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Lee Wilson

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  1. Whimsical. I don't believe I've ever seen that used to describe one of my pieces. But I like it, it fits this one. Thanks.
  2. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks.
  3. Thanks. And if that wasn't the case, the world would be a better place.
  4. Friday Tamika helped Ryan get breakfast set up for everybody, happy to be useful. Benjamin and Marie-Louise left at 10:00 AM after breakfast. Benjamin had found the article he previously read; it was indeed Mission Critical Labs in Clinton. When they pulled into the parking lot and walked up to the front door, they noticed the man lying dead in the doorway. "That does seem to bode well that it all started here." "Yeah. I hope there ain't a lot of other dead bodies in there."
  5. I once lived on a dog Until it tired of me It scratched and I flew off Hated, 'coz I'm a flea I was without my dog It seemed I had no purpose No other choice had I But to join the circus It wasn't in a big top Like circuses you'd see 'Twas on a patch of dog hair And full of fleas like me It wasn't just for fleas tho' A spider there I saw He was so kind and gentle It left me quite in awe I jumped a little closer wary of its web I think I saw a fly t
  6. Another 2025 Poetry Anthology - Diversity entry. Apologies to Mary Howitt for paraphrasing her poem's title. Members of two different species experience love and hate.
  7. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1 S3

    Maybe a stupid question, but couldn't Devin simply transition into something smaller and let the parts just "fall out"? He'd have to move bones and things around anyway, just transition around the plates.
  8. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1 S3

    You missed a grand oportunity for a play on words, here: She also said that she’d rather see Dad eat a little more of it than having it go to waste, so it went to Dad’s waist instead.
  9. I guess you're just going to have to wait until tomorrow for a better explanation. I will say this though, it may not be completely accurate from a "is this even posible" perspective.
  10. I tend to think that Jake was just happy to be able to show off to an older boy.
  11. You will find a kindred spirit in a few chapters. Maybe not even all 10. I do write pretty nasty antagonists, don’t I?
  12. It’s not too late to change it!
  13. Tyler lets the cat out of the bag with mom. Will she tell dad or wait for him to? Hmmmm
  14. That would be one way to get the desperately needed ‘A.’
  15. ML doing something good for someone else? I don’t know. Gotta think about that.
  16. Sounds familiar, don’t it?
  17. You don’t really want me to answer that question, do you? Partial answer on Thursday, the rest of it Saturday.
  18. A stuck elevator. Hmmm. In the famous words of Maxwell Smart (no relation to Lionel), 'Would you believe' she gets shot in a botched robbery attempt by someone even dumber than her, not realizing everything is free? No? I didn't think so. Best we can hope for is alone somewhere else, maybe.
  19. This was the first of Ronyx's stories I had ever read. It's a story about good versus evil. While evil lands a couple hits over the course of the story, good finally triumphs. Teenage angst and struggles abound to keep one interested all the way through. As with any good story, one begins to feel he knows the characters personally. They are written well and everything about them is believable. I've used this phrase in a review before, recently. What are you waiting for? Get off your ass and read this story. You won't regret it. Now, leave me alone so I can read some more of Ronyx's stuff.
  20. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 18

    Hardship overwhelms friendship. What Lucas went through shouldn't happen to anybody. But it forced him to take a fresh look at his life, and though disabled, he came out stronger and better in the end. The rest of Lucas' friends banded together to come to his aid, both physically and emotionally. All were better in the end for it. I anxiously await the sequel starring Neil and Chandler.
  21. A human Guinea pig. I like it. But won't use it. I have other plans for ML.
  22. Until and unless the CDC, WHO, or other health organizations appear, other nations may be hesitant to render assistance, for fear that whoever they send will be affected. It's apparently airborne, but who knows what level of filter may prevent inhalation. I'll provide a minor spoiler, it's not technically a virus.
  23. As usual, all very good points. I didn't consider masks, mostly because our little band of ten is immune. Batteries and the like are something that should be considered. Perhaps that is in the minor details we're not privy to.
  24. We have another psychic prediction. Let's wait and see what happens to ML in chapter 5, shall we? New order, I guess that could be considered covered in a couple chapters too.
  25. Got that covered coming up as well, chapter 6 actually.
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