmett

    Finley's time with Emmett may have provoked him into wanting some more insights on his unsettled condition. Talking to Tony with Emmett overhearing, Finley now will talk to one of his brothers for advce. Emmett and Tony discussed who and what Finley is and decided he maybe a mxture of Fey and Orc and other parts. Emmett still wants to calm and better relate with Finley. I hope they will find things to do together and be able to better know each other..
  12. Lyoth and Stawren landed on the far away planet looking for Suoki. He was not present at first so they went to a bar and along he way met the Voscija. Friends knew Lyoth and they reconnected. Lyoth and Stawren had a pleasant meal with the bartender and his partner. It was a convivial time. Getting back to the safe house they finally met SuokI and updated him. They have one last, difficult component to collect.
  13. What a great time. Suoki heard a wonderful singer, met old friends and even kissed a former lover. Now in his safe house, he finds out about Quigley's disaster and need for friends and a new home. He will wait for Lyoth to contact hm next. The pieces and people are not ready to fell into place yet.....
  14. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    A connection liking your work to Comicality is high praise. This unfortunately, too soon and recently died author published 189 stories with almost 6.9 million words on this site. He mentored many and was very supportive and constructive as said in his RIP tributes.He had his own story filled website, too.
  15. akascrubber

    Chapter 3

    Well, she was kidnapped from the cab returning home from sharing Thanksgiving dinner. Ken is heartbroken and wants to help her. He thinks she is his daughter. The three others are sure this is a scam. They were not convinced she was real even after the meal. The kidnappers know her father is rich and a cop. They want a hefty ransome. This is suspicious. How did they know all this? The lab DNA test has not been finished to show any connection. She was not fully investigated with DMV evidence. So the three opposed to her could not be convinced about her at this point. Let them study her more. Ken will await a call asking for money. Can he be analytical enough to plan how to find them?
  16. As for what might happen in a kidnapping--think about the Ransom of Red Chief by O' Henry. A kid who is kidnapped causes so much trouble that the kidnappers want to get away from him and give him back.
  17. akascrubber

    Crisis

    Oh No Rosicky ! Did the Demon Generals gang up and kill the Platinum Prince in the Mediterranean Sea? The long time silence suggests some huge kind of foul play has happened. The world could be changed for the worse. All the humans, supernaturals and the great story author have been endangered.
  18. akascrubber

    Chapter 1

    It turns out two mismatched guys are perfect for each other. Outward characteristics , interests and backgrounds should have made them incompatible and barely able to tolerate each other. Fate worked for them. Tyler made the first move and it worked. It could have gone so wrong, but he was motivated and must have seen something in his roommate he realy liked.They will grow and learn more about life now.
  19. Both Manny and Rocky finally seemed to get along and survive so far. Manny is learning more about the job. Needing to keep a gun shows security is more important than he first thought. The dad having so many weapons shows he was concerned. Is Manny going to have a big test to show is is the one for Rocky? BTW, Dear Author I am very glad you are able to express yourself in writing. That ability is a wonderful. quality. I could not write as much as you.
  20. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    Prince Millen surprised me. He was not first a warrior. He was a harried administrator who found it hard to be open to new ideas. It took constant re-reading and then to see a halfling to turn into a green warrior dragon to finally accept the fact they could change their skins. He did not know about sand dragons even though Xavier had written him using old magic. Once the Prince was able to act, he gave duties to his brother and chancellor and others. Green dragons hidding out will be located and killed. He does not want the green dragon changing capability to get out. Millen's brother, Prince Syl’b-urn, has to investigate who the sand dragons are. Are they real or were they real? He has found some incomplete ancient texts that mention the 13th dragon race, the sand dragons. They have been lost to history. Also he saw a mention of a Xavier who had 3 faces. He does not know what this means. What can he do next? I suggest he have the ones who sent in the reports to appear before him or send someone out for more information from them about Xavier. Xavier gave a Pantherling Elder and Silver Dragonling a letter to give to Prince Millen and they must know more about Xavier. BTW, if Xavier and Garnet lead the attack and do kill the rogue, troublemaking great red dragon, their names will be prominently known by others, I bet. Heck, they are close enough by Slome that their successful fight could grab the attention of the nearby Alphar and Garm leadership.
  21. Hiding out on a distant planet, Suoki met the furry Voscijas he helped save from destruction and moved them to this planet. Suoki is to happy to learn how the population has grown and how friendly they are. He had a great meal and is now going to play cards with 4 brothers.
  22. akascrubber

    Chapter 18

    OMG--Everything has changed.....Rovnar showed up in person and asked a huge favor! He wants Garnet his priest and Xavier and the fighters in the caravan to attack and kill a rogue Great Red Dragon who is causing great trouble,.Rovar wants him destroyed. Garnet asks for special amour for his student and he provides it. They will accept Rovnar's request. People in the caravan are shocked and uncertain at all the change and distress. The caravan and people are unexpectedly transported to swamps near Slome--maybe. They do not really know where they are. Lew and Lucas are sent out to find the enemy dragons. They succeeded and found a cave that promises to be the base of the red dragons . Garnet leads to forces into the cave and organizes them into a fighting triangle with everyone assembled to use their skills. It is the fighting form they used 11,000 years ago and won battles. They begin fighting rough , but not so tough beings and handled them easily. The chapter ends as they faced their first red dragon. What a cliffhanger! Will Garnet and Xavier change into their dragon skins to win ? So far, the fighting is very intense and very compelling. Our heroes are winning.....They are fearless. But, the battle is just beginning
  23. akascrubber

    Chapter Three

    Laird recommended them and Shaw accepted them in the guild but he was not pleased with their not telling the truth. Setting up operations is not easy. The owner of the old tavern is a cranky hermit and is not open to selling the unused building. He was mad they came into his run down home. They are going to see him later with a gift. Strangely, a beggar seems to be able to see through their disguises. How can he do it? Will he cause trouble? The senator whose life they saved wants them to attend a party in a month. After a back and forth, they decided to go. Might something good result or do they need to be on their guard?
  24. Vaugh was the model of discretion to his friends who wanted salacious gossip. But, he did promise to be more forthcoming if he experienced things first hand at a Heyward party, Going to Club 122 made his friends jealous. Dan showed up with a coworker and made a good impression. It seems others want to know about Vaughn, the boyfriend and art critic who had the boss's interest. The two seem to be willing to experiment with bare outfits if they are challenged and are comfortable. Who knows what they might face and what Heyward really wants from them?
  25. akascrubber

    Oh Baby

    The cop is getting what she wants--a blood test to connect M to the supposedly dead boy and evidence they are crazy. She is going to work toward having them locked up, I bet. If M is a medical freak-he cannot be an alien--then she will see he is turned over to the FBI for study, So far this is all off the books and the med person is helping the cop on the side. Connor is too pissed off and freaked out to suspect he and M are possibly facing trouble. The more he reads about babies, the more upset he gets. They are so messy and hard to handle. Besides, the baby cannot be his. It is 9 weeks old by the ultrasound and they have not been having sex for that long. He is rejecting M who feels terrible by Connor's terrible, accusing attitude. Connor does not consider the baby might grow faster in M. There is not concern, yet, for how M will give birth."Connor could support him and stand beside him, but this wasn’t his fault. This wasn’t his fucking baby… That’s the only way Connor could accept what was happening."
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