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  1. Lee Wilson
    I think I quoted this song once before, but since it's appropriate: B-b-b-baby, you just ain't seen n-n-n-nothing yet
  2. Lee Wilson
    It's been a while since you got your hands on my early drafts. You been on vacation or something?
  3. Lee Wilson
    Yes, and I bet you can guess who I'll get as your detention monitor. I won't say any names, but kb is a hint.
  4. Lee Wilson
    That's me; Roller Coaster Tycoon.
  5. Lee Wilson
    Well, there is indeed more to the story. I'm on chapter 9 with no end in sight. 😁
  6. Lee Wilson
    It's still a way away, and not to spoil anything at all, but the South Carolina connection will come back up at some point. For your last sentence, all we have to do is wait, I guess.
  7. Lee Wilson
    Thanks, but I think we've passed from coincidence to reality. Hehe. There will be more on Nick's two-day journey in a later chapter to help explain some of the coincidences.
  8. Lee Wilson
    Saturday Brendan woke up before Nick the next morning. Nick was lying on the couch and the blanket was on the floor. The T-shirt rode up a little, but Nick was still covered down to his upper thighs. Brendan was thankful for that, especially after Nick's disclosure from his visit to Burger King. He put the blanket back over Nick and went into the kitchen to put on some coffee and start breakfast. During the week he normally only had toast or a bagel, but on the weekends, he liked a little m
  9. Lee Wilson
    Glad you are liking it so far.
  10. Lee Wilson
    I believe the authorities will have everything under control.
  11. Lee Wilson
    Imagine that, me, writing an uplifting story. At least partially.
  12. Lee Wilson
    I’m still figuring out how to play the religious nutjob angle. Obviously a little foreshadowing with Nick asking Brendan to say grace. I’m sure I’ll get there. No teeth involved yet, but we’ll see.
  13. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Lee Wilson commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Chapter 1

    @weinerdog, why did you hijack @kbois' GA account?
  14. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 1

    Lee Wilson commented on Jason Rimbaud's story chapter in Chapter 1

    Maybe it's me, but I think his so-called "friends" went a little too far with the antagonizing. If I were Jason, I would have left before most of what was said, was said. Otherwise, it was a good story.
  15. Lee Wilson
    Not all my protagonists are partial assholes.
  16. Lee Wilson
    That mirror may turn into one of the funhouse variety in a few chapters.
  17. Lee Wilson
    Hmmm. Maybe you'll be right.
  18. Lee Wilson
    Yeah, I tried to make it look like CPS was uncooperative and even going to the police might not have been ideal. That, and like you said, it'd be less interesting. Like I mentioned above, more detail is forthcoming.
  19. Lee Wilson
    Thanks. Yeah, the kid's had it rough. You'll find out more. Brendan is a nice guy. I'm reminded of a Beatle's song, 'The Long and Winding Road.'
  20. Lee Wilson
    I'm hoping it will be enjoyable. Some serious tones, but no 'Rocked to the Core' moments.
  21. Lee Wilson
    Friday Brendan Nelson knew he should have stopped at the pizza place closer to home. 'Ten minutes isn't too far, the food won't get cold,' he had thought. Well, that would have been true if there wasn't an accident. An hour later, the seafood alfredo was as cold as it was in his car, A/C turned up high. The salad was probably wilted. Brendan grabbed the food and his briefcase and dragged his ass through the ninety-six-degree weather toward the door. He was halfway there before he looked up
  22. Lee Wilson
    Prompt #385 – Brendan Nelson had a tough week at work. He is a Project Manager at a small software company. Nothing went well on his current project. The last delivery to QA (Quality Assurance) was a total failure, the techs couldn't even install it. Add to that, a serious problem in the development of a new feature arose. Finally, on top of that, the customer was screaming about a bug that hadn't been fixed for months, and now it apparently crashed the system. As if things weren't bad at work, he had to come home to a surprise.
  23. Lee Wilson
    I didn’t feel like getting skewered again.
  24. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 27 S2

    Lee Wilson commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 27 S2

    That made me look this fact up. Apparently, a sperm whale could conceivably swallow a person, but they wouldn't last long inside.
  25. Lee Wilson

    Chapter 27 S2

    Lee Wilson commented on Bill W's story chapter in Chapter 27 S2

    Wow. Never knew that. Jonah must have been an awfully tiny man.
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