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  1. Lee Wilson
    Um. Maybe you'll want to skip the first part of chapter 3 😁
  2. Lee Wilson
    The night is calling, I have to go The wolf is hungry, he runs the show He's licking his lips, he's ready to win On the hunt tonight for love at first sting Here I am Rock you like a hurricane Scorpions - 1984 4 Tony drove up route 35 until we hit the town limits. At that point, I hoped one of them knew where we could go, "Do either of you know anything about the area? Because I sure don't." "Nope." "Same here." "Okay, let's just go through once on the man d
  3. Lee Wilson
    Glad you found and enjoyed this. There’s plenty more to read. I’m working on story #29, and have 725,000 words here. I hope you like what you find and read next as well.
  4. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 11

    Lee Wilson commented on chris191070's story chapter in Chapter 11

    A very nice ending. And they all lived happily ever after. Until they didn’t. And I think your Beta Reader misses a big one for you. I’ve noticed this in your comments too: This should be “their brothers.” I know it’s picky, but I think as a fellow writer, you’ll appreciate the hint to make your writing better. As homonyms, the words there, their, and they're are all pronounced exactly the same but have different and distinct meanings. There means “at that place” and is used to talk about a specific location. Their indicates ownership and is the possessive form of they.
  5. Lee Wilson
    I think Peter’s story will get more interesting, and mom? Well, who knows?
  6. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 10

    Lee Wilson commented on chris191070's story chapter in Chapter 10

    To protect the butt you believe they’d kick?
  7. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 10

    Lee Wilson commented on chris191070's story chapter in Chapter 10

    I think it might be hard for him to type while being tickled. But it’s worth a shot.
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    Chapter 10

    Lee Wilson commented on chris191070's story chapter in Chapter 10

    I found the Anderson twins. And I guess that answers my question in the previous chapter. I hope the epilogue is 4 or 5 chapters. This wad too good to be so short!
  9. Lee Wilson
    I did. TBH, I haven’t given much thought to her talent, but I have some time, Pete has at least five more chapters. I’m approaching the end of #5, and it’s obvious there will be at least six. How many Mads has is anybody’s guess at the moment. I only know what she sees and what career path it takes her down.
  10. Lee Wilson
    No worries. Only one and he doesn’t get the job for another 30 years.
  11. Lee Wilson
    I’ll watch my mailbox for summonses.
  12. Lee Wilson
    Indeed.
  13. Lee Wilson
    Me too. Well, writing about Peter.
  14. Lee Wilson
    Very true, although I think enough people who are directly in the hurricane’s path listen to where it could make a difference. As I got further and further into it, I liked it more and more. I hope my readers will feel the same way. The comment about mom was subtle, but not overly so.
  15. Lee Wilson
    Coming out of nowhere Driving like rain Stormbringer dance On the thunder again Dark cloud gathering Breaking the day No point running Because it's coming your way Deep Purple - 1974 1 I was told it was raining the day I was born, August 9, 2032. I have to believe that was an omen. It took me until I was about fifteen before I used my inherited mystery skill without realizing it. Up until then my childhood was pretty normal. It didn't click right away, actually no
  16. Lee Wilson
    This is book three in the series, 'The Life and Times of Avery Noonan.' It will focus on Peter, although the rest of the family will make appearances. To refresh your memories, Peter was born in Philadelphia, PA in August of 2032. Peter, or PC as he was known from a fairly young age also has an unusual ability. This ability was quite unique and drove the direction of his career. I had to change the "no sex" tag. It will appear in a later chapter.
  17. Lee Wilson
    Happy turkey, turkeys! 😆
  18. Lee Wilson
    Thanks for saying that about Staying Alive, Grease 2 and The Colbys. Although I never heard of the Colbys, but I’ll assume it sucked eggs like the others.
  19. Lee Wilson
    Awww, where's the fun in that?
  20. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 2

    Lee Wilson commented on Paladin's story chapter in Chapter 2

    Had to look it up, so I sure didn't. Not even sure I know the significance even after looking it up.
  21. Lee Wilson
    I’m eagerly working on it. Like I said above, chapter 1 drops Friday.
  22. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 9

    Lee Wilson commented on chris191070's story chapter in Chapter 9

    I actually considered making a reference to that.
  23. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 9

    Lee Wilson commented on chris191070's story chapter in Chapter 9

    Such a cute chapter. One detail I question. Are Peter and Paul identical?
  24. Lee Wilson
    I think it will. I like it very much so far. Hopefully that like migrates to my readers.
  25. Lee Wilson
    Thanks. Yep, the whole family will be ‘talented,’
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