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Lee Wilson

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  1. She was traveling on the road they just left, she went past and nobody saw the other.
  2. That’s one reason I picked it. More confusion. And we’ve established MCL is a fictional lab in the real Clinton, NJ.
  3. It’s asthma AND cancer. I’ll let you wait for the explanation in a couple chapters. The numbers I used were 7.7% of the US has asthma. 5.4% have cancer. So about 0.4% of the population would have both. There’s no sex surrounding the kids, so that should lessen the concern. Just a few attempts at soliciting sex. Again, to arrive later.
  4. Lee Wilson

    Prologue

    Whew!
  5. Lee Wilson

    Prologue

    No worries. It’s no worse than @weinerdog googling whether The Swarm was really coming to San Diego.
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    Prologue

    If there is, it isn’t in Clinton. There is a lab there, forgot its name though.
  7. Lee Wilson

    Prologue

    Dang, and here I thought I made up the name. But the story starts out in NJ and mostly takes place in PA. A couple chapters and the limits of the cloud will be explained.
  8. Lee Wilson

    Prologue

    Oh, dear me. I apologize to all of Jason’s fans for delaying a chapter until he was probably going to publish it anyway. Nope, never heard of ‘ALLO, ALLO.’
  9. Rinsed down the drain in the prolog?
  10. Nah, not disown. Maybe put you in a 'time out' like Devin is doing to Tyler in @Jason Rimbaud's story.
  11. Lee Wilson

    Prologue

    No. Well, at least not until a later chapter, hehe.
  12. When you reach the top, Matt, jump as far as you can!
  13. An extreme stretch, but is Vito Corleone the only character in 'The Godfather'? Main characters need someone to interact with!!
  14. Yes, he definitely crossed that bridge with his performance, or lack thereof, with Niya.
  15. Lee Wilson

    Prologue

    True, but the mistake wasn't noticed: The violation may still be there; however, it was unintentional.
  16. Lee Wilson

    Prologue

    Apparently.
  17. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 17

    This turn of events surprised me. Not that Uncle Bastard would return, but the violence inflicted was definitely unexpected. Lucas may be a jerk, but nobody deserves that. Jerk or not, I got misty-eyed reading this chapter. I hope @Ronyx decides to spare Lucas' life, but I'm not at all confident that will happen.
  18. Yikes. I better update it to kill all the animals in the affected area too. Birds dropping from the skies, skunks releasing their stink spray as they die, what fun I could have with that.
  19. The water kept running, so more and more of the diluted solution was created. Perhaps only a single molecule would be enough. The science behind the how isn't really explained. It spreads, but it does have a limited area. However, we're quite a few chapters ahead of things. The first half of the story, for the most part, is the adventures of George and Lionel.
  20. What, Mickey Walter Mouse didn't win the nomination? A travesty!
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    Prologue

    Got ya. My experience with British comedy is pretty much limited to Monty Python, Rowan Atkinson, and Benny Hill.
  22. You're getting ahead of things. This will be answered.
  23. I'd say it's species independent, although not really germane to the story.
  24. Just gotta say, wait and see.
  25. Lee Wilson

    Prologue

    Not too far from the "truth."
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