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  1. Lee Wilson
    Except the non-expert who wrote this. What an idiot he is.
  2. Lee Wilson
    Glad you think I handled these items well.
  3. Lee Wilson
    Yep, Greg is a goner until the Epilogue.
  4. Lee Wilson
    I've done that. I felt stupid afterward.
  5. Lee Wilson
    Yeah, I guess it started out lighthearted, when I got going... Sorry about that.
  6. Lee Wilson
    Better start a gofundme.
  7. Lee Wilson
    Let’s hope the reconstruction surgery goes well.
  8. Lee Wilson
    The incubator just gets worse all the time, huh? We shall see about the trial. Saturday and Monday are the targets for the last 2 chapters.
  9. Lee Wilson
    Your wish is my command.
  10. Lee Wilson
    Damn. Forgot to include her freaking out. Well, maybe.
  11. Lee Wilson
    Ain’t that the truth. The good is getting better, the bad being corrected or punished. Just like the real world. Yeah, right!
  12. Lee Wilson
    A very important point. As a parent, something you always want to be true.
  13. Lee Wilson
    I'm thinking maybe the kidnapping would have been interesting. I might just have to add one to a future story. Considering after my next one, the well is currently dry... Have to give it some thought. Evelyn and the POS-rents. Hmmm. Another interesting twist had I thought of it. But their attitudes seem quite opposite, the POSrents doing things with children, Evelyn hating the idea of it.
  14. Lee Wilson
    Still two more chapters to go, and they'll be published before I leave town. I will guarantee that Steve will not stutter at the trial.
  15. Lee Wilson
    If I went that route, I'd have to have Jill nix the idea. Shades of mummy and duddy... Fortunately, I never thought of that. It would have been an interesting twist.
  16. Lee Wilson
    Gotta have a tame one once in a while. But this one is the calm before the storm. Without her apologizing, Steve was friendless, as far as who was already introduced. Couldn't leave it at that. I thought that might be a good touch.
  17. Lee Wilson
    Quite possibly. Believe it or not, I thought of that myself. I have no experience with stuttering or stutterers (other than Randy Bachman.) Just an observation I made while sounding things out for Steve. The lip/teeth thing just occurred to me. I tried to balance that with Ral's attitude. Needed to close that outstanding issue. I didn't want to leave Lanny swinging in the wind. Definitely catered. I'll have to watch the video when I can turn up the sound.
  18. Lee Wilson
    Thanks. All great points.
  19. Lee Wilson
    Um. Yeah, that'd be a good idea.
  20. Lee Wilson
    After the kids all came home from school, Brendan sat them down in the living room to tell them the latest news. They were all prepared to take off from school to testify against their father one of the next two days. "So, I have more news from the courthouse." "Can we guess?" "Sure, if you want to Jill." "Dad copped a plea so he wouldn't get the needle for murder?" "No. Steve, Nick, care to take a guess?" "Some-b-body killed him." "Not that either." "Too
  21. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 31 S2

    Lee Wilson commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 31 S2

    You scared me with But I enjoyed the disruption of the robbery. Art and Brock are rightfully persona non grata to Barry. Personally, I would have no qualms about introducing them to Luella. I'd even go as far as telling their drunk asses she's a rich Aunt and they should treat her nice and maybe they'll get an inheritance.
  22. Lee Wilson
    That.
  23. Lee Wilson
    Medic!!!
  24. Lee Wilson
    I guess we like seeing the bad guys punished. Mr. Keys, definitely a we’ll see.
  25. Lee Wilson
    I turn Siri off first thing when I upgrade. There’s a rare occasion where I’ll rely on speech to text, but otherwise, I don’t talk “to” my phone.
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