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Lee Wilson

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  1. Brendan and Greg went into his office to do some more detailed house searches, and a little making out. No matter what search he did, Brendan couldn't find anything close to what he could afford. At least in the same general area as he lived. Even expanding the search by five, ten, or twenty miles, nothing looked like a possibility. If he could put twice as much down, he could swing it, but where was he going to find another forty thousand dollars? Greg decided to leave and let Brendan continue
  2. Only way to find these answers is keep reading. 😁
  3. Lee Wilson

    Take Me Chapter 1

    Um, OK. I’m not sure “The End” is quite accurate, not to mention the action/adventure genre. I found it to be a little slow. I was always waiting for something substantial to happen, and just when it did, it’s over.
  4. My parents had a dachshund when I was little.
  5. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 67

    Diego and Steve’s wedding, aka, a night at the improv. Sorry to see it end. But… next summer? Something wrong with next week? Hehe.
  6. That would be typical of me, wouldn’t it?
  7. It is, or was. I’m a weekend night owl.
  8. Thanks much. I might be getting better as I go.
  9. I gotta be me.
  10. Am I predictable?
  11. Classic. Love it Gary!
  12. Lee Wilson

    First Meeting

    Me? Cliffhangers?
  13. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 66

    Please, please, please don’t post it here. 189,000+ characters may crash GA. https://www.dictionary.com/e/longest-words-in-the-world/#
  14. So far 8 chapters more, but 10 won’t be the end. Still lots of ground to cover.
  15. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    I do. WTF!??!??!? Sorry SA. I bailed at the green goblins.
  16. Though whispered; always true.
  17. I will only say it goes. And goes, and goes,
  18. Complicit. Nice word. Not nearly strong enough. What? The coincidences already seen aren’t enough? OK, at least one more. Payback. A very tame word in the world of my villains.
  19. Whether true or not geographically, it is very true inside my head. Precedent already set in at least 2 previous stories, so I don’t think it’s much of a spoiler. Big changes are coming indeed. Glad you’re loving it.
  20. I’ll get to today’s comments a little at a time on yard work breaks. I think your red will tone down some. Again, as I said about the religious aspect, more to come on the abuse, but you will be waiting a bit for both.
  21. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 66

    Well played. You had me fooled. So fooled that even after the disclosure of the nightmare, I was expecting them to be somewhere in Mexico, having taken the kidnapping route themselves that was mentioned a couple chapters ago. But you made it turn out right. And this passage was awesome:
  22. Thanks for the compliment. I hope the rest is just as gripping.
  23. Appreciate the feedback. No doghouse for you.
  24. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    It took a little while to get into the story, but it finally hooked me. Very enjoyable. I do have one nit-picky item. It’s Counselor Troi, not Troy. You never want to tick off a Trekker. We’ll sic the Klingons on you. 😄
  25. Or a really bad way, depending on your perspective. Abel and Kathy will not be thinking it's good.
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