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Lee Wilson

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  1. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Thanks for the graphic warning. It could have been worse. Hell, I've done worse myself, right Uncle Marco?
  2. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 27 S2

    One more reason we need a groan emoji. I guess the lake was too small for Devin to transition into the Loch Ness Monster. Maybe an oversized bigfoot? Are alligators afraid of great white sharks? Wait, I know. He could have transitioned into a blue whale and ate the gator.
  3. The killer smiled. News of the latest murder has hit the front page. The cops are still flummoxed. There have been four victims, two male, two female. Four different races are represented: Caucasian, Negro, Hispanic, and the latest, Asian. The only clue mentioned in the article is the fancy hat left behind. The killer is curious. Why aren’t the glove, hairpin, tube of lipstick, or mascara pen mentioned? The killer even wondered aloud, “Why don’t they mention the other clues I leave behind?
  4. Orono, Maine had been panicked by a curious serial killer. The killer always leaves a fancy hat, called a fascinator, at the scene of the crime. The few clues point toward a female perpetrator, which is fairly unusual. As little as 8% up to 17% of serial killers are women. The killing method is always different. The victims apparently have nothing in common. And the only common clue besides the hat is a few strands of hair, likely a woman’s. Other clues indicating a woman killer are left but are as random as the victims. Is the woman who has that hair the suspect, or is it a case of massive misdirection?
  5. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    I think there were two authors. One was definitely Google. Nobody would know all those attractions. Wait! Are they all even real?
  6. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    This shift in gears had me totally lost. First, Nick is sitting in a recliner, the doctor (a different doctor, apparently, not a tree) walks in and calls him Malcom? I then get that Malcom's Nick's husband. But how did Nick get from Alltopia to apparently the real world. He woke up in his home state, but not awake, in a coma. The anonymous pronoun use threw me. Nick was hallucinating, and somehow ended up in a coma. Got it. Next story please.
  7. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    I'm going to have to read this one again. My initial reaction was, HUH? Maybe I skipped a paragraph or something... Another comment will follow if I figure out WTF this was about. I didn't get chris's alternate reality coma from this. Alternate reality, yeah...
  8. Thanks for the feedback. Next one’s looking like a HEA ending.
  9. Nope, that doesn’t hurt at all. Being nineteen makes it okay to do whatever you like.
  10. Thanks. I knew it would hit hard, but like @weinerdog said above, blame it on the evil Lee.
  11. There’s an awesome song by a new favorite duo of mine that uses and brings this statement to life. Another “story” that is too close to the shit that’s happening in the world these days.
  12. You’ll find out in a few days. I need to get a little further ahead first.
  13. Too true. Unfortunately both endings could be possible.
  14. Printed on the inside of the front cover: This is the private journal of Dak Ross. Unless i handed it to you to read, paws off! Monday, April 15: If you’re reading this Uncle Spence or Aunt Claire, please stop. Monday, April 29: Really, Aunt Claire and Uncle Spence. You really, really don’t want to read this. Tuesday, April 23 Aunt-C tried to convince me to go to school today. i wanted to wait around to see if Jamie showed up. She was pretty convincing when she said h
  15. Lee Wilson

    Jamie Is Found

    Actually the wondering will be over tomorrow, Noon, EDT.
  16. Thanks, glad you enjoyed it.
  17. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    A touching story. I have an alternative reason for the envelope, it’s a paid in full construction contract, since the house and garden are still in the mom’s name. Like others have said, anothet chapter would be interesting.
  18. Lee Wilson

    Jamie Is Found

    We’ll have to see if that can be said after the next chapter.
  19. Lee Wilson

    Jamie Is Found

    To be honest, this is/was the alternative ending. The sad ending was my original intent. More on that from me after it’s published.
  20. Lee Wilson

    Jamie Is Found

    Trepidation. Very good emotion in light of what’s coming.
  21. Lee Wilson

    Jamie Is Found

    You won’t need to wonder too long. Targeting Monday morning my time. Sooner if I can swing it.
  22. Lee Wilson

    Jamie Is Found

    Thanks. Happy you liked it.
  23. Lee Wilson

    Jamie Is Found

    I actually considered a link to a previous story in my next one, but couldn’t think how to do it. But you gave me an idea. Gwinnett is a two-year program, offering only associates degrees. At least that’s what I got out of first looking into it.
  24. Lee Wilson

    Jamie Is Found

    I knew this one would be preferred. I’ll post a comment after chapter 2B with a little more of my reasoning.
  25. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 65

    You have amazing restraint. If that happened to me, I’d make a couple phone calls and Ashley would be getting a newspaper tied up around a couple fish. Godfather reference there if anybody missed it.
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